Date: 07/08/2008 - 12:06 am Title: Part Five
That was so well written - you surely have the characters and dialogue down - but the literary merit to the story itself - your descriptions and story were top notch. I would love to read more. Thanks.
Date: 06/19/2007 - 12:33 pm Title: Part Five
liked the story and wanted to follow up your A/N but lj says your journal has been deleted and purged? is there anywhere else that you put the symbolism thing up?
am jeanieofoz on lj
Date: 06/24/2005 - 03:04 am Title: Part Five
The storm was exciting and having the ghosts help out was a clever twist. This was a well written, atmospheric interlude in Spike and Buffy's relationship. Buffy's stubborn clinging to her anger and fear was tempered by the fear the storm brought to both of them. I'm looking forward to more in this series.
Date: 06/22/2005 - 06:18 pm Title: Part Five
Really like this story, Excellent characterization of Buffy and Spike; very believable interaction. I have some theories about the symbolism of the storm, all the water, the ghosts, the lighter and candles. I'm going to have to head to your journal and see if I'm totally off base!
Date: 06/22/2005 - 09:48 am Title: Part Five
You're very quick this time :-D I didn't think that this were the intention of the ghost. And good that Buffy told why she won't forgive Spike. I'm sure he can work something out now he knows. And Buffy will too. And the symbols? Can't say I got it - was too busy reading :)
Date: 06/22/2005 - 09:00 am Title: Part Five
Oh honey, I need a epilogue....LOL......5 years later with a wedding....LOL! Great story and realistic of both of them when you really think about it.......great job
Date: 06/22/2005 - 03:50 am Title: Part Five
Great way to start a series! Can't wait for more Buffy & Spike adventures. I hope romance blossoms again soon.
Date: 06/22/2005 - 03:20 am Title: Part Five
Really loved this. Can't wait for the next part of the series:)