Date: 12/17/2004 - 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 12
Sod the groveling ! This part was beautiful and heart-melting !
Date: 12/17/2004 - 02:41 pm Title: Chapter 12
Wow, two smuttiness chapters from you in one day! My lucky day. I enjoy the happyness, but I'm still waiting eager to the real agnst to begin.
Date: 12/17/2004 - 07:38 am Title: Chapter 12
Okay, ignore my previous review...or at least the first few lines of it. Had a blonde moment and confused it with another I reviewed yesterday. Never been disappointed with this story, just with Spike's perpetual "jerk" syndrome. Would still have liked to see Buffy slap him at least once before forgiving him.
Date: 12/17/2004 - 07:33 am Title: Chapter 12
Excellent chapter. Completely makes up for the disappointment I felt about the last one. I take it all back...although I still think she shouldn't have let him off that easily. Look forward to the next update.
Date: 12/17/2004 - 03:21 am Title: Chapter 12
Gotta say I love this story. One thing I wanted to let you in on though, wasn't sure if you knew... My mom got pregnant with my sister when she was on birth control pills... So yeah. Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 12/17/2004 - 03:02 am Title: Chapter 12
*****AUTHOR'S NOTE***** Darla, I read your story and sent you an e-mail about it (for some reason, I can't respond to certain reviews). And I know what you mean about the Mr. William series- I love Pepperlandgirl, so I tried to make a conscious effort not to make it to similar, outside of the basic premise.
Date: 12/17/2004 - 01:44 am Title: Chapter 12
Thanks for the angst warning. I thought the story was pretty angsty already, but the promise of serious angst to come seriously made my day! Keep it up!
Date: 12/17/2004 - 01:17 am Title: Chapter 12
These two are so hot together. I know you said there's some angst coming our way, but dont break them up. That'd be just mean of you. Love it.
Date: 12/17/2004 - 01:17 am Title: Chapter 12
Wonderful chappie again Ashlee! I really liked Buffy's comment about it always being about sex, and Spike's answering response. It was a very nice gesture, him saying that they didn't have to do anything. And it was also sweet to plan the lit candles and rose petals, making it a very special night for her. However, I get the feeling that this is just the calm before the storm. And, I definitely think Spike jinxed them by his, "Who says it can't last?" I'm just tickled pink that I was part of the inspiration for Spike's use of 'foot-in-mouth disease' in his apology to Buffy. I'm loving this story Ashlee!
Date: 12/17/2004 - 01:10 am Title: Chapter 12
i liked the new chapter!!! but i was wondering if u will do another chapter that has buffy and spike mad at each other.i love drama in a story and it makes it more real, well to me. so, just as an idea, if u do write another "drama" chapter maybe u could have buffy walk in on spike and jenny kissing, but jenny came on to spike and buffy doesnt know that. i really like this story and i really hope update a new chapter soon!
Date: 12/17/2004 - 01:02 am Title: Chapter 12
hope you're going to post something about the dance....
Date: 12/17/2004 - 12:09 am Title: Chapter 12
doing my part toget another chap tomorrow LOL love this story!
Date: 12/16/2004 - 11:58 pm Title: Chapter 12
Hey Sweets, I loved it so much. I'm really liking this fic ,when i first read it i thought it was too much of "The Mr. William" Series but it was a great feel and atmoshpere of its own. I would love for you to adopt a story of mine at the adoption center at the message boards. Its called you're my temepation and i think you could really make it alive again. Its only like 3 chaps into it but i think you would do great with it. Also i can't wait for spike and buffy's angst again, just amkes it more exciting
Date: 12/16/2004 - 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 11
This all leads to much groweling, I hope. I love angst, but the making up is almost even better. I hope you'll post sooner.
Date: 12/16/2004 - 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 11
Oh wow. So sad! This Poor Poor couple!! Will they ever work it out??? *sniff* Can't wait for the update!!
Date: 12/16/2004 - 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 11
Ooh! Evil evil evil evil!!!! I hope you decide to update soon!
Date: 12/16/2004 - 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 11
Can someone please just slap Spike, and preferrably, let it be Buffy? As much as I usually dislike drawn out arguments between them, I think he may deserve to suffer after that comment.
Date: 12/16/2004 - 06:36 pm Title: Chapter 11
I think he must have permanent foot-in-mouth syndrom. He has some major major making up to do. I have to say, he's not looking too good right now. But I love the story and even though I groaned at the cliffhanger, you have me completely hooked. Please update soon!
Date: 12/16/2004 - 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 11
oooh, the drama, the angst! loving this story, even the miscommunication and foot-in-mouth disease. the angst just makes me want more! i can't wait to see how Spike plans to fix this one. man, they just can't get their shit together, can they? maybe if they actually had a conversation that lasted longer than they could get their clothes off. ok, maybe that was harsh. they just need to decide what they are to each other. they're both so afraid of being rejected that they just keep pushing each other away and misconstruing completely innocent events. more please! :)
Date: 12/16/2004 - 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 11
Wonderful, can't wait to see what Spike and/or Buffy does. It seems Spike just can't keep his mouth shut can he?lol
Date: 12/16/2004 - 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 11
Excellent chapter , thrilling and exhilarating. Jealous and possessive Spike makes him say such ridiculous things.. Buffy is too sweet ! He deserves to wait a little for the make-up sex!
Date: 12/16/2004 - 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 11
Absolutely loving it, can't wait to read more!!!! You're an amazing writer :)
Date: 12/16/2004 - 03:30 pm Title: Chapter 11
geez jackass much spike? please hurry and update again soon:)
Date: 12/16/2004 - 03:28 pm Title: Chapter 11
Argh! you know that not one of the WIP that I'm reading are in a 'good place' right now? So depressing. And there I was, hoping for some after party smut :-( But it's ok, stories would be really boring if I had my way. I guess you do need some angst to make it interesting. Anyway, great chapter. I love the story, but I do hope that Spike will stop being an idiot and always saying the wrong thing at the wrong time. Though I admit, it's very in character for him to do that lol Spike and his big mouth!
Date: 12/16/2004 - 02:55 pm Title: Chapter 11
I want to slap him silly. For an adult, he sure can't control what comes out of his mouth. As for Buffy, she's acting about right for her age... more mature. At 17, if someone had said something like that to me, I'd have slapped them or kicked them where it counts. But I've always been a bitch. You are SO the queen of angst! Loved it!
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