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Reviewer: Braydie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/02/2008 - 07:20 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

Hahahahahaha!!! This is gonna be good... :) Of course, if Spike ends up killing Riley, Buffy might not be too pleased...*

Reviewer: Julia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/02/2008 - 07:01 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

And when it did, Buffy would come to her senses and remember who she belonged to!

Hmm... how about Riley beloning into a grave? Is a nice thought have to say. He's creapy and I don't like him. When he thinks he can take Spike... he's dumb. Hope he will see William the Bloody pretty close by his neck :) !
Great update as always... please, pretty please... update soon!

Reviewer: DK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/02/2008 - 06:56 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

Riley is a jerk! More afternoon quickies, love it.

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/02/2008 - 06:51 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

HAHAHAHA! Does Riley have a surprise in store for him! Can't wait for Spike to go to town on his ass! Grinning ear to ear just thinking about it. Great chapter!

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/02/2008 - 06:20 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

Riley's such an idiot. Buffy's never gonna go back to him, especially if he tries to get rid of Spike. Can't wait for more Spuffy!!! They're so perfect for each other!!!

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/02/2008 - 04:51 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

Boy that was hot, wonder what Capt.Cardboard is thinking of doing, update soon so I can find out , alright.

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Date: 03/02/2008 - 04:26 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

Ohhhhhhhhh, there are so many things making my head spin in this chapter...

Buffy thinking about whether she'd like to join him for eternity and leaving an option open at the end

The mind blowing sex(!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)

That overgrown git wanting to hurt Spike (ha! good luck with that, mate!)

Can't wait to see how all that develops. I love this story, and I adore your writing!

xxx

Reviewer: GDO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/02/2008 - 04:06 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

I'm wondering if Buffy will be vamped. Though with Riley in the mix, I wouldn't be surprised.

Reviewer: GoldenUsagi Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/02/2008 - 03:54 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

Liking where the Riley bit is going, but I'm kind of worried about Buffy. She has no idea right now what being a vampire entails, really, since Spike has kept that side of it quite hush hush from her. Excellent chapter!

Reviewer: Kimmie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/02/2008 - 03:40 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

Yet another awesome addition to this fantastic tale. This Spike that you have created is so marvelously strong and confident yet vulnerable when it comes to Buffy ... dead sexy.

I love how uncomplicated and yet intense this story is. Keeps me constantly checking for updates. (hoping for Addie sex scenes in every chapter heeheeheehee) (hey, they rock!!!)

Reviewer: jamies_lady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/02/2008 - 03:17 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

oh I love the idea of Riley trying to stop Spike. Are you selling tickets?
great update. cookies for your muse. more please

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2008 - 09:21 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Well, it's not easy...

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/22/2008 - 05:48 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

There are so many directions this story could go, and I would enjoy all of them. Looking forward to what happens next. Amazing chapter.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2008 - 10:31 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Buffy noticed that Spike was running from her; she just guessed the wrong reason. She's indeed totally wrong.
But the conflict is already there.
I wonder how they'll work that out.

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2008 - 10:31 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Yup, I kinda saw the RL vs immortality issues coming - and better sooner rather than later. I feel for Buffy, I really do and Spike's love for her truly stands out in this chapter. Bravo, loved it.

Reviewer: jennybear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2008 - 03:54 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Amazing chapters; amazing story! Really. I love how you’ve reeled me right in. I’m rooting for our couple big time!! I love the dialogue between the two and also how you’re giving us so much insight into their thoughts and what’s going on in their heads. They want so desperately to be together, FOREVER, and I hope there’s a way for that to happen. Buffy is so addicted to what Spike does to her and how he makes her feel and I so totally get that. The way you write him makes me need to cool off in major ways. And we’re seeing how Spike really feels and what he wants. I do get a bit tired of hearing him say how he’s been with so many other women, even though it’s in a way to make her feel better about herself. I wonder if we’re ever going to see any jealousy on Buffy’s part.
I have to wonder, though, how Buffy is going to take it when somehow, inevitably, she finds out, whether it’s by herself seeing it firsthand or whether she hears a news story or something of that nature, finds out what Spike is truly doing before he initiates the rough sex she’s come to be addicted to. How he gets hot for her by ruthlessly killing. How would Buffy have handled things had she seen how he killed that girl in the alley? When she gets slammed right in the face with the true reality of what Spike is? I can’t see her being so okay with things as she is right now. You’ve written a Buffy who is introspective and kind so she’s going to have problems with him getting so hot for her by tearing into another girls throat and tossing her in a dumpster. How will she and Spike reconcile that. For me, that’s the last obstacle. I so want Buffy and Spike to find a way to be together just like she said in that tub. There’s got to be a way. I can’t wait to see what comes next. You’re truly writing a great story.

Reviewer: Cas Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2008 - 12:34 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

Does make you wonder how this will all turn out.

Reviewer: Spiked_Slayer Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2008 - 11:38 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Oh wow that was amazing!!! I really love this story. U rock!!

Reviewer: kimbclar Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2008 - 11:21 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Very mushy! But then again I had a crap day so the mush made me feel all better. Really, I was so glad to see a new chapter with this and despite the softer tone to it I really did like it. I also liked seeing what's going on in Spike's head. What a dilemma for both of them. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Rogue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2008 - 09:22 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Yay, another chapter!!! And another very interesting development as well. Spike thinking seriously about turning her, Buffy sort of thinking about being turned...oh I so can't wait to see where these two end up! And I loved Buffy's adorable line: "I hurt myself having sex." I could hear her pout! Excellent job, and looking forward to more!

Reviewer: serinah Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2008 - 06:09 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

so, so sweet. :) I personally love stories where S gets human more, than stories where B gets turned. but your's is still promising. but how do you figure B reconciling herself with the killing? will S stop? will she, when turned? or are you making them killers? i'm afraid I'm slightly orthodox on the moral scale. I hope you'll make it a good story for me too. well, i'm going to read it anyway. please, update soon.

Reviewer: quirks Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2008 - 02:31 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

I was just thinking the fabulous tub hadn't been mentioned in a while. :D
I'm really loving the 'realism' of Buffy being sore - even though it does put a damper on the sexin'. Just more food for thought about their relationship.
Am enjoying greatly. I will now wait patiently for more.
Thanks!

Reviewer: quirks Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2008 - 02:22 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

Hi! I got some sleep and now I'm back (don't have work today). And now I'm a little more coherent so I can tell you that I'm loving the little bits of the Buffy world you're throwing in - like Willow dating a werewolf, Giles' presence and the Harmony ref had me giggling like crazy.
I love the balance of light and dark too (not to mention HOT and sweet). Spike's nature is a problem, they're both aware of it and hoping it'll be ok. But there's some necessary trepidation, and even suspense that add to the hotness of it all.
Excellent writing!
And now there's only one more chapter before I have to wait for updates! Woe is me! :D

Reviewer: quirks Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2008 - 02:22 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

Hi! I got some sleep and now I'm back (don't have work today). And now I'm a little more coherent so I can tell you that I'm loving the little bits of the Buffy world you're throwing in - like Willow dating a werewolf, Giles' presence and the Harmony ref had me giggling like crazy.
I love the balance of light and dark too (not to mention HOT and sweet). Spike's nature is a problem, they're both aware of it and hoping it'll be ok. But there's some necessary trepidation, and even suspense that add to the hotness of it all.
Excellent writing!
And now there's only one more chapter before I have to wait for updates! Woe is me! :D

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2008 - 12:13 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Well there's a new reason to call in sick!!! Fab update - as ever.

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