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Reviewer: Cassiopea Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2005 - 10:11 am Title: Chapter 17: 'Heaven and Hell'

This story is absolutely lovely . Their first time was written thougthfully and sweetly , it was beautiful. Their morning after was delightful as well !
A balm to the heart.

Author's Response: Thank you. Hint following in the form of a question: Do you suppose that Spike left Buffy with something more then a pleasant memory? Tee hee....... spuf

Reviewer: Chelsea Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2005 - 05:54 am Title: Chapter 17: 'Heaven and Hell'

Good Spuffy and icky Caleb. I'm pretty sure Buffy says yes, but who knows with her. Awesome job, Spuffette!

Author's Response: Thanks, you're probably right (about the yes!) spuf

Reviewer: DK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/17/2005 - 01:53 am Title: Chapter 17: 'Heaven and Hell'

The tenderness of Spike and Buffy was great. Caleb has shown his true colors to some of the residents of the town. Let Parker use his knife on him for hurting Harmony. Keep updating this wonderful story. Let them see Mexico.

Author's Response: Thank you. Caleb will get his ugly due, however, it won't be for a while. spuf

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/17/2005 - 01:50 am Title: Chapter 17: 'Heaven and Hell'

So... Caleb is disgusting. And pretty much the whole town lusting after Buffy and using Harmony in that way . .. . lol. Love the Spuffyness :)

Author's Response: I thought that would be a nice touch. It also gives a hint to the sickness that Caleb has and how he would have abused our Buffy! Thanks spuf

Reviewer: Noelle Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2005 - 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 17: 'Heaven and Hell'

Aw, I love this story. I really hope Buffy says yes! And Caleb is even sicker than he was on the show.

Author's Response: Thanks. Caleb is a monster. spuf

Reviewer: Allison Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2005 - 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 17: 'Heaven and Hell'

LOL I love the fact Angel thought they were having a fight and not... you know;) And Cordy's reaction to that was cute and dead-on for her character, as was Giles'. Buffy and Spike are just so cute together! Caleb is one sadistic freak and needs to be put down very soon. I can't wait to see what Buffy says in referral to Spike's question/proposal- it had better be a yes!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading. Spoiler alert: Don't be too worried about Buffy's answer, I mean, this is Spike we're talking about here! spuf

Reviewer: jt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2005 - 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 17: 'Heaven and Hell'

Loved the chapter. Hope Caleb gets exactly what he deserves soon. I'm sure it won't be soon, but one can hope.

Author's Response: Thank you. Caleb's time is running out in one way or another. spuf

Reviewer: Reciprocity Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2005 - 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 17: 'Heaven and Hell'

i so totally love this fic! i hope they get married and live happily ever after..*sigh* i only started reading recently for the breathless awards, but i was pleased to see an update which was really awesome and sweet - they're so adorable together.

hope you update soon, take care : )

Author's Response: Thank you. There are some rough bumps on the way to paradise for Spike and Buffy. spuf

Reviewer: Cassiopea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2005 - 11:54 am Title: Chapter 12: 'The Magic: Love And Desire'

Again a wonderful reading with several chapters. Graham is scary in a way , but Spike is always there to protect Buffy; I love this side of him. You captured very well Buffy's casualness , her feelings developing into sweeter and more tender ones for Spike. It's so lovely.

Author's Response: Thank you. Buffy and Spike will grow closer, daily. spuf

Reviewer: Irishwoman39 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/13/2005 - 03:06 pm Title: Chapter 16: 'Paradise'

Well that was so sweet.So spike and Buffy became one,as the saying gos!"Im sorry I didnt review until now,But once I start a fic,I like to keep on going untill I reach the last chapter.I know this is not the last,but it is for now.Cant wait untill you post the next chapter,got to find out what happens to the gang,Spike and Buffy??Also Buffys mom,dad,dawn,and little hank.Not to mention that rotton Caileb.next chapter please.

Author's Response: That's okay. I kind of do the same thing sometimes. In the next few chapters, Spike and Buffy will bond even more. Unfortunately, the posse is closing in and Graham is going to pose an even bigger problem to our couple. Thanks again, spuf

Reviewer: Mole Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/13/2005 - 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 16: 'Paradise'

Mean cliffhanger!!!

Author's Response: Yeah, I'm a stinker, huh? Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: Irishwoman39 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/13/2005 - 02:38 am Title: Summary & Prologue: 'The Sunday Social'

Good start.

Author's Response: Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: Cassiopea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/12/2005 - 06:19 am Title: Chapter 8: 'Consequences'

Thanks for reposting the chapter 5! I 've read four chapters in a row , and it was very nice. I like how the events are unfolding , even if it's upsetting to know that now that the sheriff is dead , their situation is worse. I love the interactions between Spike and Buffy , and how she slowly responds to his seduction. He's already so possessive! This is something I enjoy in your Spike. :) The background story of his mother and sister was truly terrible. I love this very much!

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing this story. I'm kind of a sucker for period pieces and I'm glad that readers to enjoy them. spuf

Reviewer: Chelsea Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2005 - 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 16: 'Paradise'

You definitely captured the sweet and sexy first time vibe, but I can't wait for more passion. This is an awesome fic and I'm really enjoying it.

Author's Response: Passion shall happen. Spike and Buffy are getting to know each other, sexually, as well as spiritually! Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: greyangel Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2005 - 12:22 pm Title: Chapter 16: 'Paradise'

Well you were aiming for nice and sweet and as far as I'm concerned you achieved it...coz it was all kinds of sweet...though I should complain that we didn't get to read the whole thing...and I sure hope they got their climax coz we didn't...lol. Now, will they be making a mad dash to the nearest priest to marry and put the cherry (no pun intended...lol) on the cake in this sweet tale...I sure hope so, it would seem fitting for these two...Spike being all chivalrous is bound to want to claim her properly...more soon, please!

Author's Response: Thanks. Yeah, like I told Franchesca, I'm not a big fan of virgin Buffy in my stories. I like the passion that Spuffy burned the screen up with, but the problem is that she would be a virgin in this story. Most likely that is. I'm not so sure that all the brides back then could officially wear white (if you know what I mean.) However, I have to assume that if single girls lost their virginity, it was probably to their future spouses? Anyway, now that the initial deed is done, the passion can begin! Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2005 - 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 16: 'Paradise'

absolutely loved it more please

Author's Response: Thank you. More soon, spuf

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2005 - 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 16: 'Paradise'

Awe, that was so sweet! Thanks for some spuffy lovin'. BTW - are you the spuf on LJ? Because when you comment you're not logged in. :) Thanks tor the update!

Author's Response: Thank you . Yes I believe it's me on the lj. I'm under anon and need to really log in from now on. Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: Franchesca Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2005 - 11:38 am Title: Chapter 16: 'Paradise'

I liked the chapter, but I think I would have rather seen Spike more sure of himself. I'm not a big fan of making Buffy a virgin in fanfic, but I know that it was completely necessary in this fic. I've never really thought of losing your virginity as romantic, so it's probably just me. But it definitiely was sweet and sexy and it sounds like that was exactly what you were going for.

Author's Response: Thank you. And I'm glad you picked up on Spike's insecurities. I have a feeling men back then were confused when it came to dealing with the women they truly loved and sex. Considering most single men probably had to pay for sex, routinely, they were probably completely stumped when it came to the women they eventually loved and ended up with. Or so I think, anyway. As to Buffy being a virgin? Yeah, I am not comfortable with it either.That's why in SYC, I made her a widow so Spike and her wouldn't have to go through all the drama of her first time. Anyway thank you for sticking with the story! spuf

Reviewer: Noelle Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2005 - 03:20 am Title: Chapter 16: 'Paradise'

Aw, that was sweet. I'm glad Buffy went through with it and that she plans on staying with him on her own free will. Great update, can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Yeah, that Spike. He just holds sway over Buffy. Well, just holds sway over him too so I guess it's a match made in well...Paradise? Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: DK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2005 - 03:11 am Title: Chapter 16: 'Paradise'

That was beautiful. A gentleman he is. Thank you for a wonderful chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks. I wanted to make Spike a bit insecure about this. He's used to jaded women and Buffy is a really quite innocent. (Well, she was anyway...tee hee) spuf

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2005 - 02:39 am Title: Chapter 16: 'Paradise'

I love how Buffy just blurted out she 'touched herself down there' while they were in the middle of foreplay lol. Sounds like something I would have done lol. It was so cute and sweet! It was like she was saying "I love you and trust you enough now to tell you my deepest secrets and here you go. .. " So great. I know, such a small thing to pick out, but that's what struck me. Great job!

Author's Response: I thought that would be a Buffy thing to do. She always tried so hard to cover her emotions that when they boiled to the surface, they usually really boiled! Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: Allison Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2005 - 02:39 am Title: Chapter 16: 'Paradise'

I loved it! I think it was sweet and sexy and pretty realistic for the time period, especially for both of them to act the way they did and say what they said. Excellent sex scene!:)

Author's Response: Thank you. I hope I caught some of Spike's insecurities and explained them a little. spuf

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2005 - 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 15: 'A Clean, Comfy Loft'

So they traveled along. I must say, I love your Cordelia; she was like a fresh breeze. *gg* Seize the day :) Looking forward to the next chapter - as always.

Author's Response: Thanks. I wanted a friendly Cordelia who helps Buffy out. spuf

Reviewer: Cassiopea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2005 - 11:49 am Title: Chapter 15: 'A Clean, Comfy Loft'

I started to read this story this morning , and i'm enjoying it very much. I read until chapter 4 and noticed that the next ch. 5 was missing. I suppose it happened when the site had some problems in August ? .

Author's Response: AhhhGGGG!!! You're right! I re-checked this and discovered my faux pas! I will try to rectify this as soon as I can at home. Thank you for pointing this out. Thanks for reading and reviewing also, spuf

Reviewer: Noelle Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2005 - 03:55 am Title: Chapter 15: 'A Clean, Comfy Loft'

Great start for the next chapter!! Please update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you. I hope I can do Spuffy lovin' justice! spuf

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