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Reviewer: Allison Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2005 - 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 18: 'Family Tries'

I'm happy Dawn's going away for a while- it's good that she'll be safe and won't have to keep living oblivious to the fact that Riley truly is a monster and could come between she and Buffy's new relationship as mother and daughter. Hopefully Spike can throw the book at that bastard soon;)

Author's Response: Dawn will be safe on her grandmother's farm. Spike and Buffy , however, are not safe. Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: jt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2005 - 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 18: 'Family Tries'

awww-what a sweet chapter. Loved the way Dawn knows they have to get rid of Riley Finn. Hope it will be painful. And of course, Dawn will love the farm & Jenny

Author's Response: Dawn's pretty perceptive. Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2005 - 03:59 am Title: Chapter 18: 'Family Tries'

more please

Author's Response: Thank you. spuf

Reviewer: DK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2005 - 03:07 am Title: Chapter 18: 'Family Tries'

Great chapter! Hate to see it come to an end, most truly good times do.

Author's Response: Thanks. It's got about 4 or so more chapters, I think. spuf

Reviewer: Tahmoe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/04/2005 - 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 17: 'Confessions Are Good For The Soul'

I think this is one of my favorite chapters. I'm glad it turned out well. I'm not looking forward to the angst but it want stop me from reading...lol Please let white bread get what's coming to him. And Giles for that matter...chapter 16 really pissed me off...how dare Rupert say that about Buffy and cause so much pain...jackass. Anyway, update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you. I was worried it might be a bit sappy. Giles always put his duty first in the show and that rather bothered me too. So I made him a bit hard nosed in this. Spoiler alert: In the next chapter, Spike and Buffy make some plans for their daughter that includes a certain 'ex-comp teacher' back in Virginia/Maryland. Thanks spuf

Reviewer: Panta_Rei Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2005 - 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 17: 'Confessions Are Good For The Soul'

Aww...beyond cute =D Loved how overjoyed Dawn was, and how astute she is--the "Are you my daddy?" thing was precious!

Author's Response: Thanks. I want this to happy in some places! spuf

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2005 - 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 17: 'Confessions Are Good For The Soul'

good update

Author's Response: Thank you. spuf

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2005 - 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 17: 'Confessions Are Good For The Soul'

Awe - loved it. Dawn did take it very well. I will fasten the seat belts' now for the angst ;-)

Author's Response: Thank you. Better buckle up fas! spuf

Reviewer: veronica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2005 - 05:00 pm Title: Summary & Proglogue

this fic just gets better and better please keep updating it k

Author's Response: Well, thank you. I've enjoyed this fic, but I'm trying to finish it soon. spuf

Reviewer: Cassiopea Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2005 - 01:03 pm Title: Chapter 17: 'Confessions Are Good For The Soul'

I reall love your story, and your characterization of Spike , strong and vulnerable , his well-being always tied up to his 'girls'. Great update!

Author's Response: Thank you. Spike can be tough to write because you don't want him too weak, but yet that William side must shine though! Thanks again, spuf

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2005 - 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 17: 'Confessions Are Good For The Soul'

Dawn handled that beautifully. So glad she was so happy. I thought that was a well done chapter, conveying all emotions. Great job :)

Author's Response: Dawn's an exceptional child! She'd have to be, look who her parents are. Spoiler alert: Our little Spuffy spawn is going on a trip soon. Guess where? Thanks again, spuf

Reviewer: MAGGIE Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2005 - 12:26 pm Title: Chapter 17: 'Confessions Are Good For The Soul'

SO HAPPY TO SEE YOU ADDED ANOTHER WONDERFUL CHAPTER. HOPE YOU WILL ADD ANOTHER VERY SOON DYING TO READ WHAT HAPPENS NEXT...THANK YOU GREAT READ MAGGIE

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm trying to wrap this one and La Cosa Nostra up, soon. spuf

Reviewer: Kar Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2005 - 12:05 pm Title: Chapter 17: 'Confessions Are Good For The Soul'

Very nice

Author's Response: Thank you for sticking with the fic. spuf

Reviewer: Spikes gal pal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2005 - 08:08 am Title: Chapter 12: 'Devil's Own/An Angel's Child'

Aww what a good story, oh no not too corny,yummy Spuffy

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad it wasn't too corny. I wasn't sure how to write it. Now, a little spoiler for the next chapter: Spike and Buffy are going to make some plans for their future and their daughter. spuf

Reviewer: Dannii Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2005 - 05:07 am Title: Chapter 17: 'Confessions Are Good For The Soul'

LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! spuf

Reviewer: Allison Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2005 - 01:17 am Title: Chapter 17: 'Confessions Are Good For The Soul'

Oh! I'm so happy Dawn is okay with the news and that she accepts both Buffy and Spike as her parents:) I hope someone else important does Riley in, like Joyce, Hank, or Giles because they all have a right to step in, that is, if Spike doesn't do it himself... or Xander, for that matter. Hell, Buffy could kill him, too- I just want him gone LOL Excellent update!

Author's Response: It's funny how 'loved' Riley is? Isn't it? Tee hee. Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: H Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2005 - 01:01 am Title: Chapter 17: 'Confessions Are Good For The Soul'

Ooohhh, it's Giles isn't it. I mean he totally owes them this right? Then Spike will forgive him! Loved it - more please:)

Author's Response: I'll drop a hint, a little one...no, it's not Giles. However, I suspect Spike will forgive his father, eventually. Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2005 - 12:08 pm Title: Chapter 16: 'Fathers & Sons; Mothers & Daughters'

I'm sorry to see that Giles could have spared Buffy and Dawn (and Spike) some hearaches. They lost so much time. And I think Giles will miss Spike and his grandchilde a lot. I don't think that Dawn will reject neither Buffy nor Spike - she'll love it. Buffy won't let Spike turn his back to his father? I don't know.. we'll see, huh?

Author's Response: I wrote Giles a bit harsh here, but hopefully things will take a turn for the better later. In the next chapter, Dawn will definitely find out the truth. Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: Panta_Rei Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2005 - 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 16: 'Fathers & Sons; Mothers & Daughters'

Yay, you updated! LOL loved this chapter and how sweet their conversation was at the end...although the anger between Rupert and Spike made me sad =( Can't wait to see how Dawn reacts!

Author's Response: Thank you. Hopefully Spike can come to grips with his father's betrayal. Don't count Dawn's tenacity out just yet! spuf

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2005 - 01:09 pm Title: Chapter 16: 'Fathers & Sons; Mothers & Daughters'

So glad you updated this story! I missed it. Love how Spike flipped out on Giles, that was great. And he deserved it. Please keep it coming!

Author's Response: Thanks. Yes, Giles gets his priorities confused sometimes. spuf

Reviewer: Allison Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2005 - 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 16: 'Fathers & Sons; Mothers & Daughters'

Fantastic update! It was sad to see what happened between Spike and Rupert, but I could definitely understand why Spike was so angry. Plus, I'm happy Xander was there to help put things in perspective. I can't wait to see how Dawn views the truth, but I'm sure she'll take it fairly okay since she likes Spike more than Riley LOL

Author's Response: Thanks. Hopefully, Buffy can help Spike deal with Rupert. After all, she has alot to deal with where her parents are concerned and they are not out of the picture yet. Thanks again spuf

Reviewer: MAGGIE Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2005 - 12:06 pm Title: Chapter 16: 'Fathers & Sons; Mothers & Daughters'

AS ALWAYS LOVED IT I DON T THINK DAWN WILL REJECT THEM I M JUST WORRIED THAT DAWN MIGHT SLIP UP IN FRONT OF RILEY AND SAY SOMETHING ABOUT SPIKE KEEP UP THE GOOD WRITING SO LOVING THIS STORY SOON VERY SOON I HOPE SOME MORE NICE LONG CHAPTERS.....THANKS MAGGIE

Author's Response: Thank you. Don't worry about Dawn, it's Riley that you have to worry about. Long chapters are my life! spuf

Reviewer: Kar Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2005 - 11:30 am Title: Chapter 16: 'Fathers & Sons; Mothers & Daughters'

Good chapter, can't wait to read Dawn's reaction

Author's Response: Thanks. Dawn might surprise everyone! spuf

Reviewer: DK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2005 - 04:51 am Title: Chapter 16: 'Fathers & Sons; Mothers & Daughters'

Great story just caught up on it tonight. All your stories have been great, nice to know you have some ready to begin.

Author's Response: Thank you. I think I've got this one written out to the finish (in my head!) spuf

Reviewer: teasha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2005 - 02:37 am Title: Chapter 16: 'Fathers & Sons; Mothers & Daughters'

love ypur stories and this one especially...........can't wait for the update....I hope Dawn is forgiving I always thought she looked like buffy and spike in the show...............

Author's Response: Thank you. I always thought Dawn should have been Buffy and Spike's child! spuf

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