Reviews For Pretend to Be Nice
Reviewer: Jeni Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2004 - 01:00 am Title: Chapter 4
Date: 01/13/2004 - 01:00 am Title: Chapter 4
EllieD: I think you're doing fine. I really like the plot and think this is going to be a great story! Keep up the good work!
Reviewer: Barbie Girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2004 - 10:46 pm Title: Chapter 4
Date: 01/12/2004 - 10:46 pm Title: Chapter 4
Hmmm... Okay a few comments. Spike is kind of one to hide his feelings. IMO he would be one to disbuffy but harbor a secret thing for her, not stand up for her against his friends. Also Fred? Moving in? Boy was that fast and a little wierd. My adive. Take your time, slow down, really feel your characters out.