Date: 05/06/2007 - 05:01 am Title: A vison, a slayer, and a vampire
So glad I found this, you'd stated posting at BSV, I wanted to read it but it was only one chapter. Found it here first try. Very interesting twist. I like S1&2 fics. Excellent first fic, thanks.
Date: 08/21/2006 - 06:27 am Title: A vison, a slayer, and a vampire
what a great plotline! off to read the next chap :D
Date: 06/30/2005 - 12:50 pm Title: A vison, a slayer, and a vampire
Good first chapter! Buffy's all grr eh? Hehe, fun fun!
Date: 06/20/2005 - 02:44 am Title: A vison, a slayer, and a vampire
very nice...can't wait til the two meet! =)
Date: 06/19/2005 - 06:31 pm Title: A vison, a slayer, and a vampire
I like the plot of the story *primal Slayer because of the Master's attack* and will read the rest of it, too.
Date: 05/24/2005 - 06:35 pm Title: A vison, a slayer, and a vampire
After witnessing such positively glowing reviews from authors like Kari, Tasha, and Uncaged, I almost hate that I can’t add my praise to theirs. But, while your first fic shows promise, some things about it could use improvement. The first of which is grammar and punctuation. Most readers won’t even look beyond a gaffed summary to bother to reading something, as their first impression of a new fic has been made. It’s an easily correctable fix, something that a second pair of eyes would most likely have picked up. Also, the shortness of your “chapters” is surprising. It’s like your fic is a compilation of drabbles than an actual story. And, like the previous review mentioned, the constant alternating between first person POVs makes it difficult to follow. Most authors pick one character and stick to it when writing that way. (Most avoid it entirely as a fic loaded with a bunch of “I’s” is rather repetitive, and boring.)
Date: 05/24/2005 - 04:44 am Title: A vison, a slayer, and a vampire
Please write more, Daisy. I know the spacing can be a bugger at times. I do like the idea behind this story. If you want someone to do some spacing or beta, I'd be happy to help. You know where to find me at the MIsfits. {Smiles}
Date: 05/23/2005 - 09:46 pm Title: A vison, a slayer, and a vampire
Very interesting start!! Would like more sooon please.
Date: 05/23/2005 - 05:14 pm Title: A vison, a slayer, and a vampire
My favorite subject matter, Daisy: primal/slayer Buffy and a Spike in need. I can't wait to see where you take us!
Date: 05/23/2005 - 11:55 am Title: A vison, a slayer, and a vampire
looking good chica =)
Date: 05/23/2005 - 06:55 am Title: A vison, a slayer, and a vampire
seems this is off to a good start. Please continue to update soon and often
Date: 05/23/2005 - 06:08 am Title: A vison, a slayer, and a vampire
Good start!!! This has the potential to go sooo many different directions... can't wait to see where you take it!!! ~Lily