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Reviewer: Allison Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/31/2005 - 01:23 am Title: Chapter 22: 'Something Is Off'

I can't believe Riley had the audacity to lie and say her mother was ill- that's just another point in his jerk column. And the fact he's abusive doesn't help. I just hope Spike can stop him before he does anything else incredibly drastic and scary- Riley needs to be severely hurt, if not thrown in jail or killed. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Riley's a real peach, eh? Hold on, a few more surprises! Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: Panta_Rei Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2005 - 09:02 pm Title: Chapter 21: 'The Cat's Out Of The Bag!'

*bounces* I want Riley to just DIE!!! but hey, it's still a wonderful story ;)

Author's Response: I want Riley to die too, believe me! Thank you, hold on, it's going to get bumpy! spuf

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2005 - 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 21: 'The Cat's Out Of The Bag!'

Uh-huh... that's not good. Glared at Hank - why had he to call? Not the cat is really out of the bag. Hoping the best!

Author's Response: Nope, not good, very bad, really. Yes, the cat's out of the bag, but remember Felix the Cat? He had a bag of tricks! Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2005 - 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 21: 'The Cat's Out Of The Bag!'

Uh oh...Not of the good...ALways something to spoil there fun :( More please!

Author's Response: No, this is not good. Riley is a dickhead....okay, I'm just venting now (tee hee) I had a lousy day at work, dealing with people who haven't got a clue! Thank you, I do appreciate your reading and reviewing. spuf

Reviewer: maggie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2005 - 07:58 am Title: Chapter 21: 'The Cat's Out Of The Bag!'

WAS HAPPY TO SEE A NEW CHAPTER,WOE HERE COMES THE TROUBLE CONFRONTATION TIME I HOPE YOU ADD ANOTHER CHAPTER SOON DYING TO READ WHAT COMES NEXT..............THANKS MAGGIE

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm trying to get this wrapped up, along with La Cosa Nostra and start To Know The Human Heart. Next? Trouble in Beverly City! spuf

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2005 - 04:56 am Title: Chapter 21: 'The Cat's Out Of The Bag!'

good updates

Author's Response: Thank you very much, spuf

Reviewer: Tahmoe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2005 - 03:15 am Title: Chapter 21: 'The Cat's Out Of The Bag!'

OMG...I'm so scared for these two...please update soon..oh and love the crack about SMG

Author's Response: Be afraid, be very afraid. Thank you for your reading and reviewing. spuf

Reviewer: Allison Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2005 - 02:27 am Title: Chapter 21: 'The Cat's Out Of The Bag!'

Uh oh, that won't lead to anything positive LOL I don't want anything bad to happen to Buffy and Spike- they've already been through enough. Hopefully Graham goes away and Riley moves on, that pathetic bastard. Hank could back off a bit, too. It'll be interestng to see what kind of angst arises next:)

Author's Response: No, it won't! You'll have to forgive me, I had a lousy day at work, dealing with male chauvinist pig(s). Anyway, on a happier note, this story is coming close to the end, even if it seems scary right now. Thank you, again, for reading and reviewing. spuf

Reviewer: slayerspet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2005 - 02:59 pm Title: Chapter 20: 'Reconciled'

Hey...I love the story and cant wait till you update it. Good job!

Author's Response: New update right now! Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2005 - 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 20: 'Reconciled'

Riley is so full of himself - what is good; he didn't notice Buffy lying to him. Loved the Spike - Giles part. And the poem fits the story very well :-D

Author's Response: Riley isn't full of himself....he's full sh**! Okay, I dislike Riley, can't help it. In fact, my next fiction? Riley will be Buffy's ex because he's a dickhead that broke her heart. I'm going to pimp my next fiction here; Riley is Buffy's ex, Drusilla is Spike's ex; this time, no present romantic entanglements for either of our Spuffy duo. The dilema is going to be Spike getting Buffy to learn to trust and love again. I intend on starting that fic as soon as I've complete this one or one of the others. Anyway, back to this fic..... Monique, my youngest brilliant daughter (my oldest is a chemist genius!) was a little insecure about her poetry. She's more into art/drawing, acting, etc. I think she's talented at everything, of course, and I'm very happy that the readers here seemed to enjoy her poetry. Thanks again, spuf Okay, back to this one

Reviewer: Allison Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2005 - 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 20: 'Reconciled'

Excellent poem! I'm happy Spike and Giles talked- that was nice to see. And Riley, well, I'm happy Buffy won't be staying there with him more LOL He's such an arrogant, maniacal jerk who deserves something vile to happen to him... please?:)

Author's Response: Thank you from Monique and myself. Riley is a dickhead. That will be proven beyond a doubt, in the next few chapters! spuf

Reviewer: DK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2005 - 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 20: 'Reconciled'

Spufette,
Please tell Monique I really liked the poem and keep on writing them, the world does not have enough poems. Nice to know she is such a good writer as yourself, great chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you from Monique and myself. She is like most 14 year old girls, kind of insecure about her gifts. She draws very well, also and is thinking of becoming a fashion designer! Thanks again for reading, spuf

Reviewer: letitia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2005 - 02:57 pm Title: Chapter 20: 'Reconciled'

AUGH... I can just imagine Riley when she first came in the house. Just glad that they have a plan in place and a course of action. Also glad that Spike was able to make up with his father. He has a family now and they are all going to need each other when this is all over. Great update.

Author's Response: Riley always reminded me of a puppy dog, i don't know why? Thank you. spuf

Reviewer: Spikes gal pal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2005 - 09:40 am Title: Chapter 19: 'Promises'

oh thank goodness Dawn is safe (she is safe isn't she?) just hope They get rid of Riley soon.Great story !!

Author's Response: Yes, she's safe. Thank you, Riley is well....not safe. spuf

Reviewer: Jess Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2005 - 04:33 am Title: Chapter 20: 'Reconciled'

Great update, I can't wait to read more of this fic! Also, tell your daughter she's a great poet! :)

Author's Response: Thank you and my daughter thanks you too! spuf

Reviewer: tahmoe Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/17/2005 - 10:46 pm Title: Chapter 19: 'Promises'

Great chapter and thanks for the warning...that damn Riley...kill the bastard soon. Looking forward to the next update.

Author's Response: Thank you. Riley will get what's coming, promise. Next chapter is up. spuf

Reviewer: Panta_Rei Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/15/2005 - 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 19: 'Promises'

aww, very cute...in a sexy sort of way ;) Can't wait for LA to happen!

Author's Response: Thanks. Next chapter is up! spuf

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2005 - 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 19: 'Promises'

*gg* Good that Spike's mother had a good timing ;-) Uh - trouble ahead? Riley maybe .. Till next time!

Author's Response: Thank you for sticking with this story. It's going to get pretty sad, probably next chapter. spuf

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2005 - 01:03 pm Title: Chapter 19: 'Promises'

Love the bits about nailing Riley in his coffin lol. Great job. Really loving this story. More please!

Author's Response: Yes, I wanted to throw in the silver bullets for comic relief! Spoiler hint here: It might not necessarily be Spike who nails the coffin down on Riley! Thanks spuf

Reviewer: maggie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2005 - 03:14 am Title: Chapter 19: 'Promises'

GREAT CHAPTER LOOKING FORWARD TO READING THE NEXT CHAPTER FOR THE ACTION BETWEEN SPIKE ,BUFFY AND RILEY .I HOPE THEY GET HIM GOOD .....THANK YOU PLEASE A NICE LONG CHAPTER VERY SOON...MAGGIE

Author's Response: Thanks. Yes, Riley is up to something, however, with Dawn out of the picture and stashed safely away? There's nothing holding Buffy back from really letting Riley have it. spuf

Reviewer: Allison Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2005 - 02:40 am Title: Chapter 19: 'Promises'

Uh oh, I bet Riley's going to bang some skulls when they return, that jerk. I'm happy Gunn and Fred will take care of Dawnie- I always liked them paired together. Plus, the sexy interaction between Buffy and Spike was a nice perk;)

Author's Response: Well, something like that, I'm afraid. Thank you, spuf

Reviewer: Panta_Rei Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2005 - 01:44 pm Title: Chapter 18: 'Family Tries'

Aww, Dawn's so sweet =) And Smallville *giggle* Nice little joke ;) Loved this chapter and how things are starting to resolve themselves, can't wait till Riley is dealt with once and for all!

Author's Response: Yeah, Dawn's a little pixie, isn't she? I think she always had the best traits of both of her parents (and yes, I believe that Buffy and Spike were truly her parents in the show). Riley's day of reckoning is coming, I promise. Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: Tahmoe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/07/2005 - 03:43 am Title: Chapter 18: 'Family Tries'

Enjoyed the update and I know you warned us about he approaching angst but RILEY SUCKS!!!!!! just had to spoil everything. Update soon...I hope I can handle the s**t hitting the fan

Author's Response: Thank you. Yes, Riley will be the instigator of the angst. spuf

Reviewer: MAGGIE Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/07/2005 - 12:19 am Title: Chapter 18: 'Family Tries'

WOW LOVED THIS CHAPTER THINGS ARE FINALLY COMING TO THE CONFRONTATION BETWEEN RILEY AND SPIKE BUFFY .DYING TO READ WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT PLEASE NICE LONG CHAPTER SOON .........THANKS GREAT READ MAGGIE

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you like it. The Riley vs. Spike/Buffy is coming sooner then you think, spuf

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2005 - 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 18: 'Family Tries'

*gg* You have to love Dawn's logic *grin* (with her it's simple that her parents belong together). And it's better Dawn is away with her grandmother for the big showdown - taking Riley down Yesss - at last ;-)

Author's Response: Dawn is brilliant! Thanks, spuf

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