[Report This]Date: 07/17/2005 - 12:24 pm Title: Chp 2 Promises to Keep
So sweet... I love how spike is being a gentleman, that quote from the poem was fab. Keep it up.
[Report This]Date: 07/17/2005 - 12:10 pm Title: Ch 1: One Question
Really great first chap, really getting in to it.
[Report This]Date: 07/13/2005 - 06:45 pm Title: Chp 9 Down the Rabbit Hole
Go for it Bold Buffy! Poor William - bit of a culture shock? Looks like he might enjoy this new age. GREAT UPDATE. LOVE WILLIAM (got his crust all stiff and upper!). MORE PLEASE.
[Report This]Date: 07/11/2005 - 09:29 pm Title: Chp 9 Down the Rabbit Hole
Great update!!
[Report This]Date: 07/11/2005 - 08:16 pm Title: Chp 9 Down the Rabbit Hole
First: Thanks for the update! Second: the bottom of the lake where something in the mud and slime began to stir. Huh? Cliffhanger again? What will come for them now? I'm not sure, but I don't thing that Spike will remember how to fight. But I hope he does! Looking forward to the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 07/11/2005 - 03:35 am Title: Chp 9 Down the Rabbit Hole
Oh! I love how you wrote William- that was perfect! And Buffy being his first time technically was a nice, sweet detail!:)
[Report This]Date: 07/11/2005 - 01:56 am Title: Chp 9 Down the Rabbit Hole
Nice recovery William. See.. even as William he's a demon in the sack.
[Report This]Date: 07/11/2005 - 01:50 am Title: Chp 9 Down the Rabbit Hole
Oh crap! If it's another one of those Tazksha demons, please let him wait until they're done! LOL! Can't wait to see William's reaction to what he thinks is his first time. If he was spazzing over bare arms and limbs, Lord help him! Update soon, please!
[Report This]Date: 07/11/2005 - 01:08 am Title: Chp 9 Down the Rabbit Hole
Just started reading this story and I love it. I hope you explain a little more whats happened to Spike but for now I understand the jist. Hope you update soon!
[Report This]Date: 07/10/2005 - 10:43 pm Title: Chp 9 Down the Rabbit Hole
Good grief, did Spike come back at the end there? Look forward to the next.
[Report This]Date: 07/10/2005 - 10:26 pm Title: Chp 9 Down the Rabbit Hole
great update i loved it
Author's Response: Glad you’re still enjoying the story. Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 06/19/2005 - 02:06 pm Title: Chp 8 Going it Alone
Cant end the chapter that way, this is a great story, is he human or just william in his mind, update soon!
Date: 06/17/2005 - 04:21 am Title: Chp 8 Going it Alone
HOLY SH-T! Didn't see that coming. This ought to be interesting, to say the very least. You definitely have my attention.
Date: 06/17/2005 - 02:34 am Title: Chp 8 Going it Alone
That's got to be the most interesting "demon poison" ever! I sure hope William doesn't hang around too long (or if he does, he quickly learns to curb some of those Victorian attitudes). Very fun twist - more please.
Date: 06/16/2005 - 07:31 am Title: Chp 8 Going it Alone
excellent update
Date: 06/16/2005 - 02:46 am Title: Chp 8 Going it Alone
Now that was an unexpected twist!
Date: 06/16/2005 - 02:12 am Title: Chp 8 Going it Alone
Gahhhh, so many glorious chapters to catch up on. I only wish there were more. Trust Buffy to not make the realisation until it's possibly too late. I love how you've kept the Scoobies out of it. Hoping you feel inspired again soon.
Date: 06/15/2005 - 08:19 pm Title: Ch 1: One Question
Kinda sad chapter, but I still liked it. Too bad it has to be so dramatic to make Buffy realize her feelings. I am hoping we'll see Spike regain his true self.
Date: 06/15/2005 - 06:53 pm Title: Chp 8 Going it Alone
Enjoying your story.
Date: 06/15/2005 - 06:47 pm Title: Chp 8 Going it Alone
Ooops - Spike vanished? I don't think the demon is completely dead - Spike would be dust by now. Interesting twist you wrote. Looking forward for more [And yeah - you were right about Xander and the other scoobies, I fear.]
Date: 06/15/2005 - 06:14 pm Title: Chp 8 Going it Alone
Ha! What a cool turn to take with this story! I can't wait to see how she reacts to this sudden change more, and seeing Spike be normal William will be so neat! I can't imagine suddenly having to deal with this, though LOL:)
Date: 05/10/2005 - 06:47 pm Title: Chp 7 Like Ice
Oh my - he thinks he'll die? So sorry.... I hope Buffy will find a cure (but I think her blood would have helped)
Date: 05/10/2005 - 12:45 am Title: Chp 7 Like Ice
Well, this is certainly no of the good - Row Buffy Row! Kudos to Spike for not munchin' on his sweetie just to save his own hide. So we all know how adorable Crazy Spike was in the series - are we gonna get to see your version. GREAT Chapter even if you did leave us all on the edge with that little boat rowing cliffhanger! Write more (really fast) PLEASE!
Date: 05/08/2005 - 11:39 pm Title: Chp 7 Like Ice
I really hope she can find a cure and bring him back to good health again- things are just starting to be good for them! Please let Spike be okay- I'd really like a happy ending to this:) It's scary to see him so defenseless
Date: 05/08/2005 - 10:44 pm Title: Chp 7 Like Ice
Enjoying your story -even though you have left Spike in a bad situation. Hopefully the damsel in distress will be able to find a cure. Like your writing.
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