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Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/11/2008 - 08:50 pm Title: It'll Soon Be Time...

Very good chapter Mabel, as much as I hate Angel , i like when he's protective and caring of Spike, but I like it even more when buffy is. Update soon as u can. I want more.

Author's Response: Hey Jo! Thanks for reviewing! Will try not to keep you waiting too long!! :)

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/11/2008 - 05:00 pm Title: It'll Soon Be Time...

Yep he needs Buffy. Loved it though and please update soon.

Author's Response: He does indeed!! Will try not to keep you waiting too long!! Thanks for reviewing!! :)

Reviewer: dawnofme Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2008 - 12:50 pm Title: Be Kind Of Ungrateful...

Aw. Poor Spike. He's not useless. I live about an hour away from LA. He could come live with me. I can find all kinds of "things" to keep him busy.



Author's Response: You and me both!! Tee hee!!! Bless him!!

Reviewer: Dawnofme Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2008 - 12:37 pm Title: I Don't Do Apologies, Mate!

LOL! I feel bad for laughing because I really did like Gunn, but that last line was hilarious.

Author's Response: Glad you liked it!! I couldn't resist it! Cheers dawn!

Reviewer: Sandy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2008 - 08:58 pm Title: Be Kind Of Ungrateful...

Enjoying your story. I've always thought becoming human after being a vampire would be very hard, even unwanted to a point. How could you truly be happy giving up strength, power, speed, super senses, speedy healing, never being sick - never getting a cold or the flu or cancer,etc, and immortality. Somehow being able to walk in the sunshine isn't a good trade-off.
Looking forward to more and seeing how Spike will fair.

Author's Response: Hi Sandy thanks for reviewing, i've always thought that too. how would you cope with getting old after so long without lasting aches or pains! thanks again, much appreciated.

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2008 - 03:43 pm Title: Be Kind Of Ungrateful...

Different but a more realistic take of Spike being human, angel would love it, spike not so much. Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Hi Nicka - thanks for trying this fic! My first challenge one - will be pretty angsty to start with! :)

Reviewer: CarolM Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2008 - 01:50 pm Title: Be Kind Of Ungrateful...

Starting off well, Mabel, can't wait to see how Spike deals with this and Buffy's take on the new "improved?" Spike. :)

Author's Response: Hi there CarolM! He may not be so new and improved soon!! Eek!! Angst on it's way!! Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: Roxy Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2008 - 12:35 pm Title: Be Kind Of Ungrateful...

Jay, another great MM story! :P First when I saw the title of this story and the summary I was like, huh? you know, coz there's already a story with the same title/summary, but I compared and it's really different :P guess that's just part of the challenge...Anyhow, I love it! Poor Spike, he's all depressed which I totally get, I mean he was all great and strong before and now he's just a lowsy human :P Really intense part with the gun, I love it.
He thinks Buffy won't want him because he's all 'weak', but I hope that when she comes to LA she'll make him see different coz she just looooves him..I hope:P
Anyhow, I love it, can't wait for the next chapter :)

Author's Response: Hey there Roxy!! Glad to have you on board!! Apparently i could have used a different title but since the challenge had the title i thought i HAD to use it. I'm looking forward to reading Legen' version when mine's complete!! Hold tight for some serious angst!!!! LOL!! Thank for reviewing and keep letting me know!! :)

Reviewer: serinah Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2008 - 08:06 am Title: Be Kind Of Ungrateful...

awww :) little spikey wants to be heroic! actually he is. he is awesome! I so feel for him! please update!

Author's Response: spike is just brilliant but he has hard times ahead! Won't keep you waiting too long for more serinah! thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: serinah Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2008 - 07:38 am Title: I Don't Do Apologies, Mate!

“One problem with your little ‘let’s make old Spike feel better’ spiel.”

“What’s that?”

“Gunn’s fucking dead!”

Hilarious! Update!!! That's an order!! *growls*

Author's Response: glad you liked that line!! must say i was happy when it popped in to my head!! Thank you for reviewing and for picking out the lines that you did, i love it when readers tell me when i've hit the mark!! :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2008 - 06:21 pm Title: I Don't Do Apologies, Mate!

Spike will have a hard time to get used to the new 'I'. Neither can't he drink as much as he did (and will probably die of cancer) nor is he that strong....
And he doesn't heal as good as before.

Author's Response: you know me cordyk - i like to give my spike a hard time!! thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2008 - 06:15 pm Title: See Yer Later, Peaches

Saw this story but didn't have time for today to read. And now I have two chapters :)
Looking forward to what you'll do with the challenge.

Author's Response: Glad to see you're on board cordyk, doing this as a test for myself - can i work to someone else's plot bunny...? Time will tell. updates will be weekly at worse, hopefully twice weekly! Thakns for reviewing :)

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2008 - 02:48 pm Title: I Don't Do Apologies, Mate!

Very good start mabel, I happen to be reading your fic and Legen's and their both very good so far. It will be very interesting reading both,maahaaahhhhaa!

Author's Response: Hey Jo!!Glad you're liking it! I'll read Legen's when mine's complete, will be interesting to see how they differ when written to same plot outline!! Apologise to Legen for me for doing same one when u next leave a review, but i'd started writing before they'd posted and so decided to carry on!! Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: Francine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2008 - 10:44 am Title: I Don't Do Apologies, Mate!

I'm loving the Angel and Spike interaction. Great update! I can't wait to see where you take this.

Author's Response: hopefully I won't keep you waiting too long for the next installment! glad you're liking it and thanks for letting me know:)

Reviewer: Michelle D. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2008 - 08:19 am Title: I Don't Do Apologies, Mate!

Great chapter!

Author's Response: thanks Michelle, really appreciate it :)

Reviewer: Francine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2008 - 10:48 pm Title: See Yer Later, Peaches

I like the imagery you painted concerning the shanshu process. I also like that, while Angel is jealous, he is still wanting to protect Spike. This story has tons of potential.

Author's Response: Thank you! really appreciate the review. It's quite strange working to a challenge so fingers crossed!! lol!

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