Reviews For Don't walk away
Reviewer: Smitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/23/2005 - 05:12 am Title: The salsa at Ilios
Date: 05/23/2005 - 05:12 am Title: The salsa at Ilios
This is a awesome start I can't wait to read more
Reviewer: Panta_Rei Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2005 - 12:15 pm Title: The salsa at Ilios
Date: 05/22/2005 - 12:15 pm Title: The salsa at Ilios
your spelling and stuff is all right, i didn't notice any major errors. it's an interesting beginning, sounds like what you get when you mix She's All That and the Princess Diaries together. looking forward to reading more =)
Reviewer: Spikegirl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2005 - 11:41 am Title: The salsa at Ilios
Date: 05/22/2005 - 11:41 am Title: The salsa at Ilios
Great story, keep the updates going
Reviewer: rev Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2005 - 05:55 am Title: The salsa at Ilios
Date: 05/22/2005 - 05:55 am Title: The salsa at Ilios
So far so good, can't wait until the games really begin :)
Reviewer: carmel Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2005 - 05:55 am Title: The salsa at Ilios
Date: 05/22/2005 - 05:55 am Title: The salsa at Ilios
I think you neglected to mention that this is somewhat based on She's All That... i know it may seem kind of implied but in the real world not mentioning your sources in any kind of writing can get you into trouble...