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Reviewer: Opal Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2005 - 11:26 pm Title: Rock Bottom

Another awesome update! Can't wait to find out if Spike finds out about the baby!

Reviewer: Raven Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2005 - 10:13 pm Title: Rock Bottom

Oh my gosh. . . that was so sad! I just can't believe. . . I never expected that to happen! I can't believe she was pregnant! Oh God, that's horrible! Wow! I wonder how Spike will react! Please, please, please update as soon as you can! I can't wait to see what happens next! Thanx! ~Raven~

Reviewer: Brittany Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2005 - 10:00 pm Title: Rock Bottom

AWWWW omg i almost cried!!!! please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2005 - 09:44 pm Title: Rock Bottom

Oh my...Giles is failing agian....I'm about to report his ass to the man in charge, LOL.....after something like that...Butty would need those mandatory sessions with Tara for a release to return to work especially after losing a baby on the job......with getting her ass kicked so bad. and if that was 5 min of kick ass, they must have been fighing in the matrix, LOL....cause you did a great job of about 15 to min of butt kicking......still not long enough for rescue....and me I wasn't looking for Spike to rescue her...but I do wonder his motive in meeting her in such a public way knowing Angel would having her followed......and how he'd react to them meeting so intimately......I hate to asked, cause I'm assuming it will be answered in the next chapter...but who is the father of Buffy's baby and she must have been no far along to have not noticed the warning signs her birthcontrol didn't work.....sad twist you but here.....for Buffy has a very hard road to travel now, for she will be seeking revenge on the man that killed her baby and facing the guilt of she put her baby in harms way.......very wicked twist you put here.....and if Spike questions, if she tells him, about the baby I wouldn't blame him.........she didn't set a very good foundation for him on her work ethics, (ducks and hids) You've done a great job on this one.....keep up the great work......

Reviewer: bluebird Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2005 - 09:27 pm Title: Rock Bottom

Will you please explain why Spike didn't / hasn't contacted her in any way? Does he know it was HIS fault as well as Gile's that she was hurt! If Angelus had not seen Spike he wouldn't have hurt Buffy. Why didn't she just say that she had met Spike at an art showing and he had taken her to dinner. He wanted more but she told him NO because she was afraid of him. Angelus might have excepted that. Is Giles ever going to tell her he told Spike where she was? This chapter just left toooo many questions! Please write more soon! I love your story! Thanks!

Reviewer: Wikka Tara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2005 - 09:12 pm Title: Rock Bottom

Great update! Please update soon!!!

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2005 - 09:06 pm Title: Rock Bottom

Oh no! That's so sad. To lose a baby you didn't even know you had...just horrible. Please make the next chapter happier.

Reviewer: H Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2005 - 08:53 pm Title: Rock Bottom

Ok, just please tell me Spike is going to find out about the baby?....ANd shouldn't he feel a bit responsible since Angelus won't have freked if she hadn't been with Spike? And, ok....not to criticize, because I worship @ the AShlee alter, but......I'm having a hard time believing that Spike wouldn't come & see her if her knew she was that badly hurt. MORE PLEASE! I am desperately ADDICTED to this fic:) Kisses! H:)

Reviewer: Caitie Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2005 - 08:15 pm Title: Rock Bottom

Great chapter - although poor Buffy!!! Can't waiot for more, so please update soon! Take care, C ; )

Reviewer: spuffette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2005 - 08:03 pm Title: Rock Bottom

Oooh, I hope Spike kicks Angel's stupid ass! Poor Buffy. Still, I'm hoping that perhaps Giles might slip up and tell Spike about the baby?? Just to 'encourage' Spike to get revenge on Angel! spuf

Reviewer: jenny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2005 - 07:34 pm Title: Rock Bottom

i love this story and i can't wait to see what happens to angelus once spike gets a hold of him not to mention the whole miscarriage. that has got to suck, to find out that way. i love it, please continue updating, i can't wait to see what happens when spike gets wind of what happened. I LOVED THIS STORY, STILL DO.!!!

Reviewer: baby spikes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2005 - 07:16 pm Title: Rock Bottom

omg... *tear tear*... so sad... poor buffy god... well can't wait for more

Reviewer: DK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2005 - 06:06 pm Title: Rock Bottom

You really caught me off guard about the baby. What will happen when Spike finds out, not good for Angel. Other than that great chapter.

Reviewer: Franchesca Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2005 - 05:59 pm Title: Rock Bottom

Another.. omigod... out of nowhere thing. How sad. And oh this is awful. I hope Spike comes back into the picture shortly.

Reviewer: PK_ Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2005 - 05:58 pm Title: Rock Bottom

whoa, curve ball there. Pregnant? That's a shocker, never saw it coming....wow. Excellent chapter once again.

Reviewer: Whitelighter354 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2005 - 05:18 pm Title: Rock Bottom

Great chapter! That is so sad! She was going to have a baby! It was spikes right? I wonder who sent the flowers! I hope she tells Spike ALL of this and confesses her undying love for him! Please update soon! :) dell

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2005 - 05:11 pm Title: Rock Bottom

So the police came to get Buffy out - but Angel is gone. Oh my - poor Buffy... she was pregnant and lost the baby. And what a way to find out about it. So in a way Angelus has the blood of another life on his hands.

Reviewer: spuffette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2005 - 04:59 pm Title: Rock Bottom

Oh, Ashlee... It's so sad about the baby. I have been wondering, don't tell me if you don't want to...did Spike tell Angelus? Did Ethan Rayne? If Spike did it, I hope he finds out the lost baby and it tears him to shreds. I'm a little peeved at our Spikey right now. Intense, wonderful chapter. Please, update soon! spuf

Author's Response: No, Spike hates Angel, so he didn't tell him. And Ethan's actually pretty harmless in this fic. Just a case of bad luck for Buffy. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Liz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2005 - 01:13 pm Title: Why We Fight

Ashlee- Loving this story. I can't believe you had him beat her up. And yet, I can. Can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks again. -Liz

Reviewer: Mockerfab4 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2005 - 12:43 pm Title: Why We Fight

What an intense chapter. The fight scene had my heart racing! Glad Buffy made it through...and hope the bastard Angel gets castrated. Awesome story and looking forward to reading more. =)

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2005 - 11:53 am Title: Why We Fight

Pride goes before the fall.....hmmmmm. She had enough to take him down, she should've not been greedy and taken what she had......great fight sceen, it was like being there and shit they both seemed to have scared each other......I'm sure Buffy's face will not be the same.....he's had to broken something other then a rib......shit I hurt and I'm going to go take a couple motrins and maybe some tyenol.....LOL

Reviewer: baby spikes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2005 - 09:27 am Title: Why We Fight

omg.... update soon!!!!

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2005 - 07:55 am Title: Why We Fight

I've been off line for a couple of days & I come back to 3 outstanding chapters Very powerful.

Reviewer: sue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2005 - 07:20 am Title: Why We Fight

I've just got into this story and I love the edge that it has - all the main characters, Giles included, show no simpering traits. It is cold (but Hot in places) and brutal and dramatic. It was a clumsy, fragmented fight between Buffy and Angel that realistically conveyed a very disadvantaged Buffy who, though saved by the approaching police, nevertheless is beaten into oblivion. Can't wait for the update!

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2005 - 05:39 am Title: Why We Fight

You're evil to leave it like! Now I'm going to be checking the Spuffy Realm obsessively to find out if it's been updated or not. This story definitely has me hooked. The tension between spike and buffy is perfect.

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