[Report This]Date: 10/07/2007 - 09:27 am Title: Confusion
That won't be easy indeed. Buffy worried Spike again with the Initiative phrases but how should she have known? And something is wrong with him that they didn't notice yet because he can't read anymore, thinking all the letters look the same.
Hopefully getting access to the other files will help *crosses fingers*
Author's Response: your crossed fingers may well work!!
[Report This]Date: 10/07/2007 - 08:44 am Title: Confusion
Poor, poor Spike, God what have they done to him? Please let him trust Buffy and let her be able to help him! And I can't wait for the next chapter, I love this story.
Author's Response: Thanks Pet!!
[Report This]Date: 10/07/2007 - 08:31 am Title: Confusion
they have compltly broken him, poor spike, for a well educated man not even to be able to read and write any more:(
brilliantly written as usual, sad that Buffy keeps making mistakes
looking forward to more
Author's Response: Thanks for saying brilliantly written :) *huge grin*
[Report This]Date: 10/07/2007 - 08:30 am Title: Confusion
make it better, Mabel! waiting is suffering.
update, please! :-p
Author's Response: Will update as quickly as I can, my poor beta is working her fingers to the bone!!
[Report This]Date: 10/06/2007 - 05:22 pm Title: Stolen
Hah.. Spike has his duster back and Giles nicked a remote control. Good so far.
I hope enough blood will give Spike his ability to talk back. And Spike better won't have a device (or the chip works as one) to track him down. I'll cross my fingers for Willow being successful very soon.
Author's Response: No tracking devices!! Phew! Had to give the boy back his duster!! Too cruel otherwise!
[Report This]Date: 10/06/2007 - 05:12 pm Title: Number Seventeen
So both Giles and Buffy know now that this is Spike for sure. But Spike showed no sign of recognition her (to know Buffy). In a way it was Buffy's fault that Spike is back with the Initiative; Spike was too drunk to fight (I know, Spike's decision to drink or not).
Good plan to get Willow turn the chip off. Who knows if Maggie won't be able to activate it when Spike is gone (to have him do something even if it is only to go back).
I hope their plan will work; seems as if Spike indeed forgot about Buffy like being deprogrammed. But him touching a knot I see as a good sign.
Author's Response: there's still some Spike in there!! ans where there's Spike there will eventually be Buffy!!! :)
[Report This]Date: 10/06/2007 - 05:03 pm Title: Discovery
Mmmm Maggie made Spike a killing machine now. I wonder how deep that is programmed in him or if he can fight that order later.
I'm glad to see neither Giles nor Buffy liked the way Maggie treats the demons. And Spike... I wonder if Buffy can do something to get him out. But then they should seek a way to get the chip out too (Maggie won't like that). (The title is from Universal Soldier, right?)
Author's Response: Yep. That's where it's from, got it from a line I gave Xander!!
[Report This]Date: 10/06/2007 - 04:45 pm Title: A Typical Day
*waves hi* I've checked the comments this time after I didn't see a warning and read no xx/other. That kept me from reading FotN (I couldn't stand Helen) and D (Spike going bad/back to Drusilla). Seems to be save for me to read this one, huh? ;-)
I wonder why Spike went away / if he has been there (Initiative) the whole year he since he went away. *reads on* Ah yes, he had the luck to fall in the hands of the Initiative a year ago. Sadly I have to say neat chips they have now. Spike went through a lot, still does. Maybe that has changed him already.
Author's Response: Hi!! Wow! You sure do review!! Thanks for taking the time!! No one is with who they shouldn't be! Even got rid of Riley!!
[Report This]Date: 10/05/2007 - 11:37 pm Title: Stolen
still lovin it-and glad he has been rescued, still a long way to go though
Author's Response: Oh yeah!! You're not wrong!! Thanks for taking time to review. :)
[Report This]Date: 10/05/2007 - 09:01 pm Title: Stolen
Oh thank goodness they've got him out. Looking forward to Spike recovering and then them taking on the Initiative. If they recaptured Spike the day Buffy broke up with thim (As you were) does that mean Riley was behind him being recaptured, or is your timeline different? More please.
Author's Response: No I've put it that Riley had gone before Spike and Buffy had their season six affaire! Didn't want to write for Riley!! just got him out of the way!
[Report This]Date: 10/05/2007 - 06:32 pm Title: Stolen
once again you have me interested in your story keep up the good work and post quickly please
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Means a lot!! It's an incredible motivator!!
[Report This]Date: 10/05/2007 - 05:41 pm Title: Stolen
Oh thank God, he's out of there. I want u to know i'm at work reading and reviewing , i'm totally sick. I need to read more.
Author's Response: Don't get caught reading in work time!!! :)
[Report This]Date: 10/05/2007 - 04:45 pm Title: Stolen
Yay, I am so glad he is out of that place, i hope maggie walsh gets whats coming to her. Worried Spike wont become himself again tho,
more please ;)
Cherie
Author's Response: Thanks so much, next few chapters are with my beta, Carol, as soon as I get them back they'll be on!!
[Report This]Date: 10/05/2007 - 03:57 pm Title: Stolen
Well, Mabel, you've done it again. Could barely stmach the torture part, so glad he's out of there. Xander feeling bad about what was being done to him was a refreshing change. Looking forward to next update.
Author's Response: Thanks for that jt, it always amazes me when people want to read my stuff. Very new to it. Started FOTN in Aug, now on my fourth!!
[Report This]Date: 10/05/2007 - 03:25 pm Title: Stolen
Mabel, good to have back writing. Loving the story!
Author's Response: Was nearly scared off SR after being roasted for FOTN but decided I'm a big enough girl to take it so here I am again!! LOL. Thanks for taking time to review. Really keeps me writing!!
[Report This]Date: 10/05/2007 - 03:04 pm Title: Stolen
I wonder how fast maggie can run, because she is going to need superhuman strength to escape Buffy. Hated what the initiative did but love the story
looking forward to more
Author's Response: Thanks! Really appreciate it!
[Report This]Date: 10/05/2007 - 03:02 pm Title: Stolen
Wow! This is really an intense story. And thank you, thank you for not leaving him with those monsters too long into the story--reading endless descriptions of mistreatment (I mean chapter after chapter of it and not what you've done as an introduction to the rest of the story) is pretty brutal so I thank you for that. How sad for all of them and how great that they got him out of there. I love that you update so often and look forward to reading more!
Author's Response: Cheers Cutiepie! Getting lovely reviews keeps me going!!
[Report This]Date: 10/05/2007 - 02:34 pm Title: Number Seventeen
please go on. can`t wait to see the initiative-wankers go down. :-p
Author's Response: other chapters currently getting the treatment of my beta!! Will update as quickly as possible!
[Report This]Date: 10/05/2007 - 01:18 pm Title: Number Seventeen
I just read the 3 chapters you've posted so far, and I have to say I'm hooked. Poor Spike, I really hope Buffy will get him out of there soon. I can't wait for the next chapter, so please update again soon! :)
Author's Response: Your wish is my command!! Thanks for the review! Much appreciated! Keeps me motivated! :)
[Report This]Date: 10/05/2007 - 10:52 am Title: Number Seventeen
OMG Mabel, I can't wait til he's out of there. Maybe when I get home from tonite u will have posted more , I have a feeling this fic is completed, Either that or u write really fast , but I like lots.
Author's Response: i do write really quick! Kind of like how I talk! LOL It's not totally finished, I'm about five chapters in front of you! Normally don't post until finished but kept getting side tracked by reading The Dresden Files so doing this to give myself a kick up the butt!! Will post as quickly as I can!
[Report This]Date: 10/05/2007 - 07:25 am Title: Discovery
loving this one, dying to see buffy go awol on walsh's butt for what she's done to spike. Cant wait to read more!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 10/05/2007 - 12:31 am Title: Discovery
Brilliant-I had just finished leaving a review to Chap 1 & was about to toddle off to bed when you posted Chap 2, so couldn't go without reading it first. Really enjoying this
Author's Response: Well you did ask for more Tee hee! I do try to update as quickly as I can. glad you're liking it.
[Report This]Date: 10/04/2007 - 11:59 pm Title: Discovery
OHH , please tell me =she breaks him out of there now , Please , I want to rip that Nazi b----'s heart out and feed it to Spike . You've done it again Mabel, you got me caught up in another one . Thanks for letting me know it's not Spike /other, Buuuut Will there be Spuffiness?
Author's Response: There will be Spuffy somewhere along the line!!
[Report This]Date: 10/04/2007 - 11:56 pm Title: A Typical Day
wow-good start, more please
Author's Response: Thanks for that!!
[Report This]Date: 10/04/2007 - 11:38 pm Title: A Typical Day
Mabel , that's good , I don't normally like initiative stories but this sounds to good to pass up, Poor Spike , I assume your going to have Buffy rescue him and help him?! I read more , i promise.
Author's Response: Hey Jo! Yep it'll be Buffy and the scoobies to the rescue!! You'll be pleased to know no Spike/other in this!! Tee hee!
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