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Reviewer: illyria101 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2005 - 12:13 am Title: CH 14 Part 2

Good chapter

Reviewer: kurpitsa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/05/2005 - 07:58 am Title: CH 14 Part 2

It's a nice story but I think you could try shortening the lines a bit; outside Dawson's Creek people don't usually use very long sentences when they speek. For example: Instead of "'Good. Now if you’ll excuse me I need to go do something manly after standing here and picking out clothes with you,' he told her as he left her room." you could have written “'Good. Now if you’ll excuse me I need to go do something manly' he told her as he left her room."

Reviewer: kurpitsa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/05/2005 - 07:57 am Title: CH 14 Part 2

It's a nice story but I think you could try shortening the lines a bit; outside Dawson's Creek people don't usually use very long sentences when they speek. For example: Instead of "'Good. Now if you’ll excuse me I need to go do something manly after standing here and picking out clothes with you,' he told her as he left her room." you could have written “'Good. Now if you’ll excuse me I need to go do something manly after standing here and picking out clothes with you,' he told her as he left her room."

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2005 - 04:10 pm Title: CH 14 Part 2

Sounds kinda homey and domestic. LOVE THE TALE. more please.

Reviewer: Mariana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2005 - 04:20 am Title: CH 14 Part 2

sorry about not reviewing the past chapter...but you beat me to it ;) and that's awesome cos most writers don't update so frequently!! awesome story!! love the way you haven't made them have sex and/or a relashionship yet...they have so many feelings and situations to discover yet!! thanx so much!!

Reviewer: anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2005 - 03:53 am Title: CH 14 Part 2

active sleeper....haha. thats cute. luvd both chapters! cant wait for the next one!

Reviewer: Whitelighter354 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2005 - 03:52 am Title: CH 14 Part 2

Love the two chapters! Update soon!:)

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2005 - 03:42 am Title: CH 14 Part 2

I think I might be caught up now. Love how he pulled her into bed and said he was an active sleeper lol. He can be active with me --I mean Buffy, all he wants!

Author's Response: Amen to that! LOL! I think you're my 200th review! WOW!

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2005 - 02:57 am Title: CH 14 Part 2

Fun chapter! Loved it. "active sleeper"....hehehe

Reviewer: Brittney Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2005 - 01:03 am Title: CH 14 Part 2

Just like MarstersGirls13 said, it would be the perfect time for Giles to do his infamous glasses cleaning. lol Can't wait for them to get down to some action.

Reviewer: MarstersGirl13 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2005 - 12:20 am Title: CH 14 Part 2

ahh that was so cute!! both parts were!!! update really soon!! when will they finally get together??? i mean its already the 15th chappy. hopefully they will get hot and heavy at giles' house..that would be funny if he walked in on them..(here would come the classic glasses cleaning.) lol. update really soon!!!! i really love this story!! A LOT!!!

Reviewer: Lindsay Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2005 - 11:55 pm Title: CH 14 Part 2

eee i love it. So quality time for the two of em huh? Whatever will they do to pass the time lol? I hope its something Spuffy, even if its only a lil. Loved it, please post as soon as you can XXX

Reviewer: Melissa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2005 - 11:19 pm Title: CH 14 Part 2

Great update...its just getting better and better. I love the way Spike is so sweet to her. Keep it up....I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: flibble Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2005 - 11:18 pm Title: CH 14 Part 2

Yay!!! I'm still adoring this story. Can't wait to see what this weekend brings for our favourite couple.

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2005 - 09:14 pm Title: CH 14 Part 2

great update

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2005 - 07:58 pm Title: CH 14 Part 2

To get Spike to wake up was fun hehe. I'm glad that Buffy decided to come with Spike an Willow. Sounds like fun in Sunnydale. :)

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2005 - 07:41 pm Title: CH 14 Part 2

I love how their relationship is progressing. Great chapter!

Reviewer: Opal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2005 - 07:08 pm Title: CH 14 Part 2

They're getting closer....good update!

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