Reviews For Before, Now, Forever
Reviewer: sharon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2006 - 08:20 pm Title: XXVIII (II)
Date: 09/30/2006 - 08:20 pm Title: XXVIII (II)
awwwwwww that was reallly really cute and beautiful !!!!
the way you introduced dawn and explained her name was very poetic and full of emotions....
now our spuffy couple has a real family and i couldn't imagine this story to (nearly?) end.
thanks a lot for this hurrican of bliss and see you later my dear friend.
Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2006 - 12:27 am Title: XXVIII (II)
Date: 09/27/2006 - 12:27 am Title: XXVIII (II)
You really surprised me with the end of this chapter! Great job!
Reviewer: margaret Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/26/2006 - 08:39 pm Title: XXVIII (II)
Date: 09/26/2006 - 08:39 pm Title: XXVIII (II)
thanks for the update
Author's Response: thank you for reading (yayyy, new reader, I'm happy!)
uhh sorry for all those mistakes.. it wasn't my intention, it's just that I put the beated chapter with the original chapter version.. ii was sure that the corrections wouldn't be visible.. instead I'm wrong. anyway I'll try to edit asap sorry again