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Reviewer: Morrigan Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2006 - 06:52 am Title: Fractured Smile

Hmmm...  Wouldn't have figured Spike to send other's out to kill Buffy, since he's always been so eager to take slayers out, himself.  But, once again, it is a different take from what I usually find, so you still have my interest.

Reviewer: Irishwoman39 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/19/2005 - 02:09 pm Title: Fractured Smile

So Spike is after Buffy,and this time he means to kill her.Yeah right!" next!"

Reviewer: jenny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2005 - 12:33 am Title: Fractured Smile

you have got to update really soon on this story!! i love it, i can't wait to see what happens next in the story.

Reviewer: demonica mills Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2005 - 12:04 pm Title: Fractured Smile

wow! I really like where this story is heading. Dark stories are always fun. Can't wait to see where you head with this.

Author's Response: You seem strangely familiar. Hehe. Thanks. I can't wait to see where I go with this either. *Remains blissfully ignorant*

Reviewer: BatdzAngel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2005 - 10:03 am Title: Fractured Smile

I love the idea behind this! I hope you continue to write the rest of this story and if you need help bouncing off ideas, please let me know. As a fic writer myself, I understand how reviews become important and hopefully you'll be able to find a beta to help you make this a flawless piece. And I love how you've managed to capture Buffy's emotions considering she wasn't very good at dealing with them. Our Heroine's more Action Girl than anything, no? Kudos!

Reviewer: Bloodshedbaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2005 - 02:56 am Title: Fractured Smile

I find myself in agreement with Priscilla regarding having this looked over. It's those darn commas. I, myself, have a continual battle with the little bastards. *nods emphatically* I love the premise for this and I can't wait to see what happens when Spike and Buffy meet up. I did have a quick question tho - did Buffy's slayer healing kick in with her previous incapitation that morning? Or did i read the time line wrong? (would not be surprised there!) I'm a registered nurse but have to admit to not having spent much time dealing with burn patients (ER was my thing) so I don't exactly know what it entails. I just wasn't sure if she was having to have her mom dress her that morning than going out that night and kicking demon ass. If you need help finding a beta, let me know. Your writing is very good without it, but a good beta could just give it that flawless edge. And I'm so not trying to be mean here! I hope you don't mind me saying these things, i'm just trying to offer suggestions.

Author's Response: How mean of you! Nah, I don't mind. I could use any suggestions for a good beta that you have.

Reviewer: Anne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2005 - 12:26 am Title: Fractured Smile

More updating

Reviewer: peculiar_being Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/19/2005 - 09:36 pm Title: Fractured Smile

I like the storyline you've got there and I think your ideas are great. But,I would consider getting a beta reader, if I were you. There are some minor mistakes in your story that need to be fixed. Keep up the good work and please take my comment as constructive criticism. I really like what you've got there so far ,and I believe that correcting the few flaws I was able to see, your story will be awesome! :) ~Priscilla

Reviewer: Mariana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/19/2005 - 08:32 pm Title: Fractured Smile

great chapter!! i like the concept so much!! please update soon...thanx!

Reviewer: jenny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/19/2005 - 07:34 pm Title: Fractured Smile

i love it. i cant wait until buffy and spike meet, its gonna be soo good. please update soon.

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/19/2005 - 04:59 pm Title: Fractured Smile

absolutely loved the udpate and glad that spike is back in town

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