Date: 02/21/2006 - 05:02 am Title: Chapter 3
I really don't have a clue what that dream meant, but my goodness, that was amazing and well described imagery. I can only imagine what we'll find out about all those metaphors... or maybe its all things actually to come. Really great chapter with some very fun comic releif at the end. Marvelous.
Date: 07/16/2005 - 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 3
I wonder what this dream means... But at last they start talking .. maybe more in the next part, huh?
Author's Response: Yep, the next update they'll be talking about a lot of their issues.... I'm working on it now, so hopefully I should have the next part posted within the next couple days... Anyway, again thanks for the review and I'm glad you like the story so far! ~Jess
Date: 07/15/2005 - 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 3
great story!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you like it so far! ~Jess
Date: 07/15/2005 - 02:55 pm Title: Chapter 3
I think you have an interesting story here. I really like it so far.
Author's Response: Glad you like it! Thanks for your review! ~Jess
Date: 07/14/2005 - 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 3
loved it. this is gonna be sooo good. what am i saying?? it's already good. i bet it only gets better. post soon.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it so far... I have a lot planned for this story, so there'll be more coming soon.. ~Jess