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Reviewer: Delicia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2005 - 04:18 am Title: Chapter 6

Oh no! Bad feelings are never a good sign. I'm gonna go read the next chapter right away. Thanks,again!

Reviewer: Flibble Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/04/2005 - 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 6

Very powerful chapter. With the portrait and everything. So happy to see the 'magic' is still weaving its way through their lives. Those last paragraphs have me worried though. I'm thinking either Warren's going to make an appearance or William's mother is going to die. Can't wait to find out if I'm right.

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/04/2005 - 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 6

absolutely loving it still

Reviewer: Caitie Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/04/2005 - 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 6

Great chapter - well worthe the wait! Can't wait for more as soon as you're able to update. Take care, C ; )

Reviewer: chris Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/04/2005 - 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 6

Oh no!! please don't say things go wrong for them,just as they were getting on so well

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/04/2005 - 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 6

That was so sweet that she drew William's portrait. It's nice that he inspires her. It should be really interesting to find out how William will react to Buffy's letter. Can't wait to find out what ruins Buffy's day. Great chapter!

Reviewer: Opal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/04/2005 - 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 6

Awesome. I can't wait to read William's response.

Reviewer: Liz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/04/2005 - 05:25 pm Title: Chapter 6

Loved it! More soon!

Reviewer: Liz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/04/2005 - 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 6

Loved it! More soon!

Reviewer: Emma Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/04/2005 - 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 6

LOVE it! Oooh, but - cliffhanger! What's going to happen next? PLEASE update again soon! PLEASE!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm working on chapter 7 right now and will have it out to you all ASAP!

Reviewer: TammyDevil666 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/04/2005 - 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 6

Okay, a little worried about that last line. I just really hope that Warren won't come back in the picture and ruin things for her. Ewww, I still can't imagine her ever dating him. Anyway, I'm really enjoying this story and I get all happy when I see it updated. I like that we get to see what Buffy's feeling and everything, but I would also like to read about what William is feeling. We only really get to see what he writes, which is also good, but I'm interested to know if he's starting to have feelings for her like she is for him. Then again, this is William we're talking about. Maybe it would be cool if Buffy could put a picture of herself in the journal or something, so that maybe he'll get it and see what she looks like. He could do the same to see if the picture she drew really looks like him. I'm thinking it does. Okay, that was a bit much. Just a few ideas, really love the story=)

Author's Response: I know - isn't Warren just gross? Which is why he was the perfect character for an abusive boyfriend in my story - I think it's the first time I've ever read Buffy and Warren together. Anyway, you'll get to read more on William's side next chapter. I like to concentrate on Buffy more since it's more about HER changing that William right now, but I'll give him plenty of deep thinking time as well! :)

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