Date: 11/21/2006 - 04:33 am Title: Ugly
I was going to wait to review AFTER I read the entire story... but I just went through 3 chapters and I have to say... The way you write drags me right into it. The way you described the pain? I could feel the pain in my own back... so much so I had to skip over then read back and remind myself it's just a story. Great... really, really amazing writing. Okay... reading on =]
Date: 02/15/2006 - 07:00 am Title: Ugly
How awful for her.  Poor Buffy.
Date: 01/24/2006 - 10:33 am Title: Ugly
I started reading your story today, and I can just say that I love it! I just had to leave a review on this chapter before I continue to read. It's an amazing chapter. Really. But now I wanna now what happens next...gotta keep reading lots of chapters left.. yiiee
Date: 11/19/2005 - 02:17 pm Title: Ugly
This is heartwrinching!"
Date: 07/21/2005 - 05:33 am Title: Ugly
Omg! You are a fantastic writer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Amazing! I could just feel and see everything you described! It was like I was there and it was amazing! I didnt even hear my phone ring, I was so into this story! Amazing you are a queen!! Beautiful! Wonderful!! You get my point here, right? Wow still wonderful writing! Very described, loved it!!!!
Date: 06/22/2005 - 12:44 am Title: Ugly
excellent chapter chica. if you would like a beta, they have a list over at the bloodshedverse. Spikeslovebite is good, as is schez, meganpeta, and holly. I think your writing is excellent, and I had never noticed that you didn't have a beta. =)
Date: 06/22/2005 - 12:39 am Title: Ugly
great update and cant wait for her and spike to meet once again
Date: 06/22/2005 - 12:11 am Title: Ugly
This chapter is so much better written than the first two. :) As for beta readers, there are a few fanfiction sites which have a list of people who are willing to beta read buffy fanfiction. Try the following site: http://www.sinister-attraction.org/attract.htm. Once there, click on the "resources" section, and there you will see a link which will direct you to a bunch of beta readers. Hope that helped. Once again, this chapter is so much better. :)
Date: 06/21/2005 - 10:40 pm Title: Ugly
poor buffy...but i guess it's all necessary for the upcoming spuffy...great chapter...thanx...keep up the excellent job!! hope you update soon ;)
Date: 06/21/2005 - 07:52 pm Title: Ugly
Oh, you sneaky girl! All I can say is... POOR BUFFY!! You make me feel her pain. *winces* Oh, a beta, you ask? I have a list of them at my bite whore archive, the Bloodshedverse. You can find it at htttp://www.bringonthebloodshed.com/bloodshedverse. The beta list is fairly new, so you should be able to find someone. I recommend emailing more than one person because all beta's are not equal, as I have come to find out. If you want to run some of the names by me, feel free! I know a lot of them. Hope that helps!!
Date: 06/21/2005 - 07:34 pm Title: Ugly
God I feel so bad for her! And now she has to deal with a wanting to kill you Spike. Oh boy.