Reviews For While You Were Sleeping
Reviewer: aerialla Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2006 - 10:27 am Title: Chapter 1
Date: 09/12/2006 - 10:27 am Title: Chapter 1
More of this story please, I can not wait for an update.
Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2006 - 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
Date: 09/10/2006 - 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
Good start though it is very sad at the moment. :)
Reviewer: MARGARET Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2006 - 05:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
Date: 09/10/2006 - 05:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
VERY BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN, CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE
Reviewer: Slaymuch Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2006 - 01:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
Date: 09/10/2006 - 01:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
So Sad....I like it! Great Start. I hope that you'l continue to write this. Update soon okay :-)
Reviewer: rosie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2006 - 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
Date: 09/10/2006 - 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
cant wait to see what happens next!!!!!!
Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2006 - 04:41 am Title: Chapter 1
Date: 09/10/2006 - 04:41 am Title: Chapter 1
I was intrigued by the title, because I liked the movie of the same name, and I liked your summary. It is a very promising first attempt and first chapter. I don't know if this is beta'd or not, but there are just a few typos and gender confusion of pronouns that would make it looked a little more polished if tweaked. Great job-- keep those chapters coming!
Reviewer: spikesangel Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2006 - 01:39 am Title: Chapter 1
Date: 09/10/2006 - 01:39 am Title: Chapter 1
that is VERY heart wrenching. more please!