Date: 12/15/2013 - 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 14: Betrayal
Great story, well written, only a few errors. On bigger error is that Solum said he dug up to cause the cave in, but he's firmly established he can't dig up...
Date: 05/19/2006 - 01:46 am Title: Chapter 14: Betrayal
Love the story. Although it seems that now that I found it, I won't get much more. And this wasn't a very nice place to leave it. I have to wonder what Spike is thinking right now. Sure he is hurt by Buffy's reaction, but I think that he cares for her more than Ipwet. He doesn't even know Ipwet. Spike was feeling guilty for the crystal thing, but justified it by it being the only option to get them out, all of them. And you can't forget that he was able to break through the Sire's voice because of his possessiveness for Buffy. Can't wait for more of this lovely story.
Date: 05/18/2006 - 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 14: Betrayal
great chapter but i need more soon.
Date: 05/18/2006 - 08:11 pm Title: Chapter 14: Betrayal
Yeah! Two chapters so soon (but me not having time to read sooner). It's good that Buffy seems to be okay :) But Spike doesn't seem to know how he was able to break the thrall. Oh my.. Spike didn't take it well that Buffy didn't answer his question about what would happen when they are back and even less that Buffy told him her friends would kill him. So what did he do now? Switching sides? I'm not really sure what's going on in his mind.
Date: 05/18/2006 - 12:40 am Title: Chapter 14: Betrayal
Man, I am so hooked on this story. This chapter was excellent. it's so like Spike to lash out in anger after Buffy hurts him. Like others, I'm wondering if his betrayal is genuine right now or if he does have a hidden plan. i don't want to believe he would truly turn on Buffy even as mad as he is and as awful to him as she is. Also, please don't kill Solum because he truly is a rockin' character! Please update soon! The suspense is dreadful!
Date: 05/18/2006 - 12:28 am Title: Chapter 14: Betrayal
loved loved loved the ending.
haha, solum makes me smile!
try to update soon!
Date: 05/17/2006 - 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 14: Betrayal
good chapter can't wait for next one,i really hate that ipwet , can you kill her off? please update rel soon.
Date: 05/17/2006 - 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 14: Betrayal
I would like to think "Oh well, she did not put up a Spike/Other-warning, therefore it won't happen." But unfortunately that's not a guarantee, therefore I'm with DaniD and feel a little worried about what's going to happen in the next couple of chapters. However, his insistence to let Solum (please don't kill him, because he is absolutely my favorite character in this) live and to bring him along leads me to believe that Spike might have indeed a plan after all. Though, we all know how these usually turn out...*sighs*
But this aside I really like you writing, especially when it comes to action scenes.
Date: 05/17/2006 - 08:10 pm Title: Chapter 14: Betrayal
I have to say I'm really disappointed in Spike. Great chapter!
Date: 05/17/2006 - 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 14: Betrayal
No no no no no no no!!!
Date: 05/17/2006 - 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 14: Betrayal
I know better. But update soon.
Date: 05/17/2006 - 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 14: Betrayal
I know he's pissed at Buffy, but... It's still a plan, right? He's doing this to get them all out of this place, right? He can't go from caring about her, to wanting her for dinner just because he's pissed at her, RIGHT?! Update soon, I'm freakin' out here!
Date: 05/17/2006 - 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 14: Betrayal
I am just sad after reading that. One little bit of pause from Buffy..and Spike is knocking her out and calling her dinner. I guess he'll be shagging that stupid vamp sometime in the near future too.. : (
I don't know what to think..I am just going to wait and see what happens next. *sniff..sniff* Thanks for another great update !
Date: 05/17/2006 - 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 14: Betrayal
love this story. more please
Date: 05/17/2006 - 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 14: Betrayal
Arggh!! Poor Buffy. Hope Spike has a secret plan with this... and he hasn´t gone all bad.
Date: 05/17/2006 - 03:12 pm Title: Chapter 14: Betrayal
Damnit, Spike...