Not getting warm fuzzies for the guy managing to make her want to beg to be his mistress. Nice way of setting up to not have someone with high expectations of where it is going but that only works if they aren't all squeeeee(!) 'true love will out'. Kudos to his evil seductory ways though. :D

It would have been nice if the timescale was different. If she had been there a bit longer to be making doe eyes and feeling convinced of his feelings enough to blatantly be happy mucking around with someone's husband. The silliness of her instant love makes me dislike her total acceptance of stepping into someone's marriage like this. I wouldn't 'approve' of that behaviour anyway but at least it may have had a more realistic foundation for actively choosing to behave like a cheap tramp - sorry Buffy, but I call a spade a spade :).

At the moment I'm really pleased for William that she isn't wanting him, he certainly deserves better.

Very interesting so far... It's REALLY refreshing to read a story that involves both Angel and William and doesn't completely bash Angel's character, as so many fics do. I am looking forward to some Buffy/William bonding later on! Congrats on the writing.

Tee hee--"fish of the day" =D And what Angel said sounded completely fake...hopefully William will step in sometime ;) Love it!

Why do I have the sinking feeling it's all a set up by Angel? More please!

Author's Response: Thank you for your reviews... i always look fwd to getting reviews from you!