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Reviewer: Megan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2005 - 12:26 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

It's so sad but Buffy is so predictable. I wonder when she'll work out that if ehr feelings have hung on past the book, then just maybe Spike's are genuine too.

Reviewer: PK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2005 - 12:05 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

nice progression, kinda sweet how spike tried the moonlight date.

Reviewer: Demonica Mills Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2005 - 11:54 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

aw, cemetary picnic. cute chapter, bad buffy though. shame on her.

Reviewer: Allison Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2005 - 11:47 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

I think Spike genuinely tried to make a romantic attempt at dating, but stubborn Buffy shot that plan to hell, that evil girl LOL I feel so bad for him because it's obvious he loves her, and she just doesn't get that. I agree that maybe Dawn should butt out, but it's nice that she cares so much. I wish Buffy would give Spike a shot- that would lovely to see.

Reviewer: Kar Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2005 - 11:41 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

I like they are out of the book but hope you don't fill it all with angst. I'd like something... once in a while to work out so they can continue to fall for each other.

Reviewer: Debbie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2005 - 11:40 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

I am still here and enjoying every chapter....thanks for the daily updates, gives me something to keep looking forward to

Reviewer: Franchesca Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2005 - 11:40 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

Poor Spike. I hate it when I feel sorry for Spike. And I hate it when Buffy is so pigheaded, but they wouldn't be them if they weren't this way.

Reviewer: spikegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2005 - 09:18 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

I just really want an update, FAST! =)

Reviewer: chris Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2005 - 09:16 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

Grrrr - Buffy gets me so damn frustrated ....I just want to bash her head on a wall and tell her that Spike does love her and to stop being so stupid and hurting him while she's at it. Poor Spike,he can never do anything right by her

Reviewer: Pattie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2005 - 08:36 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

Hey now, I've updated once in a while; it's just hard to be consistent when I don't have all that much time on the computer. I'm loving the story, can't wait for mre!!!

Reviewer: zanthinegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2005 - 07:34 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

You know, i love Buffy and Spike both, but they seem to be taking turns being boneheaded idiots in this story. I'm sure that's not a permanent state, so I'm looking anxiously forward to the resolution!

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2005 - 07:11 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

Poor Spike. Poor Buffy. I feel really bad for them. Can't wait to see what Dawn plans next.

Reviewer: Lacey Marsters Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2005 - 06:50 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

Great chapter. I really hope Buffy will realize that Spike truly loves her. Please update soon, I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Reviewer: teasha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2005 - 06:49 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

love the chapter....sorry I don't review much (you make me feel like a bad girl) but i love your stories so much it is 3:41 am and I have to wake up in two hours to work but I am reading and reviewing. Love it please keep it up.

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2005 - 06:16 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

OMG i cant belive she did that it was so cruel i no he loves her for real and i think that she does but shes scared that she might be wring and that he would get over her r something thats so wrong. i love this story and am so happy that u keep updating. i cant believe that she hit him thats so mean and that she freaked out on him hes really trying and now i bet hes all sad and stuff. i hope that they work things out and she tells him her true feelings soon. please update as soon as u can, im dying to read wat happens next thanx

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2005 - 05:40 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

loved it. buffy is crazy and she was really mean in this last update but i do understand her hesitation. hope she wises up soon. not everything is black and white. there are a few tiny grey areas as well. post soon. blackmail the readers all you want. if that's the way to get reviews, so be it. lol. just kidding. i'm loving the story. can't wait for more.

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2005 - 04:47 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

NOOOOO. don't cut back on the whole posting everyday thing. i like that. please post again soon. great job. buffy is being an ass and so is spike. make it better soon. loved it. great job.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2005 - 04:41 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

I have to say that I LOVE the frequent updates... but it is a bit of a 180 from the every few months update. But I promise I'll do better, and check every night! And this chapter. Boy, is Dawn being way super insightful, and being quite the matchmaker! I have faith that her and Spike can work it. I, for one, wouldn't be opposed to another magic book... But I will follow your muse anywhere. Love, LOVE this story. And please, update soon!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2005 - 04:20 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

They just make me sad... but I can't complain because there is one more chapter waiting for me as soon as I finish this review! I love the angst. It's amazing how much better they'd communicate without the running and the drinking, but then, would they still be out Spike and Buffy? Onto Ch 17!

Reviewer: timeofchange Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2005 - 02:46 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

Please don't stop updating....it can take me awhile to catch up but I'm thrilled if I find more than one chapter. I adore this story. The pirate world was so wonderful that maybe some people are still stuck in that emotionally and haven't moved back into the "real" world yet, but the story is still great and I can't wait to find out what happens next.

Reviewer: 3988Akasha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2005 - 09:32 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Evil, evil you! I need more. You can't just leave me hangin' like that. Yay for Dawn and Spike getting together to make Buffy see the truth!

Reviewer: heathert@earthlink.net Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2005 - 09:14 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Hi--I'm really enjoying the story, any reason its not on your own site? Of course I'm also thinking if you wanted to keep the story going, you could weasel a Buffy pregnancy out of the deal ;) Hope the muse keeps with the inspiration & thanks for the story! Heather

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2005 - 07:54 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

;-) 42 instead of 18 know :) I'm back.. okay - first: I would love if you could to keep the updates as quick as they are now :)) To the chapter: Loved Dawn trying to ment what Spike and Buffy had broken. If they would only understand that they are both full of fear to get rejected and that they love each other. Loved Dawn trying to beat some sense in Spike *grins* I hope she did suceed :))

Reviewer: anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2005 - 06:45 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

GREAT STORY!!! OMG! I LOVE The idea of them being trapped inside a book, and the writing is sooo touching. It's so sad that they never realize they're in love.... As to your question, I'm guessing on the updating too frequently, although too many updates is never a bad thing.... I find it hard to write reviews when there's still more story to read! Goodl luck with the rest of the story!

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2005 - 04:40 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

You are definitely not updating too frequently! I love this story, am completely addicted and can't wait for more. I really like Dawn in this story. Usually people make her so whining. It's nice to see her determined and taking initative, Buffy and Spike really need it!

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