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Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2005 - 09:07 pm Title: Chapter 12: 'The Magic: Love And Desire'

Very sweet chapter. Poor Spike and what he had to go through...bastards!! Can't wait for more :)

Author's Response: Thank you. I want Spike and Buffy bonding before they uhm, you know! spuf

Reviewer: greyangel Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2005 - 03:49 pm Title: Chapter 12: 'The Magic: Love And Desire'

And yet more sweetness....awww!...but what will happen what the dad catches up with them? will she go home or stay with Will? And when are you going to kill off Caleb...coz, he sooo has to die....I await the next installment with hands suitably clasped to my breast (1880 style) while sitting on the edge of my 2005 chair...LOL...loved it, want more, need more...real soon ;-)

Author's Response: Thanks. I love the whole 1880 hand over breast gesture! It reminds me of my 14 year old daughter (we always accuse her of getting the vapors! She is so dramatic!) The question is, will Buffy have a choice in the matter, if the posse catches up with them??? spuf

Reviewer: Allison Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2005 - 03:38 pm Title: Chapter 12: 'The Magic: Love And Desire'

Excellent job with capturing their emotions in this chapter- hearing more details about Spike's history was nice, although it was heartbreaking. He's lived through so much already and deserves to have something good in his life, like Buffy. And if I find out Caleb is in any way connected to what happened in Spike's past, I'll kill him myself LOL As for Buffy and Spike 'doing the deed', I fully support it because I think they're beginning to understand one another now and truly have feelings for each other. Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you. Caleb is simply a pri**! Don't worry, someone will give Caleb his comeuppance! Boo had an interesting suggestion about the Spuffy sex thing. Wait until Mexico or at least a bed! It would be nice if Spike and Buffy had a bed, huh??? spuf

Reviewer: Boo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2005 - 06:52 am Title: Chapter 12: 'The Magic: Love And Desire'

ummmmmmm, have her wait, wait till they get married, or at least to mexico and a bed.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing. Yeah, I'm a little unsure about the Spuffy sex. This is 1876 and all??? spuf

Reviewer: DK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2005 - 02:59 am Title: Chapter 12: 'The Magic: Love And Desire'

Thanks for the update. You are giving us a view of the country like you rode over it.

Author's Response: Thank you. You caught me. I have ridden over alot of Utah, but not on a horse! It was in a rented Camry some years ago. Unfortunately, when I saw the Great Salt Lake, it was the dead of winter and the entire lake was covered in foglike haze. Still pretty impressive though, for Buffy especially since she has never seen the ocean. Thanks again, spuf

Reviewer: noelle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2005 - 02:19 am Title: Chapter 12: 'The Magic: Love And Desire'

another great update

Author's Response: Thank you, more soon. spuf

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2005 - 01:59 am Title: Chapter 12: 'The Magic: Love And Desire'

excellent update i think that she should giver herself to him in the next chapter but thats my opinon its up to you

Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I'm still a little unsure about this. spuf

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2005 - 03:18 am Title: Chapter 11: 'Bad Girl Buffy'

so glad to see an update. I like how adult buffy is and how she's going into it with an open mind and open heart. Great job.

Author's Response: Thanks. Buffy is pretty adult in this fic. She's going to need a little more gentle persuasion from Spike though! spuf

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2005 - 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 11: 'Bad Girl Buffy'

Oh I hope Joyce won’t fall for Caleb’s lies! Eew.. I hope Dawn couldn’t read Caleb’s mind and saw his thoughts! Buffy can be glad that she won’t marry him! Spike is better anyway for her! ;-) Love them together – and Buffy opens up more and more to him. TNX for the update. I really looking forward to read more!

Author's Response: No, Joyce will not fall for Caleb. He's becoming pretty transparent now. Spike and Buffy still have a ways to go, don't worry things will get better for them. Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2005 - 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 10: 'The Talk'

So you talked your husband out of the camping? Tsk tsk – but in a way I’m glad you did :-D And Miss I will read later! On to the chapter: Poor William – Buffy does have kind of an effect on him, huh? ;-) Awe, and they talked!

Author's Response: Yes, I did. Thank you for sticking with this fic. spuf

Reviewer: Allison Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2005 - 02:39 pm Title: Chapter 11: 'Bad Girl Buffy'

Excellent update! I'm happy Joyce is tough and is willing to shoot Caleb LOL And that man is more vile than I thought:( I hope he contracts some weird STD or something from that woman at the Red Garter that he wants to... spend time with. As for Buffy, I'm happy things are going well for her and Spike right now, but I know eventually things will go downhill.

Author's Response: Joyce is cool, even in this fic. Caleb is just plain creepy! Thank you, spuf

Reviewer: Heaven Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2005 - 01:09 pm Title: Chapter 11: 'Bad Girl Buffy'

I really like both the fics you are working on. I like stuff based in the past. Can't wait for more :)

Author's Response: Thank you. I love period fics and enjoy writing them! More soon. spuf

Reviewer: Mole Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2005 - 09:11 am Title: Chapter 11: 'Bad Girl Buffy'

Hi! Glad to see the update. Well done! I have to emphasis my dislike for Caleb again. That guy is so sick and twisted. Hopefully, nobody is falling for his facade ever again.

Author's Response: Caleb is a pri**! Thank you for reading and reviewing. spuf

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2005 - 06:33 am Title: Chapter 11: 'Bad Girl Buffy'

good update

Author's Response: Thank you! spuf

Reviewer: DK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2005 - 04:00 am Title: Chapter 11: 'Bad Girl Buffy'

Mini cliffhanger for us? Wanted to hear what Spike had to say, maybe next time. Have someone knock off Caleb, please??? Great chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks. Spike will explain more about his family to Buffy. It's not pretty. spuf

Reviewer: greyangel Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2005 - 12:47 pm Title: Chapter 10: 'The Talk'

Yep, that chapter was equally as good as the last...sweet, sweet and then getting hotter...i hope the next chapter will see them exploring things a bit more...loved it can't wait for more...

Author's Response: Thank you. Since I'm depressed (for lots of reasons) I've decided to speed up the Spuffy in this fic of mine as well! Look for some twisted insight into Caleb in the next chapter. But...on a lighter note? Buffy just might be relenting soon! spuf

Reviewer: greyangel Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2005 - 11:28 am Title: Chapter 9: 'On The Trail To Mexico'

I just read your reply to cordykitten for ch9 and I think your husband is a sweet guy for lying to you...'the cat got the mouse' but he must've wanted to spare your girly feeling...awww!

Author's Response: Yeah, he's a peach! Thank you. spuf

Reviewer: greyangel Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2005 - 11:25 am Title: Chapter 9: 'On The Trail To Mexico'

Oh I loved the swim...very much...and the rat...LOL...and Spike's a bit of a rat himself, tricking sweet innoncent Buffy by letting her believe the rat is a threat...LOL...MEN!!! The things they'll do, just to get a little touch...loved the chapter...it was both sweet and funny and I won't object to more of that...and now I'm off to read ch10, where I hope to find more...LOL

Author's Response: I always try to get a Spuffy swim in these! Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: nip1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2005 - 04:15 am Title: Chapter 10: 'The Talk'

Liked your plot and how love seems to transend all borders for our favourite couple. You happen to make the era come alive for me. Great writing.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like it! spuf

Reviewer: DK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2005 - 01:41 am Title: Chapter 10: 'The Talk'

Just one question-what type of birth control did they use then? This was a nice chapter. Didn't like Caleb going to her mom's house though.

Author's Response: I wondered when someone was going to ask a period piece author(ess) that question!!! That's an interesting question and I'll try to give you some answers (in my limited knowledge that is). Condoms were pretty common then, however, they were not made of latex, of course. I've heard they were made of sheep's bladders, etc. Yuck! Many Indian tribes, African tribes and hence American's had some access to forms of birth control. I think it was more of a religious issue in some cases. My own granny worked for a doctor, in a small town. When I got older, she told me things the doctor had relayed to her about ways to decrease the chance of pregnancy and all. My grandmother had five children, only, and her mother had twelve, so I have to think the old doc knew something! I imagine that most married couples did not practice birth control, per say. The rythym (sp?) method was popular, but alas, not very accurate. I'm thinking that condoms were used by men who went to prostitutes, etc. For disease control more then anything. So, I'm betting that when authors like me write period pieces and have Spuffy sex in them? It's a pretty good chance that there will be a little Spike or Buffy in the picture, soon! Thanks spuf

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2005 - 04:47 pm Title: Chapter 10: 'The Talk'

Very sweet chapter between our favorite duo. And Dawn doesn't know how right she is about Buffy being changed and probably not wanting to come home...love it, More!

Author's Response: Dawn's pretty smart in this. Buffy is falling in love and she'll realize it soon. Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: Allison Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2005 - 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 10: 'The Talk'

LOL I'd love to see some major Spuffyness, but I'll wait patiently because let's not forget- Buffy's young, it's the late 1800s, and she's virtuous... mostly:) I loved seeing Spike be so sweet towards her, and I'm looking forward to what happens next with them!

Author's Response: Well, yes, it's the 1870's, but I'm hoping to update Buffy a bit! Tee hee. Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: Mole Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2005 - 02:14 pm Title: Chapter 10: 'The Talk'

Glad to see the update so fast! Good thing you canceled the camping trip! What a sweet and promising chap! Can't wait for the next one. Great work!

Author's Response: Yeah, me and camping! Thank you. spuf

Reviewer: Suzee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2005 - 02:04 pm Title: Chapter 10: 'The Talk'

This is such a sweet story....and don't give up on your other fic...I just haven't started reading it yet because there's no way I can possibly follow yet another WIP at the moment...great job on this one though....

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm trying to write the next chapter of 'The Marker' series. I hope it captures readers' attention! spuf

Reviewer: Spikes gal pal Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2005 - 09:01 am Title: Chapter 10: 'The Talk'

This is my First Review and I can't be more pleased to review Redemption. Its a wondrful story ,I love Spike and Buffy's interaction and can't wait for them to get together,but I love it teasingly slow. Can't wait for Spike to kick Caleb's butt ,and show Spike and the gang are realy goodies and not the baddies everyone think they are.

Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I love period pieces, however, they don't always do well. Buffy is definitely weakening! spuf

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