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Reviewer: D'Hoffryn Helps Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/17/2006 - 08:11 pm Title: As the Sun Sets

At first I didn't like this but the more further I get into it the more I can't turn away. I think the reason I so want to forgive Spike in this is his study of Buffy and how he can read her and in seeing her he can see himself and the changes he needs to make. I liked the friendly chat with Giles and Buffy in this last chapter and how he suggests to Buffy that she really knows why Spike has changed she just needs to face it herself. I think that is why she does not want him to change for her for if acknowledged he had changed she'd have to find a way to forgive him or face her wanting him.
I look forward to seeing your next move in this for it is written so well.

Reviewer: janice Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2006 - 02:49 am Title: As the Sun Sets

OMGOSHHHHH.....don't stop updating!!

Reviewer: Ariel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/15/2006 - 02:03 am Title: As the Sun Sets

You're back!!! And your new chapter rocks! I'm glad you revised your last chapter because the story flows easier after that point. I liked Giles here... it was a bit weird seeing Buffy and Spike out in 'the real world' again, like, it was surreal after all that had happened. Their dialogue was adorable, though. I've commented on this before, either here or at another site, I think, but I *love* how you write emotion into the story without it being blatantly hit-over-the-head obvious. Especially with the differences between the sex scenes of when there were no emotions involved, to now. *Especially* the shower scene, because it's just so unconventional and fits so well with what you're trying to show. I love it! So yes... hope you've revived your story writing bug! And hope the past couple of months have treated you well. :)

Reviewer: Ula Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2006 - 10:18 pm Title: As the Sun Sets

This is a pretty amazing story and so much more then I thought it would be going in. I really enjoyed this and hope for more. Very talented writer you keep your readers ontheir toes.

Reviewer: Jazminetease Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/13/2006 - 08:19 pm Title: As the Sun Sets

Whoa wow and whoa this update came back with a passion. Buffy seems to be like two differnt people on the one hand looking towards Spike for sex and then hating him for sex. I hope she figures out what she wants.

Reviewer: L7 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/13/2006 - 05:59 pm Title: As the Sun Sets

She seems to want him but cannot face wanting him. I do not think she will believe he loves her. So it should be intersting what happens next. Great story!

Reviewer: Stine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/13/2006 - 05:58 pm Title: As the Sun Sets

Fantastic! Absolutley fantistic! I love it

Reviewer: angelic_amy Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/13/2006 - 10:42 am Title: As the Sun Sets

AWWWWW! He finally admitted it! PJ, this chapter was absolutely gorgeous. The meeting with Giles was cute and fun. The scene at the beach was beautiful. The love scene was so gentle and sweet. Buffy backing away like that... it was reminiscent of an ep of the OC! And then Spike confessing his love...

*happy sighs*

I'm a little worried about Angelus's plans - I know they can't be good. But right now I'm all happy because of this wonderful chapter.

CAN'T WAIT for more sweets. *hugs*

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/13/2006 - 10:31 am Title: As the Sun Sets

loved it more please

Reviewer: Verda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/13/2006 - 06:47 am Title: As the Sun Sets

He said it! OMG, what's she going to do now! I realize that there's not going to be easy for them but I'm so glad it's out. Giles and the "Magic Box" was perfect. Worried about Angelus and what he's going to do. And Dru killed Amy? Should have figured that. That was a fantastic chapter. Thanks for the read.

Reviewer: Verda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/13/2006 - 05:47 am Title: Suspicion

I like the change. It is better. It shows just how much pain they're both in. Thanks.

Reviewer: GutterGlitter Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/13/2006 - 05:21 am Title: As the Sun Sets

Hott and extreme hot and a whole new look at the S/B thing here really liked this and would go into a gang war for another chapter of this.

Reviewer: Spike Dogma Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/13/2006 - 03:03 am Title: As the Sun Sets

It's almost like a semi date but only she doesn't know it's a date. I think it's cool things are coming to head in their relationship I mean there can only be moving forward from here or going off the edge. Choose life Buffy. I think this story has it all and it brings life to all the Vampire Slayer fans in all of us.

Reviewer: survenante Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/13/2006 - 01:36 am Title: As the Sun Sets

You're amazing. This story is the ultimate Spuffy story. Alternate universe and all, but so close to cannon, it's unbelievable. I just don't have the words to tell you how much I like it. Except maybe for please, please, please, update soon?

Reviewer: Bloodroses Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/12/2006 - 05:38 pm Title: As the Sun Sets

Just on lunch and sneaking in some reading and just had to say how much I love this and how exceptional this update was. Totally blew me away

Reviewer: LoverslikeMe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/12/2006 - 05:19 pm Title: As the Sun Sets

I hope you continue with this I laughed and cried over this latest update it is fantastic.

Reviewer: rurelreaderteas Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/12/2006 - 12:41 pm Title: As the Sun Sets

Started reading this the other day and found myself sneaking sections of it at work. This is one online story you just cant put down I could not review all the pages but this is one story your cant stop once you start it is by far the best I have read in a long time. I am wondering if Cordy will pull a double cross and she killed the girl to get close enough to kill Angel herself because at first I thought Dru but the killer did not speak Dru like so now I'm back to guessing!

Reviewer: Americana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/12/2006 - 05:16 am Title: Suspicion

Be quiet and let me kiss you........................................................................................
I'm reading this and even I don't want to like Spike and here I am wanting to like Spike and forgive him Somehow this fic makes everything turn on its head. I want redemption and forgiveness and a romance its like bizarro fic world or something but you've made me want to like the evil and see the good in him and that is a talent.Please add to this soon its worth waiting for.

Reviewer: Kimmie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/12/2006 - 04:58 am Title: As the Sun Sets

They are making progress I mean she first let him kiss her and then there was more. I don't know how she will take the I love you but wow what a way to kick start this story back up I forgot how much I liked this story. Great read.

Reviewer: Melovera Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/12/2006 - 03:17 am Title: As the Sun Sets

This is a lot different then what I expected and it was just perfect. Love this story and really can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: michellecopteres Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/12/2006 - 02:31 am Title: As the Sun Sets

Beautifully written with modern themes with heart and character and does honor to all of Joss's characters in fact. Story does Wheadon-universe justice. I look forward to the next posting on this.

Reviewer: Belle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2006 - 10:34 pm Title: As the Sun Sets

BEST STORY EVER!!!!!! Award worthy writing.

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2006 - 03:29 pm Title: As the Sun Sets

Loved it :D

Reviewer: Bethy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2006 - 02:51 pm Title: As the Sun Sets

Awww gosh I feel bad and happy and sad for both of them all at the same time. He so desperately wants her you just feel it when you read it and she wants him as well but in different ways. Reading this your so torn between the two of them and so want them to come together. I had to read it twice it was so good.

Reviewer: Tea_an_Spuffy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2006 - 01:50 pm Title: As the Sun Sets

Awww they are talking and actually holding conversations and Buffy is seeking him out which is new and wanting sex and he is trying to be a better man. Lovely writing as always and I liked you gave them time to go off someplace together. Cannot wait to see where they go and what will happen next. Love this story.

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