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Reviewer: fallen_angel Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/02/2006 - 06:13 pm Title: Have Faith

i always wanted Bufyy to have an older sis

Reviewer: beasleysmom Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2005 - 08:26 pm Title: Have Faith

Great start. Pressing forward! Kuddos!

Reviewer: spikegirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2005 - 10:30 am Title: Have Faith

Awwww, it's so sad!!! I need more spuffy loving =) But great story, can't wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: Kiera Thornton Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2005 - 05:17 am Title: Have Faith

lovin' it. but thinking it could get a little weird. i'll just have to read and find out. :)

Reviewer: cece Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2005 - 03:50 am Title: Have Faith

YAY!!!! another great chapter

Reviewer: sarah Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2005 - 03:46 am Title: Have Faith

That was so Gr8t I loved it.Please update soon..thanks

Reviewer: ashley Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2005 - 07:20 am Title: Have Faith

Gonna miss Joyce :(...but I also can't wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: james Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2005 - 05:56 am Title: Have Faith

i think i read something about a slut in there somewheres so yeah i give er a 9 and stuff

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2005 - 02:18 am Title: Have Faith

Good chapter! Has good potential.

Reviewer: hazel Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2005 - 01:39 am Title: Have Faith

ohhhh god....please update tonight that would just make my day

Reviewer: FaintlyRememberBreathing Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2005 - 03:53 am Title: Have Faith

Great start. I like how you're true to the real characters, Faith is all reckless and slutty, and Buffy is the responsible one. Can't wait to see where Spike fits in but I'm pretty sure I've got a good idea.

Reviewer: Mac Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2005 - 09:28 pm Title: Have Faith

Seriously? Then okay, I can accept that. But when it happened twice now you can see why I would start to think you were up to something else. I stand corrected. Thanks.

Reviewer: theladyofspike Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2005 - 11:51 pm Title: Have Faith

Loved the first chapter!! there was something weird though, with the verb tenses. Maybe instead of using so much present you could use past simple :) lol. It was kind of weird, maybe I'm just used to read in the past simple, but I'm just saying 'cause you're telling a story and it's different to when you write a dialogue. When you tell a story it's more common and used to write in the simple past, otherwise the style's not that good. But in the dialogue it's different, although, you don't use present tense either. Did i express myself well? :) lol, all these lines just to tell you that siple past for when you're telling something about someone, is better ;) lol. Instead of saying "Her sister does this every night...", you could say "Her sister did it every night..." :) lol. Anyway, loved the first chappy ;)

Reviewer: Smitten Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2005 - 11:04 pm Title: Have Faith

WOW I love this story!!! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Raven Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2005 - 03:03 pm Title: Have Faith

This is a really good start. I know it's hard to have an older sister who is dating, and you're worried about her when she's gone late. I really can't wait to see what happens next! Thanx-

Reviewer: brandi Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2005 - 11:14 am Title: Have Faith

please keep going with this story i really like it

Reviewer: Aislynn Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2005 - 09:26 am Title: Have Faith

You should continue I like it so far.

Reviewer: JinkX Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2005 - 05:46 am Title: Have Faith

Ey....ur story is pretty gud...has a gud ploot n everything...why dun u continue it! waitin for ya to update! :D

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2005 - 04:31 am Title: Have Faith

so far this story kicks ass i cant wait to find out wat happens next. i love it and want to see how it progresses. i cant believe that faith is such a slut but its understandable. pleaase update as soon as u can, cant wait to read more and see wat happens next thanx

Reviewer: Panta_Rei Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2005 - 11:19 pm Title: Have Faith

WOW, Buffy's caring...I'd just bitch-slap Faith =D So, I'm guessing the black car was Spike's? Interesting that Biuffy's only fifteen--that would make Spike at least ten years older than her, right? This story's already got me hooked, in case you couldn't tell =D So update soon!!!!!!!

Reviewer: stacie bower Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2005 - 06:56 pm Title: Have Faith

keep writing ure really good you should have faith bring spike into the picture by the next chapter and you should have buffy go out with somebodya few capters in or so but we all know there will be sparkage between spike and buffy. write about what ever you want just keep writing

Reviewer: Mariana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2005 - 06:19 pm Title: Have Faith

i really liked this story...it has a lot of prospect and it's quite original...though in my opinion...you should try to work on the dialogues...i think they're a little too simple...but that's my opinion and your story is great...it's just you can do even better!! ;) so thanx and hope you update soon...i'm looking forward for it

Reviewer: llbean Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2005 - 04:43 pm Title: Have Faith

hey i like the story so far keep going!

Reviewer: Caitie Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2005 - 01:53 pm Title: Have Faith

Pooor Buffy! Pf course you should go on, lol! Please update soon, cause I can hardly wait for more! Take care, C ; )

Reviewer: kerry Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2005 - 09:16 am Title: Have Faith

Good sart.Enjoying it so far.As for Faith,is'nt 25 a tad to old to still be living at home??

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