Date: 12/23/2005 - 05:28 am Title: 20
I have to admit, Xander being useful is fun, and Travers being like secret assassin man is pretty awesome, too. And I'm glad that everybody seems okay with Christine around. Now if we could just get back to civilization...
Date: 07/17/2005 - 11:26 am Title: 20
I SO LOVE RHIS STORY I KEEP CHECKING EVERY DAY TO SEE IF YOU HAD ADDED ANY CHAPTERS,PLEASE PLEASE FOR THIS OLD LADY ADD A CHAPTER OR TWO NICE LONG ONES...MAGGZ314@YAHOO.COM..THANK YOU
Date: 07/17/2005 - 06:55 am Title: 20
I SO LOVE RHIS STORY I KEEP CHECKING EVERY DAY TO SEE IF YOU HAD ADDED ANY CHAPTERS,PLEASE PLEASE FOR THIS OLD LADY ADD A CHAPTER OR TWO NICE LONG ONES...MAGGZ314@YAHOO.COM..THANK YOU
Date: 07/16/2005 - 04:48 pm Title: 20
PLEASE,PLEASE UPDATE SOON I CHECK EVERY DAY TO SEE IF YOU UPDATED THIS STORY GREAT READ ,SO LOVING IT PLEASE IF YOU CAN LET ME KNOW WHEN YOU MIGHT ADD SOME NICE LONG CHAPTERS..MAGGZ314@YAHOO.COM THANK YOU MAGGIE
Date: 07/12/2005 - 06:09 pm Title: 20
aww how cute i loved that eveyone is getting along do far and that no ones trying to kill spike. also i like that xander is accepting spike and that hes nic to spike. also i love that they saved the army giril and that everything is working out. i cant wait to see wen she gives birth. i love this story and am so happy to be reading it. sorry for the late responce i was away for awhile and couldnt read. cant wait to read more thanx for writing this story
Date: 06/25/2005 - 06:11 am Title: 20
This story is freakin amazing. I've been searching for a long time to find a story that offered both action, thrill, and romance l along with actual *plot*. The story moved along brilliantly and I love how the realtionship is developing at a realistic level, considering the circumstances. My favorite thing about this story (well one of them at least =)) is the fact that dispite the heavy drama you manage to squeeze some light buffisms into the fic that bring humour to the sitatution, and brings it back down to earth- like it's really 'real'. Haha, sorry if that makes no since, I'm not a gifted writer unlike yourself. Gosh, there was this line a few chapters back that said: "A brood was forthcoming, Angel could feel it." After Angel finds out what happened to spike and buffy- it had me cracking up. I love this story! I've just now read the whole thing, and let me tell you- just waiting from page to page to load was HELL. This is that good. Keep up the amazing work, and please please update soon.
Date: 06/21/2005 - 02:50 am Title: 20
Of course he wouldn't shut up... it's Xander (he never knows when to shut up - don't channel him or your chapters will be 10,000 words each!) Xan's POV was great. Buffy's birthing is near and Spike is feeling gratitude for the Poof and Whelp! Life is good...Your story is better! more please
Date: 06/20/2005 - 01:32 am Title: 20
I like the positive Xander stuff. It's great if it's believable, and I think that back then, Xander still had a lot of potential. Laboring in the back of a truck? Damn. Let Buffy get somewhere solid before she has to push. Please?
Date: 06/19/2005 - 11:25 pm Title: 20
Wow...I love this story. As far as baby fics go, this is completely unique and original. This is great, keep it coming!
Date: 06/19/2005 - 06:17 pm Title: 20
I'm actually relieved that Travers' is a decent, albiet somewhat foolish, in this story. We kinda need that big organization on the good guys team. But, ahhh, she STILL hasn't given birth!! Man! the poor girl! Really awesome chapter, like I knew it would be! Please update soon!
Date: 06/19/2005 - 03:13 pm Title: 20
great chapter, loved the yeliing between giles and xander. Please don't let there be 'angel domenating spike crap' scenes. JUST hate those see ya
Date: 06/19/2005 - 04:28 am Title: 20
for once travers aint against them... so im glad he was helping and all. and xander was juz plain xander. love it waiting for more!
Date: 06/19/2005 - 02:57 am Title: 20
loved it!! just genius!! can't wait for the actual delivery and spike's face...thanx...hope you update soon!!
Date: 06/19/2005 - 01:30 am Title: 20
Fab chapter BSB, kinda glad that soldier girls is alright. Don't worry about the Xander POV, he doesn't shut up for me either sometimes.
Date: 06/19/2005 - 01:01 am Title: 20
Good POV all around. :) And I love how Spike doesn't exactly want to be grateful to Xander and Angel but has to.
Date: 06/19/2005 - 12:36 am Title: 20
When's the baby comin'?huh? (teasing) I'm sure you get that alot...anyways good chapter, looking forward to the next one!
Date: 06/19/2005 - 12:03 am Title: 20
Good guy Travers is definitely a rare pleasure but will he remain good even after the baby is born? Or will his natural assholeness kick in when his curiosity about human-vamp hybrids reverts him back to the Travers we all know and despise? And what about the showdown btwn Angel and Spike? Does Angel even know that Buffy's pushed him aside for his grandchilde? You're doing great. Plz update soon.
Date: 06/18/2005 - 11:13 pm Title: 20
i like travers being the good guy. its about time the council took some care for their slayers. i love the story so far and can't wait for more.
Date: 06/18/2005 - 09:32 pm Title: 20
great update
Date: 06/18/2005 - 06:58 pm Title: 20
It's actually pretty refreshing to see Travers portrayed as something other than the Devil incarnate. Can't wait for the rest! =)
Date: 06/18/2005 - 05:48 pm Title: 20
Yep - clever to tell part of this chapter from Xander's side. It give's the chapter a totally other perspective (Duh - because Xander! Human, normal guy.)
Date: 06/18/2005 - 05:31 pm Title: 20
Hey you made Xander seem almost nice. Someone has to write them decent once in a while. Eagerly awaiting the birth.
Date: 06/18/2005 - 05:30 pm Title: 20
I love Xander in this story! It was great! luv, Spuf
Date: 06/18/2005 - 05:24 pm Title: 20
Love the direction this story is going in. I like seeing Travers being helpful for a change. Please update soon.