Date: 04/20/2005 - 07:34 pm Title: The One That Matters
Oh... so sad. Somebody tell Buffy it's ok to open up to Spike. He's a good guy. OK, it's like I'm talking to the TV again. I know, weird.
Date: 04/20/2005 - 07:31 pm Title: The One That Matters
Oh no! Trouble in paradise, eh? Please post the next chapter soon, cause can hardly wait for more of this awesome fic!
Date: 04/20/2005 - 06:25 pm Title: The One That Matters
What, was Buffy a whore or something at one point? Was that already addressed and I'm so dumb I missed it?
Date: 04/20/2005 - 01:52 pm Title: The One That Matters
Poor Buffy. Such a heavy burden that she feels she can't share. I do hope this doesn't drive a wedge between them. I love how you are focusing on the interpersonal aspects of their relationship, and how that is affected by Buffy's horrific past. I can't wait to see what Spike tries next to get close to her. Wonderful chapter Ashlee!
Date: 04/20/2005 - 01:40 pm Title: The One That Matters
Oh yeah, if only Spike knew what happened to her.. but time will tell :)) (And I know how this story goes, so I'll try to review careful)
Date: 04/20/2005 - 01:01 pm Title: The One That Matters
It's great, even if everyone's depressed in the story right now, i imgaine it would be a very difficult topic to realistically work with. cause people in pain are soemtimes a little bit with the craziness. Great job, take care
Date: 04/18/2005 - 03:25 pm Title: Never Better
I wish Buffy would admit her life before and I hope she would snap out of that whole martyrdom thing.. Loved it still.. hope you update...
Date: 04/17/2005 - 02:16 am Title: Never Better
aww...I can't wait to see how this turns out update soon!
Date: 04/16/2005 - 11:42 pm Title: Never Better
Great update! I really hope that she let him help her .... One question, and I'm sorry if you have already mentioned it, how old is William?
Date: 04/16/2005 - 08:02 pm Title: Just Survive
****AUTHOR'S NOTE**** For some reason I can't respond to reviews, but: to Reciprocity- I wrote this before I wrote Broken, but I already had that story blocked out in an outline, so it wasn't that hard. And to spikes_niblet: the main thing I changed was the beginning (because it wasn't mine, so I rewrote the first part). The rest of the story stays basically the same (because after the original chapters, everything was mine). I did change the last chapter, because I was never really happy with it, but it's not a huge change. The basic idea stays the same, it's just the location is different. Thanks for the reviews!
Date: 04/16/2005 - 07:59 pm Title: Never Better
good update
Date: 04/16/2005 - 07:03 pm Title: Never Better
I want to know how she got the scars! Even though I can pretty much guess during what it happened, it's really intriguing. Poor Buffy! Hopefully Spike won't always be so easily distracted by sex!
Date: 04/16/2005 - 05:32 pm Title: Never Better
I have a question, so far this is going pretty much the same way as Youre my Temptation but will it be ending the same? and so far i like the changes you have made.
Date: 04/16/2005 - 04:24 pm Title: Never Better
What a great chapter! I can hardly wawit for more, so please update soon!
Date: 04/16/2005 - 04:20 pm Title: Never Better
Poor Buffy, but i defnitely see the way it's going to develop. Is it hard wrting this at the same time as Broken?, like mental overlap?, id imagine it'd be hard to not to reuse things, but then i suck at multitasking. Anyways it's great. Take care
Date: 04/16/2005 - 04:19 pm Title: Never Better
Very good chapter. It will be interesting to see how you play this out. Very intense emotions here. Will Buffy push him away entirely?
Date: 04/16/2005 - 04:10 pm Title: Never Better
Yeah, that is the first sign that there is something wrong, but Spike doesn't see it yet: Buffy don't want tender Spike... TNX for the update!
Date: 04/14/2005 - 07:44 pm Title: Locked Up
fabulous(as usual) please give me more
Date: 04/12/2005 - 08:03 pm Title: Locked Up
great update
Date: 04/12/2005 - 02:54 pm Title: Locked Up
I hope Buffy fesses up with her issues cause it's really unfair to Spike... but, still loving this... gonna look out for more.. thanks...
Date: 04/12/2005 - 02:39 am Title: Locked Up
Oooh, this is fantastic! I can't wait for more! :)
Date: 04/12/2005 - 02:32 am Title: Locked Up
I'm really interested to see where you go with the story, i think i may have read the first version by the other author a while ago, parts seem familiar. anyway it's really good. take care
Date: 04/11/2005 - 11:23 pm Title: Locked Up
I really like this chapter. I hope you update soon this is turning into a really good story.
Date: 04/11/2005 - 11:22 pm Title: Locked Up
I really like this chapter. I hope you update soon this is turning into a really good story.
Date: 04/11/2005 - 11:07 pm Title: Locked Up
The subtle stuff you had in there really got to me! The fact that she said he wouldn't hurt her shadows what sort of sick and abusive things she's had to deal with - which makes me cringe to think about. I'm glad she's finally able to be with someone who doesn't treat her that way, but I can't help thinking you're going to have her running miles away from him! At least he'll eventually help her work through it :)
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