Date: 09/03/2006 - 11:28 pm Title: Welcome to Sunnyhell
story was pretty good - i normally don't read all human stories and this slipped by my notice. So i have 2 comments: when they made love for the first time and thereafter, there was never one dicsussion about birth control!! and the other thing i would have liked to have seen talked about was the scars on buffy's legs - like once she told her mom - maybe there was some plastic surgery or something? plus wasn't there something "more" that angel did to buffy that we were gonna be told about?
Date: 04/21/2005 - 08:31 am Title: Welcome to Sunnyhell
Interesting premise, looking forward to where this goes. A small spelling note? It's "fucking" not "fucken". And heh, i know, spelling correction on profanity, but hey :)
Author's Response: thanx for pointing it out. The sad thing is i know that and i dont honestly know why i spell it like that. Can we just pretend its more....Grrr Arrrg that way?lol, thanx much for the review!
Date: 04/18/2005 - 08:01 pm Title: Welcome to Sunnyhell
I just saw the new story; will read to the chapters and catching up.
Date: 04/17/2005 - 07:03 am Title: Welcome to Sunnyhell
'Once it was done', not 'once I was done'. Argh, these tiny little fonts in the review window! Grr.
Author's Response: lol ya it is hard to see mistakes with such tiny writing. thanx for all the reviews. i'm glad the "typing fight" is done. I do appreciate u'r input.
Date: 04/17/2005 - 07:00 am Title: Welcome to Sunnyhell
Thank you. I appreciate your response (I did say I'd read it once I was done, but since it isn't yet done I wouldn't actually read that chapter for a very long time was what I meant to say and didn't). And thank you for posting on the other story too - I noticed that and appreciate the effort. So, I will leave this story for now and go to the other one and I guess I'm gonna have to come up with some ideas so you'll get all inspired again, huh? :-)
Date: 04/17/2005 - 05:12 am Title: Welcome to Sunnyhell
Ending this here. But if you wanted me to read your response instead of addresssing it here, you put it in a chapter of your story that I'd already said I wouldn't be reading further. And then you condescend to me because I did not read it there. Of course I didn't read it there, I told you I wouldn't. I believe I was being honest, not rude, and do take issue with pleas for readers and reviews when you drop stories we're following to start new ones with no intention of continuing the first ones, etc. I know you don't agree with me, that's why you did it. I do reserve the right to take issue with your choice though. I'm sorry this isn't a 'fer sher, this story's so totally kool!' kind of review, but I opted for honest feedback, not empty praise. You don't like it or agree with it. Fine. Free world. And that's my final word on this whole topic, regardless of whatever response it generates. I didn't intend to start a whole thing here.
Author's Response: If you read this im sorry we misunderstood each other but i didnt actually memorize the review that was deleted, so if you said you wouldn't be reading this story any more i wasn't aware.In fact i remember a part of the review that said you would review at the end and not waste reviews before that which led me to believe you would read it to the end. Silly me. By all means stick to your opinions about my work, your certainly entitled to it when posting a review for MY story, just leave your opinion of people who have nothing to do with my work out of it. They dont deserve that.
Date: 04/17/2005 - 04:08 am Title: Welcome to Sunnyhell
I stand by what I said. Be an adult about it and don't delete negative reviews and only permit glowing praise. That's skewing the results so the author has no basis upon which to honestly evaluate his or her work. Totally pointless, why bother having reviews at all.
Author's Response: Wow, lol, you really dont read things properly. In the last chapter i explained that i deleted your review while trying to respond to it and wrote the gist of it down for my readers, including you to see. I stand by my response as well and would like to add once again that i do not mind criticism at all as long as it's phrased politely.I'm sure there are people who agree with me when i say that leaving rude comments is unneccessary. There are ways to say things and ways not too, most people learn that as they get older. I hope the same goes for you as well. Continue to leave reviews for me if you'd like but please do not judge other writers as you did in the first review that you left. They are hard working and are doing this for no profit but for the love of writing.
Date: 04/16/2005 - 07:31 am Title: Welcome to Sunnyhell
lol Little Buffy has some attitude :D I love it Great first chapter I can't wait for more... And for what its worth I loved Things HCanged I was hoping for more :(
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