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Reviewer: Aisling Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2005 - 09:54 am Title: Ashes to ashes

please update soon... :D cant wait! let Will go... he ahs to see Buffy before she breaks down completely! :P cya xx

Author's Response: Thanx :) No worries, he'll get out soon and he will find Buffy sooner or later.....thanx again!

Reviewer: PyroDeScorpio Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2005 - 06:54 am Title: Ashes to ashes

Holy Moly... I didn't see the whole William turning into vamp thing coming. Wowzers, tis a great story! Can't wait to see what happens next! ~*Jenn*~

Author's Response: Lol its in the summary but in a way its cool that you missed it, i love it when you can shock a reader (as long as it's not an uber bad shock!!!). Thanx so much for reading and leaving such a sweet review, i appreciate it. Hope you like the next chap! xxx

Reviewer: BlessedKarma Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2005 - 06:33 am Title: Girl Heaven

Just something I noticed, in this chapter you refer to William as 'Spike' but Spike hasn't really been created yet, right? Anyways, great story! I love how shy William is, very in character!

Author's Response: Eep thanx for pointing that out i just went back and fixed it....its been hard from the start for me to keep in mind i cant write Spike lol, but thanx to awesome people like you ive been able to go back and fix my mistakes! Thanx for the kind words :) hope you like the rest of it!

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2005 - 06:27 am Title: Ashes to ashes

great chapter. keep up the amazing work

Author's Response: Thanx so much for the compliment and for the great review :)

Reviewer: lacey Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2005 - 06:08 am Title: Ashes to ashes

I had tears streaming down my face in this chapter it was so sad, but an awesome update I loved how you made this Chapter, how Spike some what expressed his feelings for Buffy I couldn't have done it better myself, bravo!!!!

Author's Response: Wow, thats a great compliment!!! It means i made the characters real enough to you so thanx so much, its awesome to hear that!!! Thanx for the review :)

Reviewer: Saltygoodness Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2005 - 05:10 am Title: Ashes to ashes

I LOVED it. Please, please continue soon! Poor Buffy, and Jenny, and everyone ::Sniffle:: Update soon!

Author's Response: Ill post the next chap tonight!!!Thanx for reviewing and in happy to know that you like this so far! xxx

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2005 - 04:50 am Title: Ashes to ashes

WOW WOW WOW! Excellent doesnt even begin to describe this! it was so touching ! i was crying! and the end was surprising! I dont know how you do it but you're brillant!

Author's Response: Thanx so much Shelly, what a wonderful review.....im so glad that your enjoying this and im very flattered that you like my writing, it always makes my day to hear such wonderful things. Thanx again for being soo nice and leaving this, i cant thank you enough!xxx

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2005 - 03:24 am Title: Ashes to ashes

OMG i cant believe that happened. that was so sweet that he wrote all those things in that letter, i almost cried. also it was so sweet that he wanted her to stake him so he couldnt hurt her. i love this story SO much and am SO SO happy taht u updated. this chapter kicked ass and i cant wait to read more. i really hope taht he keeps loving him and that he doesnt hurt her or anyone that she loves. please update as soon as u can, i cant wait to read more and SO want to see wat happens next thanx

Author's Response: Thanx so much! She will keep loving him, how could she not? hes still in there kinda, right? And hes not a-hole Angelus so there will be no maming of the friends. Obviously theres gonna be fighting between them but things will turn out okay! Ill post again tomorrow night and thanx again for the kind words!

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2005 - 03:10 am Title: Ashes to ashes

incredible chapter and i loved the ceremony very incredible tearjerker about what he wote in the letter and the speech that andrew talked about

Author's Response: Thanks so much, im so happy that you liked it cause it was really hard to write! I hope you keep on liking and reading, xxx

Reviewer: Cecilia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2005 - 03:04 am Title: Ashes to ashes

Like I said before, I teared up at the funeral scene, especially at William's last words for everyone. It seemed so in character with William that, in his great wisdom, he would take this kind of precaution in case something happened to him. It just goes to prove how at peace he was with Buffy's whole world and his choice to be in her life. The gratitude has finally conquered the loss--what a beautiful quote. It give me a sense of hope to see that William was willing to fight the demon trying to force him out. The fact that he was there at all is a good sign. I can' t wait to read the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanx so much. It will explain why he left his final words with Andrew in Buffys letter and your pretty dead on lol That quote was actually on a card i found in a pet store after my cat Pokey had to be put down at 16 years old (sniff-memories) but it was the most beautiful thing id heard at the time and still is when it comes to loss. Thanx again xxx

Reviewer: Dannii Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2005 - 02:50 am Title: Ashes to ashes

PLEASE let him still Love her,and not sleep with anyone else

Author's Response: He does still love her, he always will i swear! And ill tell you this as a lil spoiler, he will not slee with anyone else :) I hope i quelled your fears and thanx so much for the review.

Reviewer: Caitie Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2005 - 02:15 am Title: He's Gone

Great chapter! Poor Buffy, and Jenny too, even though I don't understand her reasoning! Can't wait for more, so please update as soon as you can. Take care, C ; )

Author's Response: Jenny reasoning is reasoning in the simplest of forms, shes not using logic right now, shes too grief stricken. "Son vampire, Buffy slayer"is all that was going through her mind but soon enough everything will unfold. Thanx for reviewing and still liking even if you didnt get why, it means a lot. Hope you like the next chap, itll be up later tonight!!!

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2005 - 02:06 am Title: He's Gone

please dont let her kill him and i wished that she would have told buffy the truth and i hope that they find a way for him to get his soul back and if him and buffy stay together that he doesnt lose it if he has a moment of happiness like angel did

Author's Response: She wont kill him, just remember the title!!!Im posting the next chap tonight so i wont spoil it for you but itll be...interesting!!!Thanx so much for the review!!!xxxOh, ill give you this much though, he'll never go all angelus on her if thats what your worried about if they have sex :)

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2005 - 12:21 am Title: He's Gone

i completely understand why you did what you did. i hope buffy finds out the truth soon. I also hope that angel doesn't cause any problems for buffy or william. jenny did the right thing. if she had told buffy thatt william had been turned them buffy would have to kill him. something tells me that she won't be able to do that. keep up the great work. this story is amazing.

Author's Response: Thanx for the kind words and understanding!He wont...maybe angel wont be around so long (hint hint) and Buffy def wont kill him! xxx

Reviewer: Ashly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2005 - 12:21 am Title: He's Gone

Ugh I told you this story was gonna make me cry! Well not cry but tear up! That was so sad. But I love it! Keep it up! The better live up to the title! 8D

Author's Response: AAwwww, thanx so much. im sorry its sad but it'll get better. It will live up to the title lol i promise :) Thanx again and im so happy your liking it!xxx

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2005 - 11:52 pm Title: He's Gone

poor buffy! i really hopeJenny's not going to curse him with angel's curse! he wont be able to be happy with buffy :( sorry i keep trying to guess what will happen! i just love your story!

Author's Response: Thanx so much for the review!!!Jenny wont curse him (he didnt mess with her tribe) He will be happy with Buffy so no worries:) Thanx so much again xxx

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2005 - 11:24 pm Title: He's Gone

aww how sad i cant believe that jenny did that. i know that buffy wouldnt kill william if he still was him and loved her. i love this story so much and am so happy that u updated. i really hope that spike/ william find each other and they get together. also i hope that he doesnt get with dru and if he does make it short i dont like it, its evil and wrong. please update as soon as u can, i cant wait to read more and am DYING to see wat happens next thanx

Author's Response: Thanx so much for the review! I know what Jenny did was wrong but its motherly instinct ya know? Plus she cant be blamed for screwing things up, she just lost her baby sniff. Her fear is overcrowding her sensibility ya know? I hope you like the next. There wont be much Dru Spike but youll see why soon! I promise itll be worth the angst of seeing him with someone other then Buffy (or i hope it will lol) Thanx so much again and please bare with it xxx Linz

Reviewer: Cecilia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2005 - 10:36 pm Title: He's Gone

LOL You are the evil cliffy queen! I can't believe you left us there!! Seriously, this must've been a heart wrenching chapter to write. I was in tears for poor Jenny and Buffy. I can completely understand Jenny telling Buffy what she did. She did what she had to do after facing the harsh reality of that night. Of course she wasn't going to take any chances with her son, even if he is a demon now. I would've done the same. Glad the gypsy magicks came in handy against wingnut Dru (thanks for sparing us the additional talk about the pixies---what a nutbag) On a lighter note---joke's on you Captain Broodypants. I really love the way you wrote him--with that hint of self-righteousness and pompous arrogance posing as wisdom. HAHA, she's not even looking your way, you hair product addicted wanker. Sorry, had to get that out of my system. He started out such a sympathetic heroic character on the show, but the whole leaving Buffy for her own good thing got tedious. Glad they cleaned him up a little on Angel. Well anyway, it goes without saying that an update sometime in the VERY near future would be nice:) pretty please:)

Author's Response: First let me say that this has to be the longest review ive ever received and thanx so much for taking the time to write it!!!It was hard to write but itll get worse before it gets better. theres one scene i have to write that im dreading :(! Im glad your okay with what Jenny did, i wrote what i would have done had i been his mother and im glad to see im not the only one who feels that way! I dont like writing Dru honestly its mind numbing to think of crazy talk and what not and thats all she really is, crazy talk lol. "Hair product addicted wanker" made me laugh my ass off. I can see it in my head 'Angel rocks back and forth on the floor overwhelmed with the shakes....whats it been? 2, maybe three hours since he had his last Alberto fix?' I loved him in the beg. too but then Spike showed and all hope was lost on Angel. Once youve seen Spike and how he never gives up what Angel did cant be forgiven! Ill post as soon as i can and thanx again for this incredible review, it meant a lot to me xxx Linz

Reviewer: Dark Angel Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2005 - 10:29 pm Title: He's Gone

Asome story so far! Can't wait to read more!!!!! ~Dark Angel~

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the kind words and im so happy you like it so far!!! Ill keep my fingers crossed that i can keep you reading :)xxx

Reviewer: Aisling Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2005 - 02:43 pm Title: God help him

oh god no, no, no, no, no, no... !!! More like NOW! cya xx

Author's Response: lol its coming soon, i promise. Thanx so much for the review xxx

Reviewer: Caitie Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2005 - 12:00 pm Title: God help him

OMG! Major cliffhangber there! Please please please update soon, cause I'm desperate to find out what comes next!!! Take care, C ; )

Author's Response: The update will be up by tonight and thanx for the wicked review. I hope you like the next chap xxx

Reviewer: Cecilia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2005 - 11:07 am Title: God help him

I knew it was coming. I mean, you did warn us and all but I am still so sad:( God, Buffy's going to be so heartbroken and she's going to go back to the whole 'anyone who's part of my life gets killed' mantra. Poor thing! You wrote Dru very well (skank ho that she is). I hope her demise is coming soon.

Author's Response: Im sad too if it helps. She will be devastated but itll work out okay!!! Thanx for the Dru comment lol and it is coming soon enough. I cant even wait to kill her for turning William and its my fault that she did lol. Thanx for the great review, i loved it!xxx

Reviewer: Kellie Mulder Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2005 - 05:27 am Title: God help him

OMGs!!! He's gonna become vampire Spike now...all evil and stuff!! Right? I'm looking forward to seeing the vampire just to see what the reaction is goin' to be with everyone else. Will he be like Season 2 Spike or more like Season 4 thur Five Spike? Poor Buffy.... Keep it up!

Author's Response: Hell be a little bit of every season Spike :) Everyones reactions will be different but its Buffys ill obviously focus on since they where the closest (besides Jenny). Thanx so much for the review, i appreciate it!

Reviewer: Jess Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2005 - 05:06 am Title: God help him

Poor poor Wiliam! (*sobs*) I love this story but I'm sad, lol. Anyway, you're doing a great job though and I cant wait to read more

Author's Response: Im sad too but its great to know your still enjoying it. I was pretty worried id lose a lot of readers even though i warned all that this wouild happen. It means a lot to know your still with me, thanx :)

Reviewer: olivia-luv Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2005 - 05:06 am Title: God help him

coooollll....beautiful chapter, sexy et romantic....

Author's Response: Wow i think your the only one who thought it was cool and sexy. Thanx so much, your kind words threw me off guard but in a really great way! Im so happy you liked it! Thanx for the review!

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