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Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2007 - 08:51 pm Title: The Rescue

OH I hope she is okay,

I just want to let you know that you spelled bear instead of beer for the drink.


Author's Response: Oh thank you Sandra! I'll fix that right the way. That could be really REALLY embarrassing :) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2007 - 06:45 pm Title: The Rescue

Hope Lily's dad gets what's coming to him for what he's done.

Author's Response: I hope so too :) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Fran Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2007 - 05:39 pm Title: The Rescue

Oh my God!

Oh my God!

Poor Lily! Her dad is pure evil :@ That chapter was completely heart wrenching. I actually felt a tear :(

Author's Response: Hunni, you have no idea how glad and sad I am at the same time for hearing that. It's always hard to write something sad I think. It was supposed to be so you reacted just fine :) Thank you so much for reading!

Reviewer: Fran Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2007 - 05:31 pm Title: With You

Oh, I'm so worried! What has Lily's evil father done?!Loved the Spuffiness in this chapter though. Great update deary :)
Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while. Family vacations suck.

Author's Response: Glad you liked the Spuffy moments :) Thank you so much! Ah, those vacations isn't always the best no... ;) And, you miss out a lot of fics! Lol. Thank you hun!

Reviewer: penny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2007 - 05:11 pm Title: The Rescue

Poor lily. My heart goes to lily. I hope her dad gets what is coming to him.
I love the way Spike cares about his students. Like he sees them as his own kids. Spike is really such a sweetie with a good heart. Maybe, Spike can take Lily. LOL If not hopefully he would be able to find her a good home.

Author's Response: You don't know how right you are Penny but that's all I can say right now ;) I'm glad you like the way Spike cares, I was a bit worried I made him too different but I wanted him to show a more sweet side in this story. Thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2007 - 05:05 pm Title: The Rescue

Oh my, poor Lily. It's sad that social service can't help all the time / find out everything. I hope that Lily hasn't to go back to her father.

Author's Response: You will be able to find out soon if she has to go back or not. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Spikes mrs Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2007 - 04:47 pm Title: The Rescue

THat bastard I hope he rots in hell for treating a child with such ill respect and abuse. He doesn't deserve to be gifted with children if that the way he treats them....I hope when he ends up in priso the tell the other inmates he a child abuser and they give him the hiding he's needs every single day.....

I'm still loving this even though this last chapter was very sad ..... JeanettePhoto Sharing and Video Hosting at Photobucket

Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm glad you still like it. I thought it was pretty difficult to write because I know it's hard to read about children being abused. I'm not too fond of it either but it was necessary for the story. You just put down everythin I felt for her dad, I felt just the same thing and I wrote it lol. Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2007 - 04:35 pm Title: The Rescue

Happy birthday Cissi! Thanks for another great chapter! :)

Poor Lily, I'm glad that Spike and Buffy found her. I hope Lily's father gets what he deserves...



Author's Response: Oh thank you Ari :) I'm so happy you like it!

Reviewer: Spikes mrs Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2007 - 04:34 pm Title: With You

Oh My I hope Lily is okay.... I 'm glad to see that Buffy and Spikes realationship is developing nicely too...Lots of kissing and huging....

Now back to Lily I hope if her parents have done anything to harm heer Spike bel;ts her father one then calls in Social Sevrices too sort out the pair of them...

Off to the next chappie now....Photo Sharing and Video Hosting at Photobucket

Author's Response: You will find out soon enough :) Thanks so much for the nice review! I hope I'll sort it out nicely, I don't really know how Social Services work in England but I'll try to find out. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Spikes mrs Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2007 - 04:21 pm Title: Confrontations

Ohhh I liked lots I missed all my stories so much while I was away so now I'm off to the next chappie update Smoochies for yerPhoto Sharing and Video Hosting at Photobucket

Author's Response: Well welcome home hun :) Such a cute smiley lol.

Reviewer: jamies_lady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2007 - 04:07 pm Title: The Rescue

poor lily, she's been through hell. hope the social workers sort it out quickly. loved the update looking forward to more

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'll update as soon as possible!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2007 - 03:58 pm Title: The Rescue

Sad for Lily. Can't believe her Dad didn't get physical with Spike.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading, you'll find out later what really happened with Lily.

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2007 - 03:50 pm Title: The Rescue

Poor Lily, I can't believe her father did that to her. Thank god Buffy and Spike found out, hopefully they'll be able to get her away from that abusive bastard. Great update, but as always your chapters leave me wanting more, and soon. :)

Author's Response: Lol, well that was my intention :) But you will get more soon, I promise! Just talked to my beta, she'll email chapter 23 tonight or tomorrow. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Sis Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2007 - 03:28 pm Title: With You

Honey, I just wanted to let you know I'm still reading even if I won't review each time. Work is a bitch right now! Loved the chapter. Hope Lily is okay.

Author's Response: Thanks I'm glad :)

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2007 - 11:57 am Title: With You

Aww... The Spuffy interaction was so sweet. I'm glad things are progressing smoothly for Spike and Buffy. Gotta say I'm really worried about Lily though. Can't wait to read more. Great chapter!

Author's Response: Glad you thought it was sweet :) And as for the Lily part, you have a reason to be worried... ;) Thanks for the awesome review!

Reviewer: pixiecorn Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2007 - 04:23 am Title: With You

ooo awesome story:) i'm loving it ....cant wait for the next chapter update:):)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! That means a lot!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2007 - 08:29 pm Title: With You

Kissing is good :) They are really okay now, no more misunderstandings at the moment.
And even Connor is okay now with his friends. Seems they know very well what went wrong (what they caused).
Oh but Lily seems to be deep in trouble. With her background a lot could have happened. I hope she is okay.

Author's Response: I agree with you cordykitten :) Kissing equals good. Thanks for the sweet review! I'll update soon and you'll be able to find out what happened!

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2007 - 05:42 pm Title: With You

Sweet chapter :) I hope that Lily will be okay, when they find her. I guess it has something to do with her dad?

Author's Response: Thanks Ari! Well... read to find out :) Hopefully I'll be able to post a chapter this weekend during the break of birthdays ;) Mine and my dads. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2007 - 03:38 pm Title: With You

FIRST OMG I HOPE THAT LILYS OK!! second YA THEYRE TOGETHER AND SOOO CUTE!!! i LOVE this story and am so happy that u updated. i love that theyre so sweet together and just how their relationship is going. i really hope that lilys ok and that her dad didnt hurt her, and if he did spike gets her away from that bastard. also i hope that things work out for lily and that spike and buffy stay together. PLEASE update as soon as u can, i CANT wait to read wat happens next and if shes ok. THANX amazing chapter

Author's Response: Haha love the first sentences of your review :) Thanks so much for reviewing hun! I'll update again this weekend!

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2007 - 02:41 pm Title: With You

Oh I hope Lily is okay cause if something happens to her, I don't know what it would do to Buffy and Spike's relationship, I could each see them blaming themselves.

Author's Response: True, you know me too well :) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2007 - 02:20 pm Title: With You

Really nice to see Spike and Buffy getting along so well and I hope he can keep his cool regarding Lily. Looking forward to more of this story.

Author's Response: Thanks Sam! I'll update soon!

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2007 - 02:11 pm Title: With You

I love this story! If something is wrong with Lily then I think Spike should kick her parents collective asses. Buffy needs to stay in England and start to live her life there. It's obviously where she belongs.

Hope you update soon, I'm anxious to see what happens!

Author's Response: Thank you so much Jenn! I'm so happy you love it, makes me smile :) I'll update soon, hopefully this weekend! Thank you for the nice review hun!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2007 - 01:56 pm Title: With You

Glad to see the relationship going forward.. and that they are in agreement.

Oh, Lily... what's up?

Enjoying.

Author's Response: I'm so happy you like it! You'll find out about Lily soon enough, probably this weekend :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: buffypurple12 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2007 - 01:42 pm Title: With You

Great chapter! I'm glad that Buffy & Spike are finally getting it together andI hope Lily is ok.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'll update as soon as possible!

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2007 - 01:40 pm Title: With You

Great chapter! Spuffy cuteness, me like a lot! :) I really hope Lily's okay, guess I'll just have to wait until the next update to find out. :)

Author's Response: Good I'm not the only one liking the Spuffy cuteness as you put it :) Thank you so much! I'll update as soon as possible!

Author's Response: Good I'm not the only one liking the Spuffy cuteness as you put it :) Thank you so much! I'll update as soon as possible!

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