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Reviewer: Tahmoe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/21/2005 - 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 12: 'Devil's Own/An Angel's Child'

I'm glad Spike finally knows about Dawn. I don't blame Spike for being tore up over Buffy. She had to get the hell out of dodge when Faith called her. Buffy parents and Riley suck. I'm loving Andrew in this. Revenge is so sweet. Now the sex scene...personally I thought it could have been hotter so I don't know why you toned it down...go for it next time...if there is going to be a next time...hoping so. Now don't get me wrong, I did enjoy it especially the urgency. It made perfect sense. I don't why you thought it was corny maybe because you knew it should have been hotter...lol I know you can do better than that I've read some of your other stories. Write this damn fic the way you want it to happen. Looking forward to an update soon as well as the take down of Riley Finn.

Author's Response: I loved Andrew in Season 7. He was such a silly contradiction of himself! I wanted his part in the whole thing to be 'big' and based on revenge against Riley. Andrew just seemed to worship Spike at times so I thought his allegiance to our blond hero would be appropriate. There will be more Spuffy sex 'coming' tee hee, in the next chapter. Our couple needs to bond alot more, physically. Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: Panta_Rei Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/21/2005 - 01:13 am Title: Chapter 9: 'Tell Me!'

Oooh, Xander know now...it just keeps getting better =D Absolutely loved this chap, and now I'm sad cuz I have to go to bed and I can't read any more! lol I'll get caught up tomorrow =D

Author's Response: Yeah! spuf

Reviewer: Mave Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2005 - 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 12: 'Devil's Own/An Angel's Child'

Hey! I love your story! The suspense is really good and the twists of the plot just makes us want more! Please update soon! Mave

Author's Response: Thanks! I try, really I do. I hope I haven't hit a block wall into 'anti-climax' in the plot line! spuf

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2005 - 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 12: 'Devil's Own/An Angel's Child'

I loved the chapter. I 'm glad to truth is now told. And I hope Riley will be go down soon :)) I'm not sure what will happen now - if Buffy has to go back to Riley for now .. or not. Well, we'll see :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm trying to come up with an idea to keep Buffy away from Riley. Think I've got it! spuf

Reviewer: Charlene Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2005 - 03:05 pm Title: Chapter 12: 'Devil's Own/An Angel's Child'

You knew it couldn't last much longer, right? The UST between them. I'm glad that all the ugly truths are finally out. Riley is about to go down - I can just feel it in my bones! YIPPEE! I also wanted to say that I thoroughly enjoy all your fics and I am a faithful "fan." I know that you have had some hard times as of late. Keep writing. More people than you know enjoy what you do! Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! The truth is out, yes, but Riley Finn is still in the way of our Spuffy...big time. He so needs to be taken out. I'm just having a hard time deciding 'who' should do it! LOL Thank you for your support on my fics. spuf

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2005 - 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 12: 'Devil's Own/An Angel's Child'

Very passionate chapter. From anger to love..It was intense and I liked it a lot! :) So glad they might now be on the same page.

Author's Response: Thanks. I wanted the anger first, like in the show in Season 6. I am glad you enjoyed it. spuf

Reviewer: inquisitive1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2005 - 05:05 am Title: Chapter 12: 'Devil's Own/An Angel's Child'

so loving it! can't wait to hear the fully story behind Buffy's secrets... and her loser parents and Finn. Someone so needs to smack her Dad around for everything.

Author's Response: Thanks. Buffy's parents are weak (that's the monster in them). Finn is just plain evil (that's the monster in him). Hank is an ass too. Thanks for reading and reviewing, spuf

Reviewer: DK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2005 - 04:00 am Title: Chapter 12: 'Devil's Own/An Angel's Child'

Love the spuffy scene but where were they? Also love the description of Dawn. Just noticed you did a new period piece and I can't wait to start it. Love your period pieces.

Author's Response: Oh, they were at a deserted rest area/picnic area outside of Sunnydale. (Those crazy kids!) spuf

Reviewer: DK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2005 - 04:00 am Title: Chapter 12: 'Devil's Own/An Angel's Child'

Love the spuffy scene but where were they? Also love the description of Dawn. Just noticed you did a new period piece and I can't wait to start it. Love your period pieces.

Author's Response: Thanks. I hope the sex scene was okay! spuf

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2005 - 04:00 am Title: Chapter 12: 'Devil's Own/An Angel's Child'

It's So Wondereful. Please Update Soon

Author's Response: Thank you, I'll try. spuf

Reviewer: Allison Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2005 - 03:55 am Title: Chapter 12: 'Devil's Own/An Angel's Child'

I loved it! Spike's reaction Dawn was beautifully sweet, and I'm happy he talked things out with Buffy- that was very imperative. Plus, them hooking up at the end was hot- I love sexy Spuffyness:) She knows he's in the FBI now, so maybe she'll really let him help her and Dawn whilst locking up Riley

Author's Response: Thanks. I was afraid I got a little sappy with the Dawn thing? I wanted Spike and Buffy to have rough reunion sex because they are both very 'perturbed' at each other at this time. spuf

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2005 - 03:50 am Title: Chapter 12: 'Devil's Own/An Angel's Child'

i absolutely loved it and i thought that you did a fantastic job on it

Author's Response: Thank you. I get all wiggy when I write sex scenes! spuf

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2005 - 10:25 am Title: Chapter 11: 'Her Future'

I hope Spike will act on some Xander said... Xander did fight for Cordelia. I hope Spike will start fight soon. I can't stand this whole Buffy/Riley and hope it will be over soon. RIley isn't a good person anyway - so maybe he can have an accident? Or something like that? ;-) Looking forward to the next chapter - and what Andrew will do.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Spoiler alert for next chapter: It's a long one, the chapter I mean. Andrew is going to call Spike and offer a little advice to him. Actually, Andrew is going to tell Spike to take a little trip to Sunnydale to get some 'answers' about Buffy. spuf

Reviewer: Allison Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/15/2005 - 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 11: 'Her Future'

I hope all goes well with Buffy and Dawn, and Riley's such a jerk- he'd make a horrible dad. Very interesting backstory for Xander, and I feel bad for him that his life sucked so bad pre-Cordy and hasn't improved that much since. And I wish Spike would just grab the bull by the horns, yell at Riley, and tell the great oaf to back the hell off so he can have his woman back:) I can't wait to see Spike's reaction to the news about Dawnie

Author's Response: Thanks for reading. Yes, Riley is a jerk, but here's the really sad part...Riley does love Buffy, desperately. He is not going to just throw in the towel over her or Spike. spuf

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/15/2005 - 06:06 am Title: Chapter 11: 'Her Future'

great update but i cant wait to see how spike reacts when he learns the truth about dawn

Author's Response: Thanks. spuf

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/15/2005 - 05:45 am Title: Chapter 11: 'Her Future'

It's just so great, i really hope they end up together soon. Please update soon

Author's Response: Thank you. I always write Spuffy, so be assured that Spike and Buffy will end up together, however, Riley is still a problem! spuf

Reviewer: DK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/15/2005 - 04:16 am Title: Chapter 11: 'Her Future'

Good chapter, sometimes it takes time working into the plot. So far you have done excellent work. Will be looking for the next installment.

Author's Response: Thanks. The next chapter will just have to be very long, that's why it's taking me so much time to post it. spuf

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/15/2005 - 03:55 am Title: Chapter 11: 'Her Future'

Ohh..I can't imagine how Spike is going to be when he gets her alone after that annoucement! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks. He won't be pleased, I assure you. spuf

Reviewer: Tahmoe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/15/2005 - 03:46 am Title: Chapter 11: 'Her Future'

I really enjoyed the chapter especially the flashback when Buffy told Spike she loved him. Oh and I'm a dumb ass I thought Angel was the mole in the FBI for Riley Finn on my last review...sorry that review probably confused you but I got it together now. Riley makes me sick. I can't stand him. Please kill this bastard off soon. Also, you're right... get a move on with this story...lol...just kidding...I need to do the same with mine. Anyway, I expect an update soon and some Spuffyness... these two need it right about now and oh when Spike finds out about Dawn..please do not have him go easy on Buffy. I want some good angst. Boy, I'm demanding...lol Thanks for the update

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm struggling with the next chapter because I want it to be believable. I can't very well just have Spike fall into Buffy's arms, all dewy eyed with joy, when he finds out about Dawn. Spoiler alert: I was thinking along the lines of how Spike and Buffy first 'got together' in season 6. Some anger, lust and violence? I'm not sure, it's eluding me. Anyway, thank you. spuf

Reviewer: Jess Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/15/2005 - 03:40 am Title: Chapter 11: 'Her Future'

Great update! Can't wait for more (and for the 'big reveal' part about Dawn!)

Author's Response: Thanks. That should be in the next chapter. spuf

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2005 - 06:48 am Title: Chapter 10: 'What Rainbow?'

great update

Author's Response: Thanks! spuf

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2005 - 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 10: 'What Rainbow?'

Well, I still don't like the Buffy/Riley. Not a little bit! But I'll read on... But Buffy's decision is wrong. I just hope she'll see that for herself in time - before it's too late. For her, her daughter and Spike.

Author's Response: Biley...so boring, huh? It's okay, though, I promise the next chapter that a certain blond male is going to crack that Biley stuff wide open. Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: Allison Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2005 - 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 10: 'What Rainbow?'

I'm glad Angel's not a bad man in this fic- Riley's bad enough. I really hope Buffy doesn't decide to accept Riley's proposal for marriage, and hopefully Spike can swoop in sooner rather than later to save both her and Dawn. And now we're beginning to find out what Joyce and Hank did to somehow wind up in Finn's debt. Great update:)

Author's Response: Yeah, I thought i'd give old Angel a break this time! (No so in the next WIP, however. Here's a hint: Angel is a 'villain' but then again, so is Spike!!! In fact, they're cousins!) Okay, so, as far as Riley goes in this fic and this proposal... Buffy doesn't know William's true identity (FBI) so she's running scared out of desperation. Right now, she thinks that William is Spike and that he's a bad guy too. Hank indebted himself to his 'boss' Riley and being a smarmy asshole, he sold off his only daughter to the man. In future chapters, flashbacks will reveal what prompted Buffy to run from William 7 years before. Yes, Hank, Joyce and Riley had something to do with it. Thanks again, luv Spuf

Reviewer: moonorchid Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2005 - 02:13 pm Title: Chapter 10: 'What Rainbow?'

this is a really interesting story...I read it from the beginning to ch. 10 and I like it alot. I hope Buffy doesen't accept the proposal from Riley before Spike or anyone confronts her about Dawn. I loved that twst by the way. When I read that, I literally sat back and thought "oh god"....I was really surprised and thrilled cause it made so much sense to me considering the circumstances. Can't wait for Spike to figure this out...the shit will certainly hit te fan when he does. Keep up the good work and update soon!!!

Author's Response: Thank you, always happy to hear from a new reader! Yes, Spike needs to come to the party and figure this out. I'm still trying to plot out that little scenario! Thanks again, luv, Spuf

Reviewer: Tahmoe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2005 - 01:50 pm Title: Chapter 10: 'What Rainbow?'

Godd chapter..now Angel is going to tell it, damn. Please let Xander tell Spike before its too late. Ewww, sex with Riley...glad no details..lol Update soon

Author's Response: Thank you. (I detest Biley!) Luv, Spuf

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