Date: 05/29/2005 - 08:50 pm Title: Just Like Clockwork
It didn't suck at all, i enjoyed it alot, despite my mental cheerleading for them to just forget about rationality and make with the happy spuffyness, i liked that buffy was all with the need to think it through.. I am however dying for them to futher wake up and smell the we're so in loooove coffee. Update soon, take care, good job,
Author's Response: we're so in loooove coffee...lol nice way to put it =D it'll probably happen soon, I'm just having fun putting them in awkward situations *grin* thanks for the review!
Date: 05/29/2005 - 08:48 pm Title: Just Like Clockwork
don't suck......it was a chapter of awakening........now lets see how they handle being friends........and realize it's really some thing more.......
Author's Response: But will they? *evil scary music* lol kidding....well, mostly. because that's what lots of people are saying so I may have to, you know, switch things around a bit...
Date: 05/29/2005 - 08:12 pm Title: Just Like Clockwork
Its cute.... Getting the feelings out in the open so the relationship can grow.. I like it. It's fluffy.
Author's Response: yeah for some reason I just can't write angst lately =D glad you like it!
Date: 05/29/2005 - 08:06 pm Title: Just Like Clockwork
No suckage here, believe, me!
Wonderful chapter. I hope that Buffy realizes that friends is the last thing her and Spike should be, tee hee.
Luv, Spuf
Author's Response: nah, I thought I'd keep it friendly Spuffy for the rest of the fic...lol kidding =D it'll happen sometimes...cuz we all know they're just kidding themselves. thanks for the review!
Date: 05/28/2005 - 07:15 am Title: The Eleventh Commandment, Or Something
good update cant wait for spikes reaction
Author's Response: *grin* yeah, it'll be fun. thanks for reviewing!
Date: 05/28/2005 - 12:24 am Title: The Eleventh Commandment, Or Something
Great update! I can't go check out your LJ this weekend, cause I'm super busy, but next week, I guarantee that I'll have a look! Please update soon, & take care, C ; )
Author's Response: lol it's cool, when i get excited about something I can be reeeally pushy--wait, no, i'm pushy all the time =D glad you liked it and thanks for reviewing!
Date: 05/27/2005 - 10:16 pm Title: The Eleventh Commandment, Or Something
wonderful update. California fried..so thats what i looked like with bleached hair lol. That made me lol. So Spike will eat his heart out huh? I bet he literally would before admitting it looks nice. I still cant wait for both sets of parents to get whats coming to them, grrrr i hate them, Im pysched to see what activity he takes up.... Cant wait for more, please update soon, Ill check out the other site your pluggin if its soon :)...well i will anyways lol, great job again!
Author's Response: glad you liked it =D the California fried thing was inspired by the girls at school *cough cough cheerleaders cough cough* who dye perfectly good hair obscene colors...I'm a natural blonde, tho, so I can poke fun at the un-natural ones to my heart's content =) thanks for reviewing again, hope you enjoy the site...and as for the activity, I toyed with sticking Spike in a cheerleader uniform for real, but don't worry, I've got a better idea... and w/ the him dying before admitting it looks nice thing--oh, yeah. that's part of the fun =D
Date: 05/27/2005 - 09:09 pm Title: The Eleventh Commandment, Or Something
I love it when Anya lets out information about Spike having the hots for Buffy..and how in the world does Buffy keep missing it! LOL
Author's Response: well, like Willow said, "Buffy? Nice girl, not too bright." lol kidding, they're both rather dense, I think it's a high school thing =D thanks for reviewing again!
Date: 05/27/2005 - 08:51 pm Title: The Eleventh Commandment, Or Something
LOL!! Riley is Spike's father! I love it, too funny!!!
Author's Response: thanks =) I got that idea before I started writing this fic and I figured I could crack myself up writing about it...turns out I was right, hehe. glad you think it's funny, too =D
Date: 05/27/2005 - 08:39 pm Title: The Eleventh Commandment, Or Something
Hilarious!
I love the Maggie/Riley thing!
Buffy is really rushing right into Spuffy, isn't she. With the hair and all?
Tee hee.
Luv, Spuf
Author's Response: I want to show that Buffy's changing from "LA Buffy" to "Sunnydale Buffy" in terms of attitude and looks...plus, I can only put up w/ that hair she had for so long =) thanks for reviewing! Glad you liked the Maggie/Riley thing, I actually cracked myself up writing it...
Date: 05/27/2005 - 07:43 pm Title: The Eleventh Commandment, Or Something
awesome chapter. cant wait to see what spikes reaction is. haha loved spike telling his parents that he would be a cheerleader. and wow i cant believe his parents r riley n maggie. wow good choice. awesome job. cant wait for more.
Author's Response: but will he actually try out for the squad? lol kiding glad you liked it. also thanks for noticing the parent choice... I always thought riley deserved to be stuck with that woman, so in this fic, I'm having *lots* of fun with it =) thanks for reviewing!
Date: 05/26/2005 - 08:29 pm Title: Not Exactly World-Shaking
keep up the good work and keep up with the updates! love ya stories :)
Author's Response: thanks lots =) It's always nice to have ppl say they like what I write...guess we're all gluttons for praise at heart =)
Date: 05/26/2005 - 08:16 pm Title: Not Exactly World-Shaking
yay 4 u more plz!
Author's Response: more is on the way as fast as I can type =) thanks for reviewing!
Date: 05/26/2005 - 07:27 am Title: Not Exactly World-Shaking
good update and glad they kissed
Author's Response: yeah me too =) thanks for the review!
Date: 05/26/2005 - 01:12 am Title: Not Exactly World-Shaking
buffy should have punched harmony that would have been funny. love the story please update soon thanx.
Author's Response: lol yes it would have =) thanks for the review!
Date: 05/25/2005 - 10:15 pm Title: Not Exactly World-Shaking
yay what a great update. how romantic :I hate you, sigh, i wish every guy was like Spike lol. Pretty good sum up to how they where in the show though lol. Cant wait for more and i so hope Harm gets the shit kicked out of her soon!!!
Author's Response: if every guy was like Spike... *eyes glaze over* lol, there will be Harmony or Joyce or Hank or Dawn or maybe all of the above ass-kicking sometime =)
Date: 05/25/2005 - 08:26 pm Title: Not Exactly World-Shaking
Great update, im dying for those two to stop being so pig headed and sjut realize they luurve each other. i can never figure out how to work live journal, i should set one up though, they seem amusing. Take care
Author's Response: they are amusing, if you have the patience to click a bunch of buttons and see which one works =) thanks for reviewing once again, and yes, the pig-headedness will stop soon =)
Date: 05/25/2005 - 07:21 pm Title: No Bloody Way
Excellent story. I'm enjoying it very much, please update soon! :-)
Author's Response: just updates, thanks so much for reviewing!
Date: 05/25/2005 - 06:43 pm Title: Not Exactly World-Shaking
Great chapter! Can't wait for more, as usual, so please update soon! Take care, C ; )
Author's Response: I'll try to update as soon as possible. My granfather's ehre so comp. time is limited. Thanks for reviewing, it's good to know you're eager for more =)
Date: 05/25/2005 - 04:55 pm Title: Not Exactly World-Shaking
Great job with this story! Love all the building sexual tension between buffy and spike - much like the show, lol. Can't wait to read more :)
Author's Response: I try to draw parallels with the show, that's what we're all building off of, even in AUs =) It's awesome you think I'm doing a good job, thanks for reviewing!
Date: 05/25/2005 - 04:13 pm Title: Not Exactly World-Shaking
Great chapter--and I left you a comment on your LJ
Author's Response: I noticed--thanks for both! It's always good to know people enjoy what I write =)
Date: 05/25/2005 - 02:21 pm Title: Not Exactly World-Shaking
Ooooohhh, I got all tingly too!
Luv, Spuf
Author's Response: yay, tingles =) thanks for the review!
Date: 05/25/2005 - 01:43 pm Title: Not Exactly World-Shaking
Well I for one am glad you're out and can update! I want more, its really heating up and I so want to know what Anya was going to say in teh last chapter! More please!!
Author's Response: you'll find out what Anya was gonna say eventually. I'm so glad you like it, enthusiastic reviews are the best =)
Date: 05/25/2005 - 01:01 pm Title: Not Exactly World-Shaking
I love this story. Spike and Buffy are so funny together. I just laugh so much when I read your chapters. That whole thing about "mixy-people" and the scene with Harmony---perfect.
Author's Response: awww, thanks so much =) Glad you liked the mixy-people thing--it was just a random thought I had in Geometry and I was like "oooh, I have to put that in!"
Date: 05/25/2005 - 12:38 pm Title: Not Exactly World-Shaking
Ah, yes... the kiss.
Author's Response: lol I'm guessing you liked it then =)
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