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Reviewer: Queen C Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/15/2005 - 01:09 am Title: Going Away to School

Thank you for taking my remarks constructively! I found a few websites that you may want to visit to check your pronoun use: (http://www.grammarbook.com/grammar/pronoun.asp); (http://www.dailygrammar.com/136to140.shtml); (http://thegrammarexchange.infopop.cc/eve/ubb.x/a/tpc/f/340600179/m/927100368/xsl/print_topic).

Author's Response: Thanks for looking those up for me! I'll take a gander at them as soon as I have a chance!:)

Reviewer: spufette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2005 - 11:01 pm Title: Going Away to School

Hmmm, this doesn't sound good. I hope Riley doesn't go too ballistic. spuf

Author's Response: He won't be too bad about it, I guess, but they inevitably will have a serious discussion about it. No worries- it'll work out just fine:)

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2005 - 10:15 pm Title: Going Away to School

Jenny! I like Jenny as Spike's mom! Yay! And yeah, that was cool of Spike to help her like that. To help when he didn't get any immediate reward for it, it was selfless, something he's not known for. Can't wait for more!!

Author's Response: I love Jenny as Spike's mom- for some reason, that just seems to work for me LOL And yes, Spike was being generous without expecting anything in return- perhaps he's becoming better:)

Reviewer: Franchesca Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2005 - 09:07 pm Title: Going Away to School

THAT's not going to go well. I hope Riley doesn't spaz out on her too bad. Maybe just enough to get her to break up with him, but not enough to hack away at that famous chip Buffy has on her shoulder.

Author's Response: LOL No, it won't go well, but Riley will be okay about things... and the outcome of it will be nice:)

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2005 - 08:56 pm Title: Going Away to School

Loved the update! Spike's mother loved her and is able to help her with the school - and then - Riley thinks the wrong things and is following her - bad cliffhanger - bad for Buffy :)

Author's Response: I needed Spike to have a nice parent- those always come in handy LOL And Riley's too insecure for his own good, but I swear that some good will come out of him following her:)

Reviewer: Queen G Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2005 - 08:51 pm Title: Friends?

Allison, your stories are fantastic and I love to read them, but I have one small gripe. Your misuse of me/I and her/she and him/he drives me crazy. Please have someone read over your stories for grammar. If you already have a beta, maybe you can send the chapters to Ashlee or one of your other friends who is also an author. For example, in this story, Buffy is supposed to be wicked smart (a geek). But, you have her saying "her and I don't get along" when it should be she and I and you have Spike saying "him and I are very dissimilar" when it should be he and I. Just some advice you can take or leave. Again, your story is great!!

Author's Response: Thank you for pointing that out- I never learned it in grade school (or even high school, for that matter), and I've been making serious attempts at correcting myself. The only drawback with me suddenly having a beta is that I wouldn't be able to update daily... I tend to write chapters the night before posting LOL I promise I'll really check for these grammatical errors in future chapters- I don't want to drive you crazy:) Thanks again, and I hope you continue to like the fic!

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2005 - 08:15 pm Title: Going Away to School

Riley's following her? Oh my god! Great twist

Author's Response: LOL Thank you- I needed a twist somewhere in this chapter:)

Reviewer: spikegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2005 - 08:07 pm Title: Going Away to School

Great update, I really hope that Buffy will go to college. It wouldn't be fair if she wouldn't be able to go because of the money. =)

Author's Response: She'll go to college, I swear- I can't just let her graduate and be done with school. She's intelligent and deserves college more than Spike LOL

Reviewer: Bint Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2005 - 08:06 pm Title: Going Away to School

more plz i love its great more soon i hope!!!!!!!!!!!!! ;)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm happy you're still enjoying it:)

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2005 - 08:00 pm Title: Going Away to School

riley is a jerk but whatelse is new?? keep up the great work. i'm really lovin' this story. can't wait for more. keep up the great work.

Author's Response: LOL He's a jerk, but I can understand why- Buffy's hanging out with a guy he loathes. They'll be broken up in no time:)

Reviewer: Pam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2005 - 07:25 pm Title: Going Away to School

I like Riley, but he does let his self doubt get in the way. And I am sure he will make more of what happened... than what happened. .. Poor Riley. Waiting for your update.

Author's Response: Riley will definitely overreact, and understandable so- she was at his enemy's house. But yes, he's very insecure, and that's his major problem

Reviewer: lacey Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2005 - 07:22 pm Title: Going Away to School

I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for buffy to give spike a chance and to be with him!!!!!

Author's Response: She'll give him a chance, no worries- it'll happen in about 2 chapters:)

Reviewer: Livia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2005 - 07:20 pm Title: Going Away to School

Dun dun duunnnnn. I can not believe what a cliffhanger. Pleease update soon. I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm sure it's going to be great.

Author's Response: Sorry about the cliffhanger, but I've found that people react hilariously to them LOL I'm happy you liked it!:)

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2005 - 03:46 am Title: Friends?

I just thought of something!! It would be soooo great if someone commented on Spike's new smell!!! Y'know, the greasy DMP smell? Oh man. You don't have to put that in, just my wacky mind thinkin' stuff. Really good chapter!! Update soon!

Author's Response: I'll think about adding that- I think I can make it fit:) Would be mightily funny! Thanks!

Reviewer: Please?! Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2005 - 02:06 am Title: Friends?

Okay, Buffy/Riley end soon?

Author's Response: Yes, they'll be done in a chapter or so, I swear!:)

Reviewer: Lacey Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2005 - 12:57 am Title: The Beginning of the End

Great update......Spike was a jerk in the beggining...But now I'm starting to feel sorry for him....Not so much for Riley cause I think he'll be fine maybe alittle heart broken but he'll be okay....But I'm still waiting for Buffy to kick harm's ass.....Loved the chapter....

Author's Response: Spike's going to be fine, as is Riley- they both just need to figure out their relationships LOL And Buffy's going to confront Harmony at some point, I promise:)

Reviewer: Caitie Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2005 - 11:13 pm Title: Friends?

Great chapter - very cute to see Buffy and Spike starting to get along! Can't wait for more as soon as you're able to update. Take care, C ; )

Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, I agree it's nice to see them be happy- but that always stops at a point in my fics before it gets better LOL They've only had perfect happiness in a fic once, and that was in Falling For a Redcoat LOL But Riley will be out of the picture soon:)

Reviewer: Bint Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2005 - 11:05 pm Title: Friends?

more plz i love it its great!!!!!! ;)

Author's Response: Thank you!:)

Reviewer: Palerider Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2005 - 11:02 pm Title: Friends?

Great so far, I can't wait to see where it goes

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like it!:)

Reviewer: lindsay Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2005 - 09:31 pm Title: Friends?

Buffy is so sweet to Riley, he should trust her more, the way he's putting himself down insnt attractive and i think Buffy would get fed up of it if it continues....hint hint lol :) Great job and i cant wait for the next update. Linz

Author's Response: LOL Yes, Buffy's going to get annoyed with Riley, and rightfully so- he's acting weird. But no worries- they'll be broken up in no time

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2005 - 09:08 pm Title: Friends?

good update

Author's Response: Thank you!:)

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2005 - 08:40 pm Title: Friends?

Well - I hope the Riley thing will end soon - the rest will come ;-) Good to see Buffy and Spike are able to get along very well. *smile*

Author's Response: The Riley thing will be ending fairly soon- no worries. And yes, it's imperative at this point that Buffy and Spike can get along a little:)

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2005 - 08:31 pm Title: Friends?

atleast buffy isn't in complete denile. keep up the great work. this story is great. i really love what you're doing with it. post soon. can't wait for more

Author's Response: Thank you! Buffy knows what's going on in the background -she just needs to figure things out more:)

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2005 - 08:04 pm Title: Friends?

well at least she has admited that its going to end! Great chapter! I would love to see some of Spike friends come in and make fun of him in front of Buffy, see how he like it!

Author's Response: LOL Yes, it's going to end. And Spike's friends may just come in and visit...

Reviewer: Emma Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2005 - 07:50 pm Title: Friends?

I love love love it! First off, I love the story, but when Buffy inevitably breaks it off with Riley (or vice versa, whatever) I might actually feel sorry for him, becaus he seems like a much nicer guy in your fic than in many others, and the show. Secondly, I love how frequently you update. You must have a lot of this written already, because there's no way you could possibly write a chapter or two a day... and if you do, I'm amazed with you. Keep it up, please!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I liked Riley in season 4 and a little in 5, so I didn't want him to be that much of a jerk in this. And yes, I have a good portion of this done- I stopped at chapter 10 last week and haven't worked on it since, so I've got a couple of days to work on it again. I'm so happy you like this so much!:)

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