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Date: 11/06/2005 - 09:51 am Title: Heroes Defined

Oh my.. it's hard to read these chapters - so Spike is near dying now. And Spike will pay a high price (the meeting) - is it his death? And Angel *sigh* he is so wrong. If he only would stop to interfere what Spike wants.

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Date: 11/06/2005 - 02:32 am Title: Dandelion Wine

I like the "magic flowers" message Homer is giving to Buffy. How clever of Spike to find a loophole in his promise to not reveal himself. I really enjoyed the way Homer gave Angel the wiggins. Didn't Joni tell Angel to say away from her Mom... why is he still hanging around? I almost wish Joni would catch him so she could slap him around a little. Good update!

Author's Response: What can I say? Spike is the king of the grey area! I loved wigging Angel out. ;-)

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Date: 11/05/2005 - 11:51 pm Title: Dandelion Wine

I loved how Spike is trying to communicate with Buffy through flowers. So sweet. *sigh* But what is up with the 2003 date at the beginning? Joni wasn't born yet? Was that a mistake, or am I just still majorally not getting stuff? And then Spike remembered that memory in 2005 when Joni is a baby. Hmmm, is Spike reliving things agian? God, I'm sorry I'm so confused with things. It must be so annoying for you to keep explaining everything.

Author's Response: Oookay let's start with the basics. Remember on "Angel" ghosty spike kept popping out of W&H? Well, in my story, Joyce made sure he landed with Joni so he'd have a reason to fight later. Ghostly Spike was Joni's imaginary friend. But kids are intuitive. She knows deep down that Spike is her Daddy. Keep in mind that Joyce wouldn't have had to meddle with things if Joni hadn't tried that spell in the beginning. Joni was born, but do you remember the dreams about a little girl that Spike started having soon after Dru went dusty? Those were about Joni. 2005 Spike has recognized Joni as the girl from his dreams, and is now using his "memories " to try and avoid the things that "Interregnum" Spike and Buffy wish they could change. Keep reading maybe it will be clearer to you? :-)

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Date: 11/04/2005 - 02:03 pm Title: Generational Curse

I have a sense of deja-vu for the first part of the chapter. :) I just chan't get over Angel thinking he is doing the right thing. *shakes head*

Author's Response: I know you are:-) but are things starting to make more sense?

Reviewer: M.G. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/03/2005 - 11:59 pm Title: Generational Curse

Wow! Your muse must be working on overtime. Three spankin' new updates each only one day apart... lucky us! I really like how you're using the "deja vu" concept to move the story along. You weren't kidding when you said all the answers were in the Interegnum but all mixed up. Can't wait to learn more about "Plan B" Great chapter!

Author's Response: And still more on the way soon! I live in Ohio, so it's hot chocolate weather here. I keep my muse happy with the chocolate, he hrlps me keep you happy with new stuf to read. ;-)

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Date: 11/02/2005 - 05:05 am Title: What If

After reading your answer to the previous review I gotta ask is Homer a vamp? I thought he was an old man. I think i'll go read all the Homer moments at once to get a better grasp of things. The Homer & Joni interaction is so bittersweet... but I really enjoyed it. Poor Spike so close yet still so far. Good update!

Author's Response: He *looks* like a harmless old man to the outside, but you will notice he kind of sticks to the shadows. That could be just habit, what do you think? There are times when Joni gets a glimpse of who's under the facade. Also, if he ever encounters the widow Dustin? Well, let's just say, the gig could be up. ;-)

Reviewer: SinisterChic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/01/2005 - 10:36 pm Title: What If

Okay, I knew Homer was Spike. But why is he not allowed to tell her it is him? And this second chance, is that the present timeline? Or the future that we just saw?

Author's Response: Okay, remember in the chapter "Marigolds" Buffy made a wish? "Homer" promised not to reveal his "true" self,(read Spike) until she made that wish. If he blabs the Higher ups may revoke his chance at the Shansu. Follow me now? ;-)

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Date: 11/01/2005 - 12:37 am Title: Heroes Defined

Oh, I read your response to the other review. Good thing you will explain a little. Thanks, cuz I'm a tad confused. I'm still enjoying it as much as ever, though

Author's Response: O.K. just as a hint: Have you ever had a sense of deja vu?

Reviewer: M.G. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/31/2005 - 05:10 pm Title: Heroes Defined

Nice twist that the big meeting Joyce was referring to was the one in "Glass." Very clever of you. I can't wait to learn more about the "wish" that came out of the meeting and to find out what Angel is up to now. Spike's thoughts on Joni really touched my heart. Great chapter!

Author's Response: I'm glad you can follow the twists in this story. I will be bringing Homer in to explain some things soon. '-) Keep reading please.

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/29/2005 - 04:01 pm Title: Consequences Of Being

Awe - I love the Spike - Jony scenes like this one) Oh my.. there's a meeting? *sigh* I hope it will lead to good things.

Author's Response: Yes there was a meeting, and there were consequences. But there were unexpected blessings too. Keep reading.

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/29/2005 - 03:29 pm Title: Love And Reason

M.G. is right - Buffy smiling at the end of the Series was odd. It didn't really fit. She knew she lost Spike, couldn't be sure he would went to heaven or hell but was smiling? Well... tell me about open ends. What did Joyce do? ..And Spike knows npw who Joni is. Did Joyce sent Spike to her (Joni) *wonders*

Author's Response: Joyce did indeed introduce Spike to his future "Best Girl."

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Date: 10/29/2005 - 02:37 pm Title: Atlas Squared

Sorry - I'm behind some chapters but catching up now. So Spike was gone longer when he vanished? And visited his 'Dove' too during one journey. Loved it :)

Author's Response: present day (2005) Spike will be thinking more about his ghostly visits with Joni. He may know more about the coming threat than he thinks he does.

Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/29/2005 - 09:46 am Title: Consequences Of Being

Man this story is great. Best I've read in a long time. Can't wait for the next update.

Author's Response: Glad you like it Spacelord. Sometimes I wonder if anyone can follow the twists and turns of this mad scientist's mind. I have my regular readers whom I love. But it's nice to have new ones too.

Reviewer: SinisterChic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/28/2005 - 12:10 pm Title: Consequences Of Being

I've been so busy I haven't had time to read your story. So I had 3 wonderful chapters to get through. I was disappointed when I got to the last one. They went too quick. I love the new dreams from 2003. All these timelines are hard to keep clear, though. I'm sure it will all come together in the end.

Author's Response: The 2003 timeline is only one day. I chose that day because that was the day the "Angel" episode "Unleashed" aired. (That's the one where Spike disapeared for hours) When he disapeared from W&H he visited Joni. Present day Spike is using what he learned from *his* past to help navigate through the future. Now that that's as clear as smoke...keep reading please.

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Date: 10/27/2005 - 09:20 am Title: Consequences Of Being

I loved the father/daughter scene between ghostly Spike and five year old Joni... it was very touching. I'm really looking forward to Spike's big meeting. Great chapter as always!

Author's Response: Thanks. I loved it too and I wrote the thing! Glad you're enjoying the story.

Reviewer: jeanie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2005 - 10:27 pm Title: Consequences Of Being

good story. kind of hard to follow getting it chapter by chapter. but once its finished then i can read it all at once. please update soon

Author's Response: hanks Jeanie. You're right, it is best to read a story all at once. But please keep reading as I update.

Reviewer: M.G. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2005 - 07:53 pm Title: Love And Reason

Heartbreaking picture you painted of Buffy's grief, but it feels right. I always wished the series hadn't ended on Buffy's smiling face and the Scoobies boasting about "how they did it"... it really left a bad taste in my mouth. Plus your take on things makes a great explanation as to why Buffy wanted nothing to do with Angel. Excellent chapter!

Author's Response: The end of "Chosen" on screen left me wanting to *Punch* someone. So, I wrote what I thought was a more compassionate ending.

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Date: 10/19/2005 - 02:04 am Title: Atlas Squared

Thanks for revealing one of the things Joyce has done to help Spike. I just love when the puzzle pieces of the story fit together. Great chapter. Can't wait to find out what we'll learn next!

Author's Response: You're very welcome. :-)

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/15/2005 - 11:29 am Title: Falling Upward

This chapter was in parts heartbreaking - at the begin with Joni missing Spike (speaking with Homer) and the other part when they were waiting for Spike to die. Looking forward to read on - so I can hope it will get better.

Author's Response: Hint: does anyone remember Sirk's spiel in "Destiny?" It could be important.

Reviewer: SinisterChic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2005 - 01:43 pm Title: Falling Upward

That part in 2027 broke my heart. I just don't know how this can all turn out right. *bites lip* But I'm keeping the faith in your wonderful talents

Author's Response: I keep telling you , Spike's a smart fella. He's changing things just by being the big-hearted guy he is. So much has changed that Holland and the Senior Partners have to go to "Plan B." So, stop biting you lip, you could draw blood. (Which would be nice for Spike, and you, of course, but that's beside the point;-))

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Date: 10/13/2005 - 08:47 pm Title: Falling Upward

Wow! You must've answered my question just when I posted the new one. LOL... how ironic! Thanks for answering my questions though.

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Date: 10/13/2005 - 08:42 pm Title: Falling Upward

I just reread the chapter and I realized Homer must look like an older version of Spike. So I take my earlier question back... instead i'll ask how old is he? Again sorry if i'm kinda pesty. I'm really enjoying the story... it's just that I love hunting for clues.

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Date: 10/13/2005 - 08:18 pm Title: Falling Upward

A constant eclipse... what a perfect way to sum up what's going on for Buffy, Joni and Spike. Gotta say I was a bit disappointed Joni didn't recognize Homer as Spike *sighs* but all in good time I suppose. I'm glad you gave us insight into Spike's sacrifice. It's nice to know how he saved the Slayers. One question I know it's trival but... what does Homer look like? (Sorry if i'm a bit annoying with the questions) Great chapter. Can't wait to find out what 'Plan B' is!

Author's Response: M.G.- The reason I haven't descibed Homer yet is because I am trying to picture that myself. And if I don't know I can't tell you. (Hmmm.. What would Spike look like if he'd been a sixty or seventy year old man when Dru found him?)

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Date: 10/08/2005 - 11:31 am Title: Boggieman

The Interregnum confuses me a bit. Is Spike really going to hell, or is he metaphoring? And maybe I missed something, or you haven't said yet, but how exactly did Spike save Buffy from the illness in a previous chapter? I think it said he got the disease and that is how he died, but how did that save Buffy? And I'm also confused about how at the end of the chapter I described above, Buffy asked Spike to come back. He said 'I thought you'd never ask'. I got the impression he was going to return. Ugh, maybe you should give me a recap so I can get things straight. Anyways, I'm really enjoying the story, regardless.

Author's Response: Whew- ok let's see. First, the Interregnum is timelss, but everything you need to know is there. But, like talking to Dru, it's all mixed up. Because od what he did in "Prayers" , Spike no longer really has a soul. So in order to be eligible for the shanshu, he'll need some intervention from Joyce. (In the form of a *wish* maybe?;)) Now, as much as I love him, Spike can be a bit of a martyr. It is possible that, in an attempt to come up with a vaccine, he may have given himself the virus. Hope that clears things up a bit. Keep reading.

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Date: 10/08/2005 - 10:22 am Title: Boggieman

That is very hard - Spike can save Buffy, Joni and the whole world but he won't never see them (Buffy and Joni) again? That would break him. ~ The boogieman did have white her? I wonder if Joni saw Spike. ~ Oh - Talitha was the first victim of the virus. Then it is no wonder for me that Joni is imune.

Author's Response: Joni is having Slayer dreams. Hence the different face for daddy and the white hair. Being a Slayer puts Joni at risk for the virus, no parent wants to see their child ill. So, Spike is a little frightened. Now, *technichally* Spike doesn't have a soul, so the Powers could have a problem granting him the shanshu. That's why Joyce wants the special meeting. (maybe get him a special exception, like maybe a *Wish?*)

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