Date: 11/16/2005 - 08:23 pm Title: Chapter Five
This chapter was by far THE best I've ever read in any fic. It was so vividly described, the creepy feel was scaring me lol! The idea itself was on I've never heard of/read about before and I thought it was so original! This story has already become one of my favourites! AWESOME job!
Date: 11/11/2005 - 03:27 pm Title: Chapter Five
Great fic! Love it! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Date: 11/09/2005 - 10:07 pm Title: Chapter Five
Love your story so far. can't wait to see how your going to work the sire/childe thing with Angelus. I hope S/B still have chance to get together. and all that about the painting - can't wait to learn more about that!
Please write more real soon! Thanks for all the hard work!
Date: 11/09/2005 - 09:48 pm Title: Chapter Five
It's better for you when I don't sing *gg* so I won't! So Buffy is really Angelus' childe now. Wonder what it means for her future. Thanks for the update, hun!
Date: 11/09/2005 - 02:32 pm Title: Chapter Five
This is a great story - still vampires but a complete turnabout in situation, offering unfamiliar roles and characterizations - thus far. As such, there is no clear storyline route, and this makes it very interesting. Now she is an Aurelian proper, what will happen next?
Date: 11/09/2005 - 09:47 am Title: Chapter Five
good chapter. more please
Date: 11/09/2005 - 07:51 am Title: Chapter Five
Great chapter. Looking forward to more of this. Please update soon.
Date: 11/09/2005 - 06:19 am Title: Chapter Five
Good job with this chapter. The ritual was vividly described and again the imagery was quite beautiful (if somewhat terrifying, lol). I'm further impressed with the depth you've bought to Penn's character in this chapter as his struggle was also evident and quite touching. You could easily have made his experience incidental, using him simply as a plot device to bring Buffy into the fold thus making her accessible to Spike (ah the Spuffy lovin...will I ever kick the habit?) You've fortunately managed to resist taking that route and presented instead a story that, while rich in detail and emotion, still leaves the reader hungry to learn more. Thank you.
Date: 11/09/2005 - 06:05 am Title: Chapter Five
okay? it was wonderfull. can't wait to see what happens now that she's part of the family. and how her and spike are going to get together. more soon if your muse allows.
Date: 11/09/2005 - 04:57 am Title: Chapter Five
Really good update, even with the icky Angel touching.
Date: 11/09/2005 - 04:32 am Title: Chapter Five
It was a fantastic chapter. So vivid...so intense. I do hope that you post an update soon. I am really interested in this story.
Date: 11/09/2005 - 03:37 am Title: Chapter Five
Intense. Kinda reminds me those virgins sacraficed in those old virgin sacraficing movies. Cool chapter.
Date: 11/09/2005 - 03:01 am Title: Chapter Five
Wow that was fabulous. I loved the ritual. Can't wait for more. Please update soon!!
Date: 11/09/2005 - 01:56 am Title: Chapter Five
hoped it turned out ok? it was great, please hurry and update again soon :)
Date: 11/09/2005 - 01:20 am Title: Chapter Five
YAY! Update! Update! Update! YAY! More soon I hope
Date: 11/09/2005 - 01:13 am Title: Chapter Five
love this story... I enjoyed the ritual.........can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 11/09/2005 - 01:11 am Title: Chapter Five
You really expressed how horrible it is for Buffy to lose her Sire I'm looking forward to your next update..