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Reviewer: teasha Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2005 - 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 6: 'The First Time'

love this story....................can't wait for next update

Author's Response: Thank you. Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2005 - 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 6: 'The First Time'

wow what a chapter full of suprises keep up the good work

Author's Response: I love to write surprises! Might be some more in this one... Thanks, Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: Diana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2005 - 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 6: 'The First Time'

Good conclusion by Andrew side, Buffy should tell Spike what really happen.

Author's Response: Thank you. I always enjoy a good guy Andrew. He could be so sweet and kind, even if he offed Johnathan in the show! Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: Anne Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2005 - 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 6: 'The First Time'

Great chapther

Author's Response: Thank you, Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: Tahmoe Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2005 - 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 6: 'The First Time'

I'm suspecting the condom must have broke or they had one of those moments where they got caught up and decided to use the withdrawal method but Spike didn't withdraw in time...lol I didn't see that coming. Oh I can't wait until Spike and Riley find out. Looking forward to the angst and thanks for the quick update

Author's Response: Yeah, you just can't trust those cut rate condoms, can you? (Believe me, I know from personal experience!) Thank you. I won't be able to update 'this' story or my others today or maybe tomorrow. Home improvements first! Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2005 - 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 6: 'The First Time'

Yay - I was right too. *smile* I wonder what Spike will say when someone tells him or he find out. Oh - and Giles is a granddad! I just hope you won't marry Buffy to Riley.

Author's Response: Thank you. Well, Spike 'is' Spike, right? Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2005 - 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 5: 'The Key'

safe, happy habitat mmmm How old is Dawn now when she came to the schol being five? I think I have an inkling why Dawn is a pawn. I'll did the math so to say.... Am I right?

Author's Response: You probably guessed it! Thanks, Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2005 - 04:41 pm Title: Chapter 4: 'I'm Still In Love With You'

So Dawn may be the key to how Buffy acts like she does? Good at last the Spike still loves Buffy. I don't know what it is about Buffy - but yet she is with Riley :))

Author's Response: Yes she is, definitely. Thanks, Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: stace Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2005 - 04:02 pm Title: Chapter 6: 'The First Time'

muahah i knew it! *sigh* i love it when dawn is there kid. spike's just so great then. what a freakin jerk.. what does riley MAKE her send dawn away just because he doesn't like the fact that she had a kid with someone else? asshole. and how sweet was buffy and spike's first time. 'home' is where they should have stayed. ;) keep it comin!

Author's Response: I always thought Dawn had Spike's blue eyes. I also think that perhaps it was Spike and Buffy that the monks used to create her, but... Thanks, Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: Mischa Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2005 - 03:30 pm Title: Chapter 6: 'The First Time'

I'm a little confused now...Dawn is Buffy and Spikes child?! Please update soooon!!!

Author's Response: I can pop in long enough to respond to your question. YES, Dawn is Spike and Buffy's child. (frankly? I always thought she was on the show too. And I am certain that the whole issue would have been explored if BTVS had of continued! Thanks, Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: Allison Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2005 - 02:27 pm Title: Chapter 6: 'The First Time'

I KNEW Dawn was Buffy's kid, not her sister. There was no way in hell that Joyce and Hank had such a young daughter, especially when Buffy was so much older...unless she was an accident-kid, and I doubted that. Screw Riley- he's a jerk- but I can't wait to see how Spike reacts to finding out he has a kid! That's so exciting!:)

Author's Response: Thank you. Riley detests Dawn because she is a reminder to him that he was not Buffy's first. Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2005 - 08:26 am Title: Chapter 5: 'The Key'

great update

Author's Response: Thanks. Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: Tahmoe Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2005 - 02:41 am Title: Chapter 5: 'The Key'

I'm sorry but I can't take Riley anymore. Please kill him. He makes me sick. I can't believe Dawn is in a bording school at the age of six. Boy that sucks. I feel so sorry for Buffy and her family situation and on top of that she's with a man she can't stand. I so pissed off right now...lol This story has to have a happy ending. Thanks for the quick update Spuf. Keep it coming

Author's Response: He is a prick, isn't he??? Thank you, it should go okay, soon. Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: inquisitive1 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2005 - 01:53 am Title: Chapter 5: 'The Key'

Hmm... I have an idea why Finn is bitter and why Dawn isn't with her family... am I right? I guess I'll have to wait to find out.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing. Spoiler/hint alert!!! I do believe you have probably deciphered my anvils!!! Thank you! Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2005 - 01:32 am Title: Chapter 5: 'The Key'

Hmmm...Interesting!! More please! :)

Author's Response: Thank you and I sent you an E. Okay, I see you got the E! I won't spoil you any more! Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: stace Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2005 - 01:14 am Title: Chapter 5: 'The Key'

ahah.. i see.. its a little clearer in this chapter. riley needs to be kicked in the junk. jerk.. thinkin dawn's a brat. bah.

Author's Response: I love to drop hints in my stories, throughout them. Thank you. Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: shippy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2005 - 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 4: 'I'm Still In Love With You'

Great chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you. And thank you for your E mail of encouragment. The 'key' to Riley's hold over Buffy is in the next chapter. Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2005 - 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 4: 'I'm Still In Love With You'

Sigh. I hope he can get her back! Great job.

Author's Response: Thank you. Keep your fingers crossed! Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: Allison Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2005 - 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 4: 'I'm Still In Love With You'

I'm happy Spike still loves her, and I hope the feeling's mutual on Buffy's side, even if she can't admit it because of Riley. Loved the flashback, too- that hotel is SO beautiful, and I'd imagine it'd be rather romantic for a young couple falling in love. I wonder what they did after you ended the flashback... :) It's cool to know that Jenny was only 17 when she met Rupert- it's a nice detail to hear about considering Buffy was 17 when she met Spike. I can't wait for more!

Author's Response: The 'first' time Spike and Buffy will be in a future chapter. The next chapter, coming soon, might explain Riley's hold on Buffy. The 'key' to Riley's power over Buffy is definitely in the next chapter. Thanks, luv, Spuf

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2005 - 02:49 am Title: Chapter 4: 'I'm Still In Love With You'

good update

Author's Response: Thanks! Luv, spuf

Reviewer: Tahmoe Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2005 - 02:40 am Title: Chapter 4: 'I'm Still In Love With You'

Good chapter but once again I find myself getting into it and wanting to read me then you caught me off damn it...lol Please update soon

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm trying to finish the next chapter. It 'might' explain the hold that Riley has over Buffy. Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: Shippy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2005 - 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 3: 'Tell Me Why'

Riveting story!

Author's Response: Thank you! Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: Allison Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2005 - 07:38 pm Title: Chapter 3: 'Tell Me Why'

I'm happy that Buffy confessed a bunch of things to Spike/William. Also, it's nice to hear that Andrew is on Buffy's side moreso than on Riley's. It's sad to think that both Buffy and Spike lied to each other in the past about stuff, but now they have the ability to improve things, so I really hope that they can. I mean, it's obvious Buffy needs to get away from Riley, so hopefully Spike can 'rescue' her and screw over Riley at the same time:)

Author's Response: Yes, Buffy confessed alot, as did Spike. However, they both are holding back even more info from each other. Spike cannot tell Buffy who he really is, however, I'll spoil you: Buffy will soon find out that Spike is still being dishonest about who he really is. Buffy may be keeping an even bigger secret from everyone. Thanks, Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: tahmoe Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2005 - 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 3: 'Tell Me Why'

Just when its getting good you end it. I hate this torture. Update soon

Author's Response: Thank you. My oldest daughter is headed back up to Frisco, so tonight I might be able to write and submit more. Luv,Spuf

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2005 - 01:09 pm Title: Chapter 3: 'Tell Me Why'

I managed to read the update too. I hope it will be clear between the two of them soon. Yeah, only being 17 was a reason... but I doubt it was the only one she left.. wonder what happened than. And I hope she'll leave Riley soon ;-) I can hope, can't I?

Author's Response: Thanks again. I'm not sure where you live, however, in the US, 17 is underage for sexual relations with a man over 18 (and with a woman over 18, if the guy is underage). We just had a huge case out here, remember the teacher and her student? That was really extreme, yes, but even when I was in HS, there was a couple of cases between male teachers and 17 year old girls. It can get really nasty, especially if the parents of the underage person get involved. (This is long, sorry) Hank would definitely have caused trouble for William/Spike had he found out. Mr. Summers had already made plans for Buffy's future with Riley. There is other things, however, that are keeping Buffy tied to Riley. LUv, Spuf

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