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Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/28/2012 - 03:39 am Title: Epilogue

This story was very sweet, and the smut was pretty hot. LOVED how you portrayed all the characters, with no one being particularly assy (except for maybe Hank, and he wasn't bad). Especially loved Willow not being all über-innocent. Love her being sassy and worldly (sex with Xander, kissing Spike, teasing Spike about his erection, etc.)!

Does need some editing to correct grammar, etc., as well as some more general errors, for example:
* the Thanksgiving weekend timeline seemed off, unless I misread something. Buffy & Willow did the after-Thanksgiving sales (Friday), and then they went to the strip club that night, or was the strip club supposed to be Saturday? Because they went back to school the next day, and I'm sure that was Sunday. I missed a day in there somehow.
* I'm guessing you are not from the US, as you had the 19-year-olds drinking alcohol in bars in California. In the US, you have to be 21 to drink. Also, you had Spike smoking in the Bronze, and I'm pretty sure California has banned smoking in all bars & restaurants since 1998.
* here in the epilogue, you mention that 6 years have gone by since the prior chapter, but I'm thinking it might have needed to be more. I don't think you specified what year in college they are, but at 19 in the Fall, they were most likely sophomores, meaning as of Christmas they still had 2 years plus 2 quarters left of undergrad (if they finished on time). Law schools is at least 3 years, and med school is at least 4, so... I know, I'm being nit-picky about a fantasy story, but it just threw me a bit! =)

Reviewer: Zeitsu Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2012 - 04:30 am Title: Epilogue

Yayay spuffy goodness!!!!

Reviewer: Jayne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2011 - 04:13 pm Title: Epilogue

This story was completely fantastic, I've stuck with it for the whole series! A really great read. The sex was hot and not too crass (hehehe) and the plot was funny and engaging. There was just the right amount if angst. I applaud you.

Reviewer: SpikesGirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2010 - 06:42 am Title: Epilogue

What a wonderful story. I really loved it. So inspiring.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2010 - 02:42 pm Title: CH 39

awwww i am SOBBING!!!!! aww i HATE them for beig SO STUPID!!!!!!! bahhh!!!! Love it.....

Reviewer: Morgan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2010 - 08:12 pm Title: CH 14 Part 1

ahhhhhhh!!!! They are SOOOO perfect for each other!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Tay Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2010 - 02:55 pm Title: CH 1

this story is amazing!

Reviewer: SpuffyGirl729 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2008 - 03:23 am Title: CH 1

Just wanted to let you know I've read this story about 20 times! i love it! great job!

Reviewer: Ivy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2007 - 08:40 am Title: Epilogue

I really really loooooved this story!

Reviewer: SpikesBabe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2007 - 12:35 am Title: Epilogue

Hi there! I loved this fic from the first word to the last!

Its one of the best i read so far . Hope to read more great fics from you !!!

Reviewer: Lin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2007 - 11:40 am Title: Epilogue

Ahh *sigh* that was beautiful.

Reviewer: Spikesonlychilde Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2006 - 01:55 pm Title: Epilogue

I loved it. I had started reading it a while back - then I guess something happened and I lost it or something. So glad I found it again. Brilliant, fluffy, spuffy story. lol. Loves it.

Reviewer: Sta Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2006 - 09:34 pm Title: Epilogue

I enjoyed the story, but I think that contasting the fluffy moments with a bit more angst would have given it better balance and made it stronger. Her confession of love to her while he was drunk did not seem like something worthy of her dramatic response. Also on a side note - to complete her education to be a pediatrician, Buffy would have finished 4 years of college and then 4 years of medical school and would officially be a "doctor" - but she would still need to go on to complete her residency (pediatrics is 3 more years) after this graduation. (sorry if that is too nit picky)

Reviewer: teenuh Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/02/2006 - 12:33 am Title: Epilogue

AHHH!!! i love it omg i cant believe how good this is ahh! thanks for the great read...it was worth taking a week lol

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2006 - 04:56 am Title: Epilogue

Sweet fic. :) How can anyone not like a happy ending.

Reviewer: Renee' Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2006 - 04:33 am Title: Epilogue

Ok- I have to tell you, I have a final due tomorrow, in about 12 hours actually, and I have not started it yet because I found this fic and wanted to read it all through. I thought I could start it and find a stopping point, but there was not a place I WANTED to stop, so I read the whole thing. Just wanted to let you know that you are so good of a writer that I could not stop reading once I started- literally. Thanks for putting out such great work consistently!

Reviewer: CutieSaiyajin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2006 - 07:45 pm Title: Epilogue

This was such a great story. I really enjoyed it. I liked when Spike surprised Buffy on Christmas, it was really sweet.

Awesome job on the whole thing. :)

Reviewer: Laura Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2006 - 03:39 pm Title: Epilogue

So I know this story has been over for like ever, but I just had to comment. I absolutely loved it!! You do a great job writing fics, can wait to read more things from you.

Reviewer: ida Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/26/2005 - 10:57 pm Title: CH 27

I really disliked the fact that they had sex on the very same night as Buffy's attempted rape. I don't think that a girl in reality would want to after a night like that. Most girls don't get over it so easy. I think that it was nice that they had sex but why on the same night. You could always wait for a while. It just feel wrong, and also wrong that no one reacted on that matter, I mean Giles should have said something. Othervise, love the story.

Reviewer: Kynna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/14/2005 - 06:06 pm Title: CH. 6

funny and all the more nice

Reviewer: BuffyRat Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/20/2005 - 04:09 am Title: Ch.3

The do bring out the child in each other. :)

Reviewer: BuffyRat Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/20/2005 - 04:01 am Title: CH. 2

Love how its been maybe five minutes and they've begun the verbal sparring. So typical of these two. Can't wait to see what the housing office has to say.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/20/2005 - 03:56 am Title: CH 1

Can't imagine a real life college letting that situation go unchecked, but for story purposes, I sure hope they do. A wonderful introduction.

Reviewer: Illyria101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/29/2005 - 11:45 pm Title: CH 46

Fantastic chapter

Reviewer: illyria101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/29/2005 - 11:36 pm Title: CH 45

Fantastic chapter. God Lindsey is such a perve lol

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