Date: 05/25/2005 - 04:09 am Title: Chapter 1
Great so far! Just one thing though- I couldnt stop laughing at Wesley's line "Before I debrief you"- if she only arrived at the scene she would be briefed, not debreifed... all i could picture was stodgy old wesley taking off buffy's knickers!!
Date: 05/25/2005 - 04:03 am Title: Chapter 1
I decided i left to much out :). I love that he doesnt think she needs her beauty sleep and theres obvious attraction from the get go. I love the interaction between the characters, it's very entertaining.....i quess thats it for now but ill let you know what i think when the next chap goes up, which is soon please :)
Date: 05/25/2005 - 04:03 am Title: Chapter 1
Oooh! A murder mystery! I love it! Please, update soon! Luv, Spuf
Date: 05/25/2005 - 04:00 am Title: Chapter 1
OMG wow lol, a whole Xfiles/ Buffy thing. I love it. So Buffys Mulder huh? Awesome twist. I cant wait to see what happens next. Great work so far and please update soon!:) Love Linz