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Reviewer: Franchesca Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2005 - 01:52 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

See. Reviewing. This is me reviewing this fic. So... no need to do anything drastic. Anyway. I love the non-brat version of Dawn. You gave us a little hope at the end of this chapter. Maybe between Spike and Dawn they can get Buffy to see the light.

Reviewer: jeanie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2005 - 01:48 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

no don't stop or slow down! I check several sites and can not remember where I reveiw. great story. please update soon.

Reviewer: Brat Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2005 - 01:42 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

I think you should continue updating as often as possible. I also think that Dawn is a very bright girl in this. Her whole speech about her having the memories of her life and therefore Buffy's experience as Elizabeth with Spike/William being real too was fantastic.

Reviewer: DK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2005 - 01:37 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

This is a great story. Sorry we didn't stay in the book longer. They could have had a happy ever after with family. Please update.

Reviewer: Adriana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2005 - 01:13 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

NOOOOO!! Keep updating. Be patient. It's the weekend. People are probably out and stuff. :)

Reviewer: Angie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2005 - 12:58 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

I love this story, and I really like the frequent updates, it keeps me on my toes.

Reviewer: demonica mills Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2005 - 12:49 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

Update loads!!!! more updates! Dawn cracks me up. LOL smacking Spike in the head. Still interested, still reading

Reviewer: MonaT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2005 - 12:45 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

Don't you bloody dare. I will hunt you down and beat you. . . and I know where to find you, you wench, so don't pretend that you can hide. . . I will find you. . . .

Reviewer: Debbie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2005 - 12:44 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

Please continue to update, I check every day for the next chapter, then can't wait to read it......oh, and by the way, I love it!!! I am wayyyyyy interested. thanks

Reviewer: Li Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2005 - 12:34 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

NOOO, it's good! It's great! =) As much as I loved Elizabeth&William, I knew it wasn't going to last. I'm happy how you've made the transistion to the real world though, realistic. Our two heroes need to grow up & and realize they are perfect for eachother instead of making themselves miserable. Please keep up the good work, and dont think for a second we've lost interest.

Reviewer: Megan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/24/2005 - 11:58 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

NO!! Loving the frequent updating. Although I have found that weekends are not usually high on the reviews. I seriously doubt anyone has lost interest. I love how you have Dawn diving in to make it all better and in helping Buffy to see sense. It's all any of us could wish for!

Reviewer: Pam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/24/2005 - 11:24 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Glad you updated. Dawn- the voice of reason. Hope the conspiracy works.

Reviewer: Karyn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/24/2005 - 11:23 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

no don't stop updating....just have to smack us up side the head every now and then and say "bad readers get with the reviewing alreadly" loving this story by the way. just get lazy sometimes with the reviews. ~ducks head~"sorry"

Reviewer: spikette55 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/24/2005 - 11:21 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

I love how you used the key reference of Dawn not being real either when Buffy said E/W weren't real. Go Dawn...and the bashing Spike in the head was hilarious. thanx luv.

Reviewer: bloodshedbaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/24/2005 - 11:14 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

DON'T YOU DARE CUT DOWN ON POSTING!!!! I was sooooe excited to find this updated with tWO chapters since I'm so totally stuck out of town with hardly any internet access... It's been terrible, i tell you. TERRIBLE. This is one of the few fics where I get major squee-age when I see it updated so pllllleeeeeeeeeeze don't stop!!!! *begs*

Reviewer: carri Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/24/2005 - 10:59 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

you totally got the wrong idea, of course we're interested in updating. As long as you update, I'll try to keep reviewing.

Reviewer: teasha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/24/2005 - 10:54 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

don't you dare cut down on the updates. I love this story and i can't wait to see about the plans. Also it was the end of the book which was lovely and now we are back to the tainted unhappy reality. but i will stick with you even though reality sucks.

Reviewer: spikette55 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/24/2005 - 10:47 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Don't you dare!!! I think it's perfect. It has to be yahoo...maybe the last ch. made them mad that Buffy is being stubburn, and want them back fast. I love it, please keep going. thanx luv,

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/24/2005 - 10:06 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

*sigh* It would have been to easy, huh? And Buffy had to run away again. If she had stayed and they had really talked..
Well, I'm hoping for the next chapter. Or the chapter after that chapter :))

Reviewer: Lacey Marsters Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/24/2005 - 06:48 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

Oh man they need to totally come to their senses. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/24/2005 - 03:00 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

OMFG i cant believe u did that, why could he just not be mean and they tell eahc other there real fealings. i love this story and am so happy that u updated. i cant believe that xander saved him thats so nice of him. i really hope that spike tells her that he loves her soon and that she excepts it and gets with him. im realy happy that u made it so joyce doesnt die i didnt want that to happen. please update as soon as u can, i cant wait to read wat happens next thanx

Reviewer: Megan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/24/2005 - 01:57 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

Great chapter, Addie. Despite it all, it was good to see Spike stick the boot in before he thought Buffy had a chance. Still, they need their heads bashed together!

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/24/2005 - 01:41 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

They're so stubborn and both of them are afraid to hurt so they shove each other away. Can't be easy with such a history as they have to just 'let go' and 'accept'. Great job :)

Reviewer: Karen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/24/2005 - 01:12 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

I love this story. You have such a way with words that you draw the reader into your story. I think you are a very talented writer.

Reviewer: NEO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2005 - 11:36 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

You are evil, but good. Write more soon!

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