Date: 10/05/2005 - 01:02 am Title: Chapter 2
Warren with Buffy? I have never seen that,but I'm glad it was only for back story. Cuz you know Spuffy gal here! Keep up the good work.
Date: 07/18/2005 - 10:03 am Title: Chapter 2
I do so love a good intrigue...
Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! I will try my best to update before the week is out!
Date: 07/18/2005 - 12:24 am Title: Chapter 2
good update i loved it
Author's Response: Thanks! Be on the lookout for another one soon :)
Date: 07/17/2005 - 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 2
Yay - I found the update! *smile*. BTW: I'm wondering why the letters are so small / stay so small if you try to make it bigger.. But on to the story:
Xander was fun - half asleep. But he came. A good friend. *smile* But her relationship with Warren? It's good she got out of it - in time. Earlier would have better... Oh - the journal.. I wonder if it came in the desk when William did it put in there.. Yay - I think it is so :) So I wonder if they will "talk" together like I saw before when writing both in the same book ... however - we'll see :)) I hope soon, but I'm patient.
Author's Response: I know I already answered you on LJ, but thanks for the review! I'm so glad you're enjoying and hope you will continue to!
Date: 07/17/2005 - 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 2
Nice story, not spooky with ghosts. Thanks for taking time to write why Buffy split with her last boyfriend. Many readers need this info if not for them, for someone they might know.
Will be looking for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! My beta reader said something very similar and that Buffy's reaction and defending of Warren was very realistic. It sucks that women get in positions like that, so if my story helps even one person out - well, that's just great.
Date: 07/17/2005 - 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 2
Ooooh loving this! The whole journal thing is really cute! =)
Author's Response: Thanks! :-D
Date: 07/17/2005 - 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 2
now the plot begins!! yippie!!! can't wait for more..great chapter!! thanx
Author's Response: You're welcome! :) And the plot will only continue to pick up from here, trust me!
Date: 07/17/2005 - 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 2
Just read the first two chapters. Please continue to write. This is a great story and is developing nicely.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! It's off to a somewhat slow start, with me trying to get all the backstory and exposition in, so I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Date: 07/17/2005 - 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 2
I really like the magical feel of the story. Can't wait for William and Buffy to start corresponding. Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! You won't have to wait very long - you'll get to read the start of it in the next chapter.
Date: 07/17/2005 - 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oooh...great ending to this chapter! Definitley sounds like Buffy could use some sweetness of William to help her heal from Warren. love the banter between Xander and Willow. Keep up the great work.
Author's Response: Thanks! That's just what I was thinking as well :)