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Reviewer: zo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2007 - 02:16 pm Title: The sin of broken faith

i heart ur story.....
it's really great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: kidd Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2007 - 02:15 pm Title: The sin of broken faith

Please don't get discouraged! This is a wonderful series, one of the best that's being written right now, I think, and it would be such a waste if you weren't to finish it.

Reviewer: Tigress Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2007 - 03:13 am Title: The sin of broken faith

This story, (and its two prequels) are awesome! I hope your RL settles down a bit, and you feel a little better!

I can't wait for the babies to be born!

Reviewer: Salice Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2007 - 02:48 am Title: The sin of broken faith

Thank you for updating! I love this fic.

I hope you're not letting that sanctimonious crap review by Rinne upset you. Who cares if she doesn't like Faith or Xander (I personally like both :P ) I could care less what she thinks of the Dawn/Wes pairing and the nit-picking over trivial issues such as Buffy's finances and whether Tara works or not? Puhlease.

I've noticed that the ones who pick apart a story are usually ones that wish that had enough talent to write a ficlet much less an epic fic like yours. Tell her/him to sod off! They're not worth your time.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2007 - 12:30 am Title: The sin of broken faith

Hope they don't get too much trouble. I think Willow deserved that. She needs to feel bad and realize what she lost. Wish there were more Spuffy moments though. I miss them. Can't wait for more!!!

Reviewer: beasley711 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2007 - 11:11 pm Title: Real life, depicted in song

Niamh

After reading your comments regarding the review that stayed with you, I made it a point to read the reviews that had been left. It made me realize that I’ve taken for granted the time and talent writers put into creating the fiction that has given me so much pleasure.

I read an inordinate amount, books and online fan fiction and while I have favorite authors sometimes even a favorite author can write a dud or more often than not write a plot that I don’t understand or enjoy or a plot that is unique but the grammar and/or spelling is such that I spend more time attempting to correct it than read it. When that happens, either I put the book down or I stop reading it online. What I would never do is assume that I could have written it better or leave a review that berates an author that has put so much time and effort into writing a story. I don’t have that given talent or imagination to put words to paper but I truly appreciate those that do.

What I most appreciate about fan fiction is when a story takes a character that I truly detest and writes him or her in such a way that I end of liking the character, which for me is a pleasure. Then there are the stories that reiterates the negative feelings that I have for the character, I enjoy those even more.

Specifically regarding the Origin stories, I have enjoyed them immensely. I prefer long stories and you have provided that in spades. I find the characterization and pacing wonderful. Please try to release whatever negative feelings that the reviewer engendered and continue with your wonderful writing. Reviewers are entitled to their opinions but until they put themselves on the line (as you and other authors have done) with well thought out stories and puts it out there for others to read and critique then they are just whistling in the wind.

My humble opinion only.

Reviewer: amelia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2007 - 10:43 pm Title: The sin of broken faith

woohoo another chapter! Made my day :) Can't wait for the next one you always leave me longing for more!

Reviewer: lisa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2007 - 10:30 pm Title: The sin of broken faith

omg-please finish this story and please please don't let one person ruin it for all that follow this wonderfull story that is so complex -it weaves and blends the plot so well..o.k. I'm incoherent and i cant spell-all i am trying to say is that when i see an update i can't wait to see whats going on. The fic is better written than than most soaps -and i am sure that i am not the only one who thinks this way. It is intense and character driven.
Im not good at giving reviews but i hope this chears you up
thanks,
lisa

Reviewer: Brandy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2007 - 09:33 pm Title: The sin of broken faith

Thanks for the update. I love the direction that this story is heading. Having Buffy realize she is mom-ready was great. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: mikim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2007 - 09:29 pm Title: The sin of broken faith

My dear,
it's always with the greatest pleasure that I discover your updates. The thrill of anticipation is more than worth the time between your updates, which never fails to deliver. I can't remember being disappointed one single time by your updates. Your story is always so beautilffully crafted and the twists, turns and cliffhangers - while definitely of the evil variety - only make me more excited for your story.
I've read your Faith/Jenner one shot and I still haven't really recovered from the punch it gave me: I've always thought that Faith was painted too simply in the show but yours gave her more depth and emotions I think I ever saw her display. And Jenner.... sigh... So, thank you very much for sharing and for this update of Resolutions. BTW, is it me or are things gonna heat up soon?? Gaah, the evil cliffhanger!!!!!
cheers
mikim

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2007 - 08:40 pm Title: The sin of broken faith

Just *hugs* (your A/N)
Warren is the traitor? And they (the others) don't know of it. Too bad that the sight of her Ex-loves let Willow loose the courage to talk, being to devastated.
Awe, poor worried Buffy. The instinct is already there, she feared in vain.
Seems as if their informant was discovered the way Wesley's phone call ended. Willow arrived? Hopefully she'll talk to him.
Four squads? Things will get interesting but not in a good way for our team ("Scoobies").

Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2007 - 01:51 am Title: Nothing stands between us here

Oh, nice! People working for Giles. I like it. And I did, indeed, enjoy this chapter as much as the last!

Reviewer: serenity Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2007 - 01:10 am Title: Nothing stands between us here

Great chapter! Hope everything with work settles down for you soon. Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: Kirsi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/26/2007 - 11:25 am Title: Nothing stands between us here

I really enjoy reading your "books" here. I love them and it's amazing what have you done to the original story line. :) I love Spuffy too. So I hated when it didn't turn that way in the series. I write some of my own stuff too, but since english isn't my native language, I'm quite shy to show them to anyone.
I thought you might wanna know that I've made couples in my The Sims 2-game, like you have in your stories (it was possible to download for example Buffy and Spike for the game). :D I'm 28 and still love to play that game (I know it sound crazy, but it's the power over all things there ;)).
I hope you'll post soon another chapter and we could get to read what happens next. :)
Thank you!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2007 - 08:59 pm Title: Nothing stands between us here

Poor Dawn... she has a hard time believing she's the reason that people got killed.
Loved the spuffy moment, Spike trying to console when she got teary and playing with their unborn babies. So cute when he tried to sing to them. And then it got hot :)
Travis will come soon. I hope too that they had enough time to be prepared.
Enjoyed reading :)

Reviewer: fyreburned Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2007 - 06:08 am Title: Nothing stands between us here

THAT was HOT!!!
Thanks!
Liking the fic too!
~~K.~~
~~fyreburned~~

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2007 - 02:12 am Title: Nothing stands between us here

Loved the Spuffy. Wish there was a lil more Spuffy time in the form of talking and such though. Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: sheila Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2007 - 12:46 am Title: Nothing stands between us here

Great Chapter

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Date: 09/24/2007 - 11:49 pm Title: Nothing stands between us here

Another fantastic chapter. Part of me is just insane enough to appreciate the long waits between chapters. It makes me savor them all the more. As usual, Riley is up to no good. I believe he is just another human Angelus. Bad to the core. He needs to be dropped kicked but good.
Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2007 - 10:44 pm Title: Nothing stands between us here

Always love the Spuffy.

It was worth the wait.

Reviewer: Anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2007 - 07:50 pm Title: A succession of moments

I was thrilled to see today that you had started another 'book" of this series. For some reason I thought you had shelved it for a while.

I still love your Spike and Buffy characterizations.

I'm so glad that Willow is trying to make amends and that she realizes that she's to blame for where she is. I was really hoping that she'd see the light sooner or later.

I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapters...please don't make us wait too long!

Reviewer: R Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2007 - 10:08 pm Title: A succession of moments

I was just catching up on the last couple of chapters and I'm definitely enjoying it. I love the family dynamic you have weaved into this story. It sounds totally far-fetched, but when I think about it, it makes perfect sense. Thanks for writing this fantastic series-hope the muse sends some inspiration soon!

Reviewer: Lucie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2007 - 07:03 am Title: A succession of moments

It is only fair to send You review to make Your day when Your update made mine ... Thanks also for Destinies (there are teasers!).
News from Willow will be about the chip I gues, it is realy good idea - I liked science-Willow much more then witch-Willow. Bud some thinks you can not reconsiliate from. I am curious about Riley (never realy liked that guy). So, hope your muse is in a good mood. And do not stress yourself, we are still with the story (and you of course). :-))

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2007 - 11:28 pm Title: A succession of moments

Very good I loved it and I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: Brekke Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2007 - 07:47 pm Title: A succession of moments

Awesome as usual. Can't wait for the rest.

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