Step in the right direction for Buffy. She didn't kick him or yell at him or tell him he was worthless and beneath her. Outlook looks good on that front! And the sex was hot! :)

Love the flow of this. I really liked the end part where Buffy is describing how she felt if she ran and her sould would fall away. Very powerful. It's getting right to the heart of what Buffy feels like being alive. Disconnected and just wanting to be free.

Wow i loved this one too. Ive actually fallen asleep in the bath and was lucky to have someone come in and wake me up, sadly it wasnt Spike so thanx so much for rubbing that in lol. Im teasing this fic has really drawn me in, i loveall the ways it can go and cant wait to read more! And no prob about the chapter thing, it was just some friendly advice :)

seems to be off to a good start. Please continue to write and update. Looking forward to the rest of the story.