Great interactions between the W and H crowd, Angel and Cordelia, and Angel and Kate- nicely done. I like where things are going so far with the fic and am excited to see what's coming up for everyone. The only thing, though, is that there are a lot of errors and whatnot in this chapter. I've read all of your stuff before and haven't seen it as of yet, so I'm wondering if perhaps a beta didn't read through it or not. There's a lot of missing punctuation marks, words that are repeated (the the, Lindsay Lindsey), and missing spaces in between words (i.e. Wellof). Be careful with those, especially since they're quite frequent and might distract readers. Otherwise, great update!:)

Author's Response: Dear Allison, thanks for the nice comment and the patience;) Do you know what happened? The html editor didn't recognize revisions and so they were meddled together!:( I took it out and I'll substitute it with the proper corrected and betaed text!;) Thanks a lot for the very useful observation! A kiss Roberta

Author's Response: Now it should be corrected!;) Thanks again!