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Reviewer: Ula Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2007 - 04:06 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six

I thought it was so sweet he wanted the perfect ring to symbolize his love for her and searched until he got it right. It will be heart breaking for him to find her gone and I fear he will blame himself.

I'm begging for more after the ending of this page

PLEASE!

Reviewer: Naomi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2007 - 02:21 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six

Nooo! Oh please update as soon as you can please!

Reviewer: Naomi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2007 - 02:21 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six

Nooo! Oh please update as soon as you can please!

Reviewer: doRaExPlorDer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2007 - 01:27 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six

This is getting hot in the storyline where I do not know what will happen next but I am dying to know!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2007 - 01:11 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six

I’m on such an emotional rollercoaster whenever you update this story: first, when I see the update I almost start jumping up and down, I’m so happy; and then when I actually read it I want to cry! Thank you for the update though :) (this is one of the few stories I keep up with—usually I wait to read them until they are finished).

I’m not sure if you mentioned this before, but I’m really curious to see how you will structure the rest of this story (I think I remember you mentioning somewhere that it will have at least 3 parts?): are we going to see William/Spike and Buffy on their separate journeys first (I feel so heartbroken for William!), or will we return to “the present” right away and see the relationship between William+Elizabeth transform to the relationship between Spike+Buffy.


Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback, Anna. I really appreciate it. :) In regards to your question, yes, the story will be at least three parts (probably four, considering how my mental outline is going). We won't see Buffy right away, which I'm afraid might discourage some readers. Still, this story is and will remain a romance at heart. Part Two will be just as romantic as Part One, although it will have a decidely different tone. I hope you continue to enjoy the plot and, again, thanks for the review.

Reviewer: sue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2007 - 08:05 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Six

Poignant. Tender. Heartfelt.

Heartbreaking.

Great, great story.

Reviewer: jenni Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2007 - 08:00 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Six

oh my god! nooooooo poor william. I've been waiting for this chapter to happen!!! poor buffy and william. Looking forward to the buffy and spike interaction now! love this story so much! more more more please! x

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2007 - 07:56 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Six

Oh no she's gone. William is going to be - well I don't think I have words to describe how he's going to be. Don't think Buffy's going to be to chipper either. Bet Spike's still got the ring though - not sure where that came from but I just think the romantic in him would keep it. Great great great (but very sad) update.

Reviewer: jamies_lady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2007 - 06:51 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Six

poor Buffy and poor William he's going to be devestated. looking forward to the next bit

Reviewer: chris Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2007 - 06:47 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Six

Oh no !! It looks like Williams nightmare may have come true :(

Reviewer: squawks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2007 - 06:43 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Six

NONONONONOONONO EVILEVILEVILEVILEVILEVIL


see, you've broken my brain! its all mush!! oh god i knew this time would come....okay, calmed down now.

let me tell you how much i love this story - at work today i sneakily logged on and saw that it had been updated but didn;t read it because i didn't want to have to do it in a rush, so i struggled through work, went to the gym and cut my workout down by a half hour cos i just had to rush home and read it...

yes, either this story is insanely magnificent or im just sadly obsessed. Both i think.

anyway, back to the review. What a fantastic update - this is one of the 2 stories i actually check to see if its been updated - and now i'm gonna be going out of my mind until the next one!!!!!!!!!!!!!! oooohh please soon.

sorry about the psycho review, suffice to say i love this story.

great update, great writing as usual. Thanks!!!!! : )

Reviewer: ella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2007 - 06:12 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Six

Oh no!!! That was so tragic! Please, update soon!

Reviewer: akarinacj Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2007 - 05:42 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Six

Aww, Aww.... Now, you´re making me cry... That was so sad... Is she going back to the future, leaving William alone????
The chapter was so nice and tender, with their interacting, You really potrait William as I think he would have been.... I don´t dare to imagine how he´s going to react when he finds out Buffy is missing.... Please update soon!!!!!!!

Reviewer: VICTORIA Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2007 - 05:25 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Six

Your writing is achingly smooth, seamless, beautiful. Even though I suspected that she would disappear in this chapter, being slightly prepared didn't stop my heart from breaking when it happened. Thinking of the affect that this will have on William is almost unbearable. I look forward to what I'm sure will be a well written but ultimately painful next chapter. Sigh.

Reviewer: Taylormaid Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2007 - 05:15 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Six

Oh noooooooo!! What happens now?!!! The waiting is torture!!! PLEASE PLEASE update soon!!!!!!

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2007 - 04:55 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Six

NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! SHE CANT LEAVE, NOT NOW, HES FINALLY GOT THE RING!!!!!!! damnit your evil to leave it at that. i love this story so much and am so glad that u updated. i cant believe that shes leaving now, after they have finally found love. i really really really hope that spike has williams memories of her and that he he goes to her and that they get together. i really hope that everything works out well and that spike and buffy get together now that she cant be with william. PLEASE update as soon as u can, im DYING!!!! to read the next chapter and see wat happens next. thanx

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2007 - 04:44 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Six

Darn! Just when things were going so well, fate steps in and plays with Buffy's happiness. Just when she got her wish to have a relationship with a man and be a normal girl, she is only to have a brief taste of it. Good reading, really am enjoying this story, looking forward to more.

Reviewer: jenny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2007 - 04:27 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Six

you are truly diabolical!!! i can't believe you left with a cliffhanger like that!!!
please update soon? i'm dying to know how it concludes to the ending!!! i love it!

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2007 - 04:20 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Six

I KNEW IT! I KNEW THIS WAS GOING TO BE THE CHAPTER THAT SHE WAS PULLED BACK! Oh no. OH no! Oh NO!!!! We need more now. Oh PLEASE we need more now! I am hopelessly addicted to this fic of yours, this AMAZING fic of yours! Definitely the best "Buffy goes back in time and meets William" fic I have read-- and I have a feeling what's going to happen when William finds out that Buffy's disappeared.... Oh more. More PLEASE!!!

Reviewer: CutieSaiyajin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2007 - 04:07 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Six

OH. MY. GOD. *wails*

Author's Response: Sorry. But it had to be this way. :(

Reviewer: blax Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2007 - 03:48 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Six

oh no :(
no no no. this is so not happening.
tell me its not happening... denial-land is such a nice place to live in...

Reviewer: anon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2007 - 03:32 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Six

oh noooooo! cruel woman, you'd best post the next chapter soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: toni Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2007 - 03:05 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Six

I can't wait for the next part...I really don't want this to ever end though.

Reviewer: ochit duzon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2007 - 02:51 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Six

Oh my god! I cant stand this! Their's is the perfect love setting for William and Buffy. I dont think William would be able to survive her loss. Pease update very soon. I am dying to know what comes next. Honestly i am hoping that Buffy would be able to find a way to stay there forever far from the madding crowd.

Reviewer: bluebird Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2007 - 02:48 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Six

Oh my God! Willam is going to have a fit! I wish she could have gotten her ring! Can't wait to see what happens next - please write more soon! I love your story!

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