Date: 06/10/2005 - 05:47 am Title: They did the monster mash/ Graveyard smash
awww that was so cute. i loved that thar u had this chapter and that u picked those costumes for them to turn into. also i loved that spike cliamed buffy and that wen the were back to normal she was happy about it. i love this story and am so happy that u updated.im sry i havent read and reviewed for a while i had finals but there over now. please update as soon as u can, i cant wait to see wat happens next and read more thanx
Author's Response: Thank you so very much. I laughed when i picked their costumes, certain lines popped into my head the second i chose them lol. I didnt want Buffy mad at the claim because even though he scarred her it was a true love vow of sorts in a vampires view, ya know? I hope you did well on your finals :) I just appreciate the fact that you review at all, it means a lot! Thanx again!XXX
Date: 06/10/2005 - 04:35 am Title: They did the monster mash/ Graveyard smash
lol! i loved it! i love giles getting into bed with the little pellets at the end!!!
Author's Response: Thanx so much, i even laughed when i wrote him sitting on her 'leftovers' lol so its good to know it wasnt one of those things only i found funny :) Thanx for the review!!!
Date: 06/10/2005 - 03:13 am Title: They did the monster mash/ Graveyard smash
*Nods head gravely* This is of course what happens when large groups of people do the jitter bug! It happens time and time again and severe identity crisis is always the end result. …..Let this be a warning to all who believe this dance is safe for general entertainment use. Appearances can be deceiving but when combined with the powers of swing music, these same appearances can take dominant form!!..... Phew, now that I’ve gotten that off my chest, fabulous chapter hun!! Hehe…and how compelling is Spike in all his mysterious dark sensuality?! Yumm! This was indeed one of your funnier twists!! I absolutely adored the added bonus of Anya’s rabbit transformation in the leaving of a wee present for Giles to return home to!! I got quite the ab workout dying from laughter!! *smooches* it’s awesome!! xxx
Author's Response: Thanx so much Shan i can always count on your op to make me feel better lol! The jitterbug should be banned everywhere lol. I cracked up writing the Anya/present for Giles thing lol. Thanx for lifting my spirits so much, love ya!!!
Date: 06/10/2005 - 01:34 am Title: They did the monster mash/ Graveyard smash
Great chapter. Can't wait for more, so please update as soon as you can. Take care, C ; )
Author's Response: Thank you Caitie and i will :)
Date: 06/09/2005 - 11:38 pm Title: They did the mash.....
Oooh…hot stud on the rampage, catching knowing glances and breaking hearts as all the girls realize he has his sights only for a lovely mademoiselle in billowing red. Hehe…I love it!! I can practically see William’s & Buffy’s equally stunned expressions as they fully appreciate each others new look! Hehe…and classic Anya with the mortifying bunny getup and Andrew too in all his wookie glory! Can’t wait to read more!! xxx
Author's Response: Thanx Shan, glad you liked it. They def like the way they look but how couldnt they. Theyre both hot lol. I hope you like the next one, love ya!xxx
Date: 06/09/2005 - 08:34 pm Title: They did the mash.....
I haven't been able to review in a while.
I just now got caught up on the story and it's very, very good.
I like the way you're working the whole chaos spell into this and explaining alot of things in the meantime.
Luv, Spuf
Author's Response: Sokay im just happy to see your enjoying it. Thanx so much for the kind words, it means a lot that you reviewed!!!xxx Linz
Date: 06/09/2005 - 02:00 pm Title: They did the mash.....
Grade A eye candy--I can't think of a better description for Spike. I think I might of drooled a little while I was reading it. I loved this chappie and I really think it works well dividing it into two parts. That having been said...post the second NOW!! lol Just kidding ***sighs*** I will be a good reader and wait patiently:) I am silently dreading the whole turning thing. Buffy will be so heartbroken.
Author's Response: Lol wow, thanx for the amazing review. It made my day when i got off work and came home to see it!!! I drooled while writing lol so no worries :) Well i just posted the second part and i hope its okay.....hope you like it :)
xxx Linz
Date: 06/09/2005 - 12:01 pm Title: They did the mash.....
wowza. that rocked.
althoguh.. I'm nto sure you actually mentioned that Oz's name tag says God. you most likely did, but I don't remember seeing it.
Author's Response: EEp i didnt and thanx for pointing that out i just went and fixed it. I never would have noticed that, you have my eternal gratitude :). Thanx so much for the kind words, i hope you like the 2nd part :)xxx
Date: 06/09/2005 - 10:03 am Title: They did the mash.....
sooo cant wait for the next bit huni :D LOL go 'spike'
Author's Response: Thanx so much Aisling.. Mmmmm 'Spike', hope you like the next chap!XXX
Date: 06/09/2005 - 05:59 am Title: They did the mash.....
Wow great story!! waiting for more!!
Author's Response: Thanx so much, im gonna try to post again tonight, so glad you like it so far!XXX
Date: 06/09/2005 - 03:39 am Title: They did the mash.....
i loved. keep up the great work.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, i love hearing that people like it, makes my days/nights :)
Date: 06/09/2005 - 03:07 am Title: They did the mash.....
Great chapter - loved how Buffy didn't recognize William at first, it was cute, and also how Buffy named william Spike, at least for the night - very drole. I'm not a Star Wars geek, but I have seen the movies, and in case you want to know, Chubacca isn't the name of the species, it's just the name ifof a character . . . don't know if you care, but I thought I'd let you know anyhow. . . Can't wait for more, so please update as soon as you can. Take care, C ; )
Author's Response: Thanx Caitie glad you liked it. I do care and i dont lol. Its really just a lil throw in for laughs but ill try to fix it up. If i was writing Star Wars fanfictions id be in deep trouble but thankfully everyone seems ok with my mess ups (as long as i dont commit a hanous Spuffy crime i should be ok lol). Thanx again xxx
Date: 06/09/2005 - 02:30 am Title: They did the mash.....
I looooove this story!!!
Though you kinda messed up with the Chewbacca thing. Sorry but I'm such a geek about Star Wars but Chewbacca speaks Wookie. So its one and the same.
But I like the way this is headed though its gonna be sad when William becomes a vampire.
So keep up the good work. I'll keep coming back.
Author's Response: Thanx so much and i knew that i would screw up the whole star wars thing which is why i posted my complete lack of knowledge of it in the chap lol. Its really just in their for some small kicks but ill go and fix it (or try too lol) Thanx so much for the review and im so happy your gonna keep reading despite my Star Wars blasphemy :) xxx
Date: 06/09/2005 - 01:51 am Title: They did the mash.....
So...this where Spike gets turned? Very cool how you incorporated his new loook and new nickname into this chapter. Can't wait for more!! :)
Author's Response: No he gets turned a little later, this is just for halloween. I want him and Buffy to make love before he dies....sappy i know but i want it (pouts)lol. Thanx for the review very much :)
Date: 06/09/2005 - 12:03 am Title: They did the mash.....
more! love it!
Author's Response: Ill post again asap and thanx so much!!!
Date: 06/08/2005 - 11:59 pm Title: They did the mash.....
Ohh Williams a vampire for Halloween and Ethans around cool.....and now youve got that song stuck in my head :(
Author's Response: Sorry bout the song, if it helps its been in my head for days now lol, thanx so much for the review!!!
Date: 06/08/2005 - 08:19 pm Title: Getting ready to party
just as it was bout to get juicy as well.
just wondering, do you type this onto Word? coz theres a few mistakes. no worries, just gets a bit annoying coz I am like.. a perfectionist with capital letters. but i
Author's Response: Lol thanx for pointing out the capital thing, i do type on word but truthfully i type pretty late so i probably miss some things. Ill keep an eye out for it though, thanx for the tip. I think your review kinda got cut off so i dont know how to respond. On the chance that it was to say your enjoying it ill say thanx and if not, thanx anyway for the review :)
Date: 06/08/2005 - 08:08 pm Title: Getting ready to party
Awwww…his going over just to sleep with her was sooo cute I’m almost gushing! There’s just such a huge comfort in sleeping next to someone you love. It’s so completely reassuring to drift off to sleep in that state. Hehe…I love this chap! Muhahaha…and I have a feeling I’m going to enjoy the Halloween special even more! Lol..I can’t wait to see what dark twists arise in it next! Love it to bits!! xxx
Author's Response: I know, all boyfriends should come over just to snuggle, it would be great.....as long as the snuggling was in actuality foreplay lol! Im off to write the next chap so i hope you like it. Thanx Shan!xxx
Date: 06/08/2005 - 01:40 pm Title: Getting ready to party
I have a feeling this story is gonna make me cry...with that whole 'she loves to hear his heart' thing. Well I really love this story. Sorry I haven't had time to post a review before, I've been reading since the beginning.
Author's Response: Well thanx for taking the time with this chap, im glad to hear youve been following and enjoying, means a lot!!! In a weird way i hope you cry, because that means ive made the characters believable ya know? I dont mean it in the sense that i would think its funny!!!! Thatnx so much for the review and i hope you like the next chap!xxx
Date: 06/08/2005 - 06:48 am Title: Getting ready to party
loved it
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 06/08/2005 - 06:10 am Title: Getting ready to party
Awww that ending is sooo fluffy! *sqeees it* LOL :P more soon i cant wait for the havok to ensue! :P
Author's Response: thanx so much Aisling, so happy you liked it. I hope you like the next chap too, im trying to go for all out whackyness lol. Thanx for the kind words!!!xxx
Date: 06/08/2005 - 04:50 am Title: Getting ready to party
Me Gusta!!!! Muy Bueno! :0) Ok emglish time. I really liked it. And I cant wait for the update
Author's Response: Gracias :) Thanx so much im so happy to hear your enjoying it~
i hope you like the next chap coming soon!!!xxx
Date: 06/08/2005 - 02:41 am Title: Getting ready to party
why did that last part make me think that something bad is gonna happen. i mean, know something bad is gonna happen but i just hope it's not in the next couple of chapters. please PLEASE let them enjoy their happiness for a little while longer. keep up the great work. love this story
Author's Response: Well halloween hijinx will ensue but all will end well. The bad wont happen yet.....i have a few more chaps to do before hes turned, so more spuffyness on the way....or is it Wuffyness lol? Thanx so much for the review
xxx
Date: 06/08/2005 - 01:41 am Title: Getting ready to party
Super intriguing chapter, what with Ethan, the costumes, and the lot! Can't wait for the next chapter, so please post it as soon as you can. Take care, C ; )
Author's Response: I will post asap and thanx so much Caitie! Im so gonna have a blast with Andrews Chewbacca costume, i have the perfect line for him once he becomes him lol!Take care too!xxx
Date: 06/08/2005 - 01:29 am Title: Getting ready to party
Me thinks, she's going to be very upset when she cna't hear his heart anymore :( Still loving this!
Author's Response: She will and im glad you caight that part, it will be brought up when hes turned later on!!!Thanx so much for the review!xxx
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