Reviews For Williams Angel
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Reviewer: ScoobyDawn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2013 - 02:46 am Title: Meeting

I am enjoying this fic but I do sigh in disbelief when love is instantly bandied around it just seems too childish. Initial BA doesn't put me off though, obviously I think she is a fool :)

Reviewer: Strokes Girl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2012 - 02:16 am Title: Meeting

The intruduction was WAY to long, I get it. Buffy Is a servent, she likes Angel, William likes her... The discriptionn used was unoriginal and even though the plot was freash and unused the story just wasn't executed as well as I had hoped.

Reviewer: CallMeKitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/14/2009 - 12:45 am Title: Meeting

oh, poor william, sounds like LIam might have done this before :( Elizabeth seems naive, and I have a feeling this may not turn out the way she envisions it.

Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2006 - 07:31 pm Title: Meeting

Hmm I don't know but I think your word program might be automaticly changing 'W' in Willow from W to w.

Is Angel married in this story? I mean how likely is it that Buffy would go falling all over him if she is 'beneath' him and he's married. Isn't this supposed to be in the 1700's or something. I have watched a lot of those British costume movies and I would say that such things are not very common. He might take her as a lover for a little romp in the sack but it would not be anything else. I don't know if it has been stated but I take it that the story takes place in England. And is Williams rough talk really belivable? I mean some of his expressions are probably not invented yet. The way he talks is not very belivable for an upper class brit of the time I would say. I think that a more William rather than Spike approach to his character would have worked better.

Reviewer: Panta_Rei Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/02/2005 - 03:35 pm Title: Meeting

NOOO!!! Silly, silly Buffy...hehe and poor William =D Loving it, hun!

Reviewer: Mariana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2005 - 03:20 pm Title: Meeting

lovely chapter, though as i've told you, i'm not too fond of the b/a. anyhow, i was reading the warnings and all that, is there really going to be rape somewhere in this story? probably it will be b/a...but i'm not too fond of that either...sorry...anyhow, love the story, the concept and all, though i sensed buffy a little more immature than she should be...but that's just my opinion. keep it up!!, you're doing a fantastic job, thanx

Author's Response: Hello! thank you for the review! Yes this is going to be an attempted rape, however it may not be between who you think. I'm sorry iif you feel that she acts a little immature, you may feel differently when he history is known, as theres a reason for everything. Thank you for your feed back does help. Thank you so much, I hope you carry on enjoing!

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2005 - 03:35 am Title: Meeting

god why does buffy alway go for angel if i were her i would so go for spike hes so much better. please if u have to have buffy and angelus get it over with soon make him evil and have spike save her. please update as soon as u can, i cant wait to read the next chapter thanx

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2005 - 03:38 pm Title: Meeting

I don't hate you! I like building the tension and angst first...plus we get to see some jealous Spike maybe?? Is Angel going to end up being a jerk? I hope not, but it's your story. Anyway, great job,more please!

Author's Response: Hee hee.. You'll just have to wait and see on all accounts... I'm really glad you are enjoing this... its really given me the gourage and inspiration to get writing faster!

Author's Response: I'm sooo sorry i couldn't spell to save my life then! that was supose to be enjoying and courage! sorry

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