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Reviewer: kalahara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2006 - 04:46 pm Title: As the Sun Sets

Oh my God!
Whatever you did on your summer break was so worth it for this update. Mind blowing chapter in this saga. It's very weird I looked at this story only last night to see if there was any updates and whammo a update today.
I just love everything that happened here start to finish this update is pure Spuffy gold and so well written to stick with the storyline. I think I need to re-read this chapter once I get home like 50 times and review it again. Man this was soooooooooooooooooooooo worth waiting for.
The struggle with self and the heartbreak and revelations I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: sue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2006 - 03:54 pm Title: As the Sun Sets

Your update may have taken forever 0 but by god, it was worth it. You pulled out all the stops in the most subtle, yet heart-wrenching way. You show no favour to either character; they are both flawed and hurting and hurtful. With all her snarling and bitching she doesn't see how he has become with her ....... until Giles makes her look, and look closely. And that only makes her even crosser - because it's going to interfere with the fuel of retribution that has been keeping her going. Sweet taste of revenge? His gentleness, his good-natured, almost bemused way of dealing with her sniping, his not taking his pound of flesh, his wanting to please her, his being pleased at her tiniest smile ..... it's not going according to plan; the rapist gangleader is not playing to type. And when she begs that very rapist gangleader for sex - the walls are crumbling down between Buffy and Spike.

One helluva chapter. Thanks!

Reviewer: Sofia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2006 - 03:22 pm Title: As the Sun Sets

The end was lovely! I already thought you had given the story up so thank you so much for continuing it, Luv you for that! Great writing and nice that you brought Rupes to the plot. Great, please keep writing to the end!?!

Reviewer: spufette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2006 - 03:18 pm Title: As the Sun Sets

Yeah!!! I was just thinking about you and this story!

It's about time Spike admitted his love for Buffy!

I hope things can at least turn out 'okay' if not happy.

spuf

Reviewer: Jackie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2006 - 03:18 pm Title: As the Sun Sets

AAAH! THANK YOU!!! I started reading this story months ago, and kept waiting for another update, so this is really nice to read :) Also, Spike told her he loves her~ YES!!! I absolutely love love love this story, just so you know. Please update again soon!

Reviewer: Allison Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2006 - 03:16 pm Title: As the Sun Sets

This is the first chapter I've read of anything in a long time that has made me both laugh and get watery eyes - I loved it, PJ! The playful banter between Spike and Buffy, the time they spent with Rupert, the beach scene - I enjoyed every bit of it! I'm glad you've returned to this fic - I've always loved it :)

Reviewer: Chosen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2006 - 02:57 pm Title: As the Sun Sets

I loved this chapter, I've waited a long time for an update, and this was def worth it!

Reviewer: Emilee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2006 - 02:19 pm Title: As the Sun Sets

Oh no! That's too mean leaving it there. And I guess that was the end of the angst-lite chapters. I'm hooked on this story, but I'm kinda sad about it because I can't see a positive ending for Buffy and Spike. I'm envisioning death and betrayal, or sinking into the mire that they're currently swimming in. Or both. Please update soon so I can see if I'm just driving myself nuts by anticipating the worst. Poor Spike, poor Buffy. At this point I don't know who I feel sorrier for.

Reviewer: spikeslover Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2006 - 01:49 pm Title: Suspicion

OH MY GOD!!! i've missed this so much
i'm so happy Spike admitted he loved her! Please update soon!

Reviewer: spikeslover Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2006 - 01:49 pm Title: Suspicion

OH MY GOD!!! i've missed this so much
i'm so happy Spike admitted he loved her! Please update soon!

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2006 - 01:05 pm Title: As the Sun Sets

First let me say that I’m glad your back. I’ve been in love with this story ever since I first found it. Now where to begin... Last chapter - love how Spike has restrained himself from having sex with Buffy, even when he knows there’s a slim chance it will prove anything to her. Moving forward... I like the idea that he’s been so willing to see to her ‘needs’ with no thought to himself other than cold showers. And though I understand 100% ‘why’ – man Buffy can be a bitch, it’s like will nothing please her? I’m not worried though, I think Giles (which by the way, a most welcome addition to the story) has finally given Buffy a reason to begin to thaw a little... as evidence on the beach, and I don’t mean the having sex, I mean her admission she doesn’t want to want him. It was a huge help too, that he told her he loves her. Perhaps now they can take a tiny, tentative step forward and she can learn to find a way to look at the man inside. The poor guy needs a break. If it doesn’t start to happen now, it may take something awful like Angelus getting his hands on her for her to wake up and smell the coffee. I am worried about exactly what Angelus has planned. At first I thought Dru killed Amy, but now, judging from the dialogue, I don’t think it is. I’m curious about the call Spike got while at the magic shop – I can only guess it has something to do with Amy, but not so important that he had to return. I hope that Cordelia and her ‘bo’ will have something to do with some type of inside info for Spike on Angelus’ plans. I still have hope for that couple, and their possible friendship/liaison with Buffy and Spike down the road.

Reviewer: Neejchee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2006 - 12:55 pm Title: As the Sun Sets

OMG! You cant just leave it there!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE give us more!

Reviewer: Nichole Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2006 - 12:11 pm Title: As the Sun Sets

Nice to see the story again.....i love it...look forward to more soon..great chapter......N

Reviewer: Mali Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2006 - 10:57 am Title: As the Sun Sets

Oh... please don't make Buffy say something 'grr arrgh snappy hurt-y comeback' and Spike get all angry and hurtttt!

Reviewer: Steph Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2006 - 09:42 am Title: As the Sun Sets

It is really strange because last night I just began to read this fic and noticed that the last time you updated was some time in May and I was worried that you might not finish the fic. Then this morning I go to this site and BAM there is a new post! Then I read the chapter and it was amazing! PLEASE update soon I need to know what happens now that he said those three words! The suspense will kill me!

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2006 - 09:28 am Title: As the Sun Sets

Oh, I hope and pray you've alread finished the 20 some rewrites of Chapter 21, LOL........talk about a CLIFF hanger, LOL.......


Kimber

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2006 - 08:41 am Title: As the Sun Sets

Hey, it's Giles!

Just heartbreaking. Thing is, he could leave, move to the other side of the country, or back to England. What is there really to have here? Evading the cops, always looking over your shoulder for the knife in your back?
Wonder what he would do if Buffy did fling herself over the edge?

Reviewer: ChrissieLinnit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2006 - 07:09 am Title: As the Sun Sets

Firstly, Missy PJ PolarBear, let me say how absolutely delighted I am that you've emerged from hibernation to resume this story! "I'M ABSOLUTELY DELIGHTED!"

Secondly, can I say how perfectly you transfer the essence of a canon seasons 4/5 Spike into an AU setting. Mannerisms, mood and dialogue. He's the BigBad all right, but he's being torn apart by his love for the girl.

The really interesting this though, is the dynamic created between this Spike and AU girl Buffy - who has a uniquely different history to the canon Slayer Buffy. Oh, the (spiteful??) hurting is still there, but this Buffy has been hurt by this Spike who has been hurt himself by circumstance.

The arrival of Giles on the scene will be a great catalyst for these two, I think. I'm not sure how useful he will be in the internal gang war that's boiling over, though.

Please don't leave the next update so long, pet. By my reckoning, you're not due for another hibernation until some time round exams next year! *winks*

He scratched the back of his neck and muttered something indecipherable as she went to get dressed.

Lovely image!

Reviewer: Verda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2006 - 05:14 am Title: Suspicion

Spike's damned if he does and damned if he doesn't. Guess He's just not going to get her on his side anytime soon. It's been a several months since you've updated and I hope that RL isn't keeping you down. I've read very few AH Spuffy stories and this is one that I'm hoping that you don't abandon. You have a new fan. I started @ BSV with yor fic An Alternated Attraction. I'm hoping that your recent con exprience and meeting James will get your muse going again as it has with several other writers. Looking forward to your next update. Thanks for the great read.

Author's Response: RL is evil, you know. I'm glad you like the fic though! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Verda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2006 - 04:18 am Title: Everything to Lose

Great fight scene. Thank you for letting him win. Wonder who in Angelus' camp killed her? Geez, how much more can Buffy take? Awesome chapter, thanks.

Author's Response: Buffy's gonna have a rough bit for a little while longer.... Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Verda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2006 - 03:00 am Title: Comfort

Very emotionally griping time for Buffy. She's in the same position as Harmony and I fear for her. Spike may be close to letting someone in, just worried about him as well since Angelus is still such a threat. Thanks for this gripping fic.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Verda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/26/2006 - 10:50 pm Title: Revenge

She is better then them and now they all know it, most of all Spike. Excellent chapter. Thanks for the read.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: daydreamer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2006 - 01:02 am Title: Suspicion

Wow.. So far this is one of the best fanfics I've ever read. Please continue.

Author's Response: Wow, thank you! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Kimmie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2006 - 05:22 pm Title: Suspicion

WHOA !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I just found this story this mornig and read all chapters ..... IT IS AWESOME !!! I do not usually gravitate toward dark stories but I am hooked on this one.
I love how you are changing Spike yet still maintaining his control.
Great character development and great plot.

I really hope that you continue to write this ... muse on vaca? Come on ... you can do it!!! Looks like you have many fans out here cheering this story on.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review and for giving it a chance!

Reviewer: Verda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2006 - 02:16 pm Title: Hot and Cold

I'm going to try again to review, mycomputer keeps messing up and not going through. Hope it makes her feel better knowing why he's here. I am enjoying their more civil displays for a change. Excellent work, thanks.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!

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