Reviews For Nice To Naughty
Reviewer: annefan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2006 - 02:23 pm Title: Chapter 2
Date: 12/05/2006 - 02:23 pm Title: Chapter 2
haha that was fun, cant wait for more!
Reviewer: PennyDrdful Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2006 - 02:10 pm Title: Chapter 2
Date: 12/05/2006 - 02:10 pm Title: Chapter 2
Yay, for the mousy secretary make-over plot device. All the descriptive details you put into this chapter on her physical appearance and dress are great for visuals and appropriate plot-wise since is the couple of days into her big make-over. I do feel that your sentences could benefit from some tightening up, however.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Reviewer: kristie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2006 - 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 2
Date: 12/05/2006 - 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 2
yay! aww I can't wait for more!!
update soon! :) x
Reviewer: Kim Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2006 - 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 2
Date: 12/05/2006 - 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 2
I just wanted to let you know how much I am enjoying this story. I can't wait for more.