loved it so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!
good job!

your story was very funny and loveing. it was so totaly sweet dude.

Oh. Well nevermind then. :-) Thanks Kimber, for speaking up there. I really like your stories too, in fact I look for them to see what you're writing next. And although you do have some spelling issues too, like I said, it depends on the degree of errors, an occasional typo is fine, it's when it starts getting crowded that I can't deal with it any longer and have to say something. It's never meant as more than constructive criticism. My deal? I write very well, spell like you wouldn't believe, and even have an idea or two about plots. But I just don't have the sustained interest it would take to craft the story and put it out there. And that's where you authors have me beat. You are putting a lot of effort into your work, usually, and coming up with some wonderful scenarios that I love to read. I applaud you for that. So if the only issue is spelling, which is simply not that hard to fix either with a good beta or an intelligent use of a good spellcheck program, then I'm gonna mention it. Why would you go to all this trouble and creativity just to stumble in that one area? And if no one mentions it, then how will you know? I love you guys. I wouldn't review if I didn't. And I really do like this story, beasleysmom. I look forward to each chapter as it comes out, now that I know it's going to start coming out a little more polished in that dept. :-)

Author's Response: Thanks Mac! Kuddos!

Um, Ironic? I don't write any fics, so there really wouldn't be lots of errors in them would there? Apparently you have me confused with someone else. I do usually write people off list but if it's simple then I might not, just a judgment call there. If the only purpose of the 'review' function is to yell, 'Kewl! Write more!' then that is a sorry state of affairs. I said I loved the story, just the error were very apparent, could a beta be used or something. There is no harm in that, and if I didn't like the actual story itself I wouldn't have bothered in the first place. There are many authors on this site with problems in their stories that go beyond spelling and you may notice I'm not reviewing their stories at all. But when the problem with a good story is just multiple spelling issues, then I'll speak up. So, please don't make assumptions about other people's motives or who they might be. In this case you are dead wrong. Thanks. As for you my dear author, I'm thrilled that you found a beta, and so quickly! I just signed on now and saw your invitation to me, and was seriously going to agree, but you've found someone else and I can't be happier. Thank you for sharing your story with us, I do appreciate your hard work on this. :-)

Author's Response: Thanks Mac! I under stood that you where trying to be helpful. I accept the fact that; by putting myself out there; I had to be willing to take constructiv crtiasism. Thanks for your support. Kuddos!